编筐编篓，重在收口，这是俗语。同样，一篇优秀的高考作文，除了需要引人入胜的开头之外，耐人寻味的结尾同样必不可少。那么，如何才能写出一个优秀的高考作文结尾呢

一、自然结尾收束式

即用事情的结果作为文章的结尾，事物叙述完了，文章随之结尾。

妈妈您对我的好就像芬香永存，女儿却只能做这些小事来纪念您，愿妈妈安息。（广东《芳香永存》）

二、总结全文点题式

再回眸处，再侧视时，再凝神望，生命的价值熠熠生辉，征程中，我们奔跑着，留下或多或少的痕迹，怀着独一无二的心情，追着太阳，追着浪潮，追着生命，追向心中的夏花灿烂处。

生如夏花般，开得无比绚丽。（湖南《生如夏花》）

可见，列夫托尔斯泰的名言"幸福之家各个相同，不幸之家各有各的不幸"也不必完全奉为真理。关于幸福的答案，同样是丰富多彩的。(《答案是丰富多彩的》)

三、抒情议论深化式

是啊！"会当凌绝顶，一览众山小"，不就昭示着豪迈的超然般的幸福

"采菊东篱下，悠然见南山"，不就阐述着闲适超然般的幸福

"我本楚狂人，凤歌笑孔丘"，不就演绎着狂傲超然般的幸福

啊，一双童鞋，超然一点，幸福多多。（湖北《一双童鞋》）

四、巧设反问启迪式

这两位病人，一位是商界奇才，钮扣大王TMMP，一位是网坛高手RODOC。你说是"老眼光"不认真观察，还是他们的"规范"和"创新"过火了一点儿（福建《两份病危通知单》）

五、委婉含蓄回味式

蓝天空旷，没有大雁飞过。

天空寂寞，人也寂寞。（刘长春《不见大雁》）

六、呐喊呼唤强调式

陆游曾说："谁能养气塞天地，吐出自足成虹霓。"即使你没有博大的思想，但你有意识，也就拥有了发言权，站起来吧，像王朔叫板金庸一样，舞出自我生命的亮点。(《吐出自足成虹霓》)

文无定法，文章的标题、开头、结尾可以灵活多样，以上内容，仅供参考。

写作提示

每个人都不可避免地有着自身的局限性，从用人的角度看，十全十美的完人是不存在的，关键在于如何对待别人的长处和短处以及自己的长处和短处。扬长避短是做人的基本原则，人与人之间是可以优势互补、密切协作的；同时见贤思齐，学习别人的优点、改正自己的缺点也是一种高贵的品质。

总结

拟写开头的具体要求：

1、片言居要，纲举目张

２、句句夺目，一见而惊

３、打开泉眼，文思滔滔

好的开头：短(简洁)，靓(精彩)，快(迅捷)

 

第二篇：高考英语作文经典句型总结

作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！

值得提醒同学们的是这份总结,包含了大部分的句型结构.对任何人的写作都有一定的帮助.但是请不要完全依赖这份总结.（更多更好的短语,句型需要自己在阅读中不断积累总结）. 高分作文标志

1：是否长短句交叉；

2、是否会使用插入语；

3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；

4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；

5、句型使用是否准确、地道。

下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：

1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾20xx年x月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?

3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,

people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)

下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I

By Simmy

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

exceedingly 替换 very

thrilling 替换 exciting

sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.

google 替换 search

an army of 替换 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a

fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；

Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular

Coincident with ? 非常地道的句型，表达“与?一致”的意思，替换 With ? Advancement 替换 development

Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into

Current ( currently )替换 now

Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.

Growing individuals 替换 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.

For a start 替换 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动

Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides

Deliver 替换 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语， function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to

Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing )

Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides

Computers do play ，do 强调

Positive 替换 important / good 等

A slice of 替换 a part of

Unfavorable 替换 bad

Impacts 替换 effects / influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of ? 使用插入语

Fruits 而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage )

Facet 替换 aspect

各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！

以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下：

1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)

2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising

(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good

3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad

如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换

eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.

4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many. 注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。

Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that?.同理 用most, if not all ,替换most. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some

6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,

hold the view that, it is widely shared that,

it is universally acknowledged that)替think

(因为是书面语，所以要加that)

7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing

8: shared 代 common

9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits )

10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion

11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.

Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.

Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.

12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly

13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,

14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer

15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very

16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换 unnecessary, avoidable

17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in

18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.

19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear

21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.

22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth

23.desire 替换want.

24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to

25.bear in mind that 替换remember

26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)

27. interaction替换communication

28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth

29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance

30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible

希望各位朋友能够在平时的学习中多总结精彩、地道的词汇和句型闪光点