1.Original sentence : Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without an education, many of us believe, is an unfortunate victim of circumstances, deprived one of the greatest twentieth-century opportunities(新概念英语4 lesson33 "education")

My version: "Friends" is one of the key words of our time. A man without a friend, many of us believe, is an unfortune victim of circumstance, deprived of the greatest treasure. However, by which way should we make friends?

connection:20xx(Is it wise to make friends on-line)

2.Original sentence:There is only one difference between an old man and a young man: the young man has a glorious future before him and the old man has a splendid future behind him: and maybe that is where the rub is. (From "Youth "in the New Concept English)

my version:There is only one difference between making friends online and making friends in traditional way: the former can express our inside feelings freely without considering each other' statute, wealth, and so

on, however，the latter may prevent our inside feelings from springing up: and maybe that is where the rub is. That's why we prefer the former to make friends with others.

connection:20xx (Is it Wise to Make Friends Online )

3.Original sentence:The value of a man is not in his skin, that we should touch him.(Solitude-Henry David Thoreau)

My version:The value of a man is not how many he had,that how many he gave away to others.

Connection:20xx(The Benefits of Volunteering)

4.Original sentence: The purpose of the symposium, as i understood it, was to scrutinize the obligations of the media and suggest the best ways to meet those obligations. (A New English course Book 5.Unit 9 where is the news leading us.)

My version: The benefit of being a volunteer, as I understood it, was to realize the value of one person and

find the best way to meet some obligations.

Connection: (20xx The Benefits of Volunteering)

5.Original sentence:So stop waiting until you take your last test, until you finish school, until you go back to school, until you have the perfect body, the perfect car, or whatever other perfect thing you desire.

My version :So stop waiting until people in need cry for nothing, until disasters destroy our belongs as well as our hope, until you have the regrettable tears, the regrettable sighs, or whatever other regrettable moods you have without offering your helps to others.

Connection: (20xx The Benefits of Volunteering)

6.Original sentence: As food is to the body，so is learning to the mind.(大学英语六级写作 P122 “Learning:a lifelong career")

My version:As food is to the body, so is environment to the health.

Connection:20xx (Will Tourism Bring Harm to the environment)

7.Original sentence:The peer group has become television-oriented, and much of the time children spend together is occupied by television viewing.(高阅第5册 Unit5)

My version:The peer group has become tourism-oriented, and much of the time family spend together is occupied by traveling.

Connection:20xx(Will Tourism Bring Harm to the environment)

8.Original sentence:Indeed, hurry can be the assassin of elegance.(高阅第6 册unit2"the fine art of putting things off")

My version:Indeed, escaping the basic responsibility can be the assassin of all-round development. connection:20xx( should college students hire cleaners?)

9.Original sentence:A good carpenter is not distinguished by the number of his tools,but by the craftsmanship with which he uses them.(高阅第5册unit1"Hit the nail on the head")

My version: A good student is not distinguished by the scores he gets, but by the ability to develop in a all-round way.

connection:20xx(should college students hire cleaners?)

10.Original sentence: Many of the home electric goods which are advertised as liberating the modern woman tend to have the opposite effect, because they simply change the nature of work instead of eliminating it.(20xx专四真题 Text A)

My version: private car owners be taxed for pollution tend to have the opposite effect, because it simply rationalizing the pollution instead of improving the awareness of protecting environment.

Connection :20xx(Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed for Pollution)

 

第二篇：应用写作期中总结

期中总结

这学期是大一的第二个学期，我有幸接触了应用写作，在学习了应用写作这门课半个学期之后，自己的应用写作水平有了一定的提高，同时我自己也在我们八连中不断努力，争取共同进步。现具体总结如下：

一、工作回顾

1.应用文写作给我的认识。在这个学期里，我们的课程里多个一门我们从没接触过的课程，财经应用文。通过这学期的学习，让我们知道了很多东西。可以说是受益匪浅了吧。我们也知道在随着社会的飞速发展。人们越来越深刻的认识到了经济发展需要多元化、多层次的人才的。因此也要有一定的写作水平才行的，最少应该知道怎样写总结，写总结的格式又是如何的。这既是对自己前一段时间工作的肯定，也是让上级能够清楚的知道你在这段时间到底做了些什么、学到了什么、工作如何。这在以后我们步入社会，在公司上班，少不了也会写工作总结，或一些策划。经营方向策划等等的报告。这些报告写的好坏会直接影响到你在老板心目中的地位和印象的。如何才能把这些写好，让老板一看就能一目了然了的。对我们现在来说学好经济应用文写作是非常有必要的，也已是十分重要的，它既是岗位工作者必备的基本能力之一。也是我们学生要撑握的一门重要的必备写作总结的能力的一个评价，就举一些有关学校里的一些事做为例子好了。比如说我们的班长、团支书都要将活动总结报告给系团总支。这里也就会要求他们会写总结，光会写也没用的，还要知道要如何写，格式如何。总不能就是在哪里写流水账吧，这些都是有讲究的。这就要求我们要学会如何总结，如何更加规范化我们的语言。可见学好这门课程是多么的有用，多么的重要了。这都是我在经济应用文学后才知道的。

2. 只要努力按照老师的要求去做，就一定能做好。付出与收获是相辅相成的。一份耕耘一份收获，有付出就有收获。每次努力去完成老师和连队布置的任务，取得了不错的成绩，得到了连队内的同学和老师的肯定。记得老师第一堂课就跟我们说过：应用文写作，就犹如一个人的字，一个人字的好坏，就会给其他人不一样的印象，字体写得好的人，无论在日常生活中还是在职业生涯中都可以助你一臂之力，起到事半功倍的效果。老师这一席话正好踩到我的痛脚。因为字和文章都写得不好正是本人之短处，可是，我却并没有因此而更讨厌应用文写作

这门课，我应该正视自己的缺点，应用文刚好能补我之短，它能使我不断地改进自己，提升自我。每天都有进步是我最开心的事情，因为这预示着我离成功更近一步了。我觉得应用文写作是“死板”而不乏“灵活”的写作。它虽然有一定的格式和要求，不比得文学创作，个人可以有较大的发挥空间，但是我们学应用文也不能死记硬背、生搬硬套。像做填空题那样写出来的应用文，毫无感情可言。应用文不需要辞藻华丽、韵味隽永，它讲究一个“实”字，是“看似无情却有情”。这也是我逐渐喜欢上应用文的原因之一。

3. 加强团队意识，努力融入团队。我们四连由4个学员组成，每次老师布置的连队任务，我们都会一起进行讨论。我也会在讨论中，积极发言，提出自己的观点，自己所提出的一些好的建议也得到了连队其他成员的认可。此外，我还会认真地完成连长分配的任务，做好每一次的工作，以为我们整个连队做出一定的努力和贡献，能够让我们整个连队在营内更好地发展。

二、心得体会

个人是团队的基石，团队是个人的舞台。既然老师把我们一个班级作为一个营队来进行管理，又由众多的连队组成，那么，我们就要明白一个集体团队合作能力的重要性，一个团队只有有了很好的凝聚力，相互帮助、合作，一起努力，才能够促进整个团队的良好发展。以前的我，“个人主义”较强，以自我为中心。但在成立了这个连队之后，连长给我们每个学员布置不同的工作，然后再将每个学员的工作进行汇总，最后进行整理编辑以及总结每个学员的工作，这就十分要求我们每个学员做好自己的任务，有强烈的责任心，要为自己的团队努力，每时每刻意识到自己是团队中的一份子。

三、存在的不足及今后的打算

自己还有很多不足的地方需要改正，与应用写作这门课程相关的主要有：

1.对于该门课程的预习工作需要增多。对于应用写作这门课程虽然上课听得比较认真，且笔记也做得较详细，但由于自己各门课程时间安排不合理，使自己在这门课的预习工作时间上还有待增加。

2.与其他连队之间的交流、联系较少。每一次任务的完成都是自己连队成员之间进行讨论、总结，进而与其他连队之间的交流较少，不能与其他连队进行及时的经验总结。

下半个学期自己要做好如下的几件事情：

1.以后我们还要继续深入的学习应用文的写作，熟练地掌握每一种文体的写作方法。这样我们才能在职场上游刃有余，发展的更好。

2.要合理安排学习时间，特别是要增多应用写作的预习时间。只有做好了相关的预习准备工作，才能够在上课的听讲上更加有条理和针对性。