【广东高考基础写作】

如何写人物简介

一、写作指导

高考英语基础写作中的写人侧重人物的介绍，可以用第一人称(如写求职信)，也可以用第三人称，时态常常用一般现在时和一般过去时，具体的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来确定。写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题：

1．人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面，但英语基础写作需要严格按照写作要求来写，包括所给的全部信息点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。

2．对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点信息。重点信息通常是写作的目的所在，比如求职要重点突出学历、经历，新闻报道要重点突出事迹，介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点，等等。

3．正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。

4．注意运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。

二、常用词语

外貌特征：

beautiful, big nose, black eyes，fat, good-looking，funny-looking( 滑稽的 ; 样子好笑的 ugly-looking handsome, healthy, near-sighted，ordinary-looking， pretty，short，strong, weak, tall， thin, with a big nose, with a big smile, white-haired，1.80 metres tall, weighing 52 kgs etc.

性格特点：

absent-minded(心不在焉 ), attractive，

bad-tempered(脾气不好的 ; 脾气暴燥的 )，bright，charming，confident, diligent，friendly, generous, humorous，independent, kind, kind-hearted，lazy，

narrow-minded(.心胸狭窄的 ), naughty，patient， wise，smart，clever,

talkative喜欢说话的,健谈的 ，

warm-hearted，

think of others,

be ready to help others,

have a strong will ，

have a good temper, etc.

出生年龄：

…a twenty-five-year-old young man,

As a boy of 15, he…

At the age of 20, he/she…

…be born on February 12th, 1987 ,

During his childhood, he…

in one’s fifties,

… live a happy/ hard life,

… spend his childhood in the countryside,

the son of a poor family,

when he was a small boy, he…

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兴趣爱好：

? be delighted in doing,

? be interested in English,

? be fond of music,

? enjoy doing,

? be crazy about,

? be pleased with,

? be sick for,

? be sorry for,

? be worried about, feel surprised at,

? expect to do, wish to do, have a strong desire to do,

? look forward to doing sth., long for (long to do),

make rapid/great progress in,

take pleasure in doing(以…为荣/非常喜欢…);

put one’s heart into,

work hard at his studies,

be strict in one’s work,

do well in his research work,

be good at singing etc.

教育背景：

be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test, get/receive/gain a bachelor’s /master’s/doctor’s degree, get on well with one’s lessons, give sb. a passing grade, go abroad for further study, graduate from Physics Department of Qinghua University, his father was very strict with him, lay a good foundation in English, major in history, pass the examination, study hard at, take several courses at school, take an active part in class，when at college, etc.

生平经历：

become a member of the team, concentrate oneself on doing sth., devote oneself to one’s business, do sth with great determination and perseverance, do research into this field, encourage sb to do sth, fight for our revolutionary course, give up one’s life for sth, have a good way of doing sth, have a talent for language, make up one’s mind to do sth., overcome many difficulties, receive the Nobel Prize for physics, serve as a nurse, set a new world record of 110-metre hurdling, try one’s best to do sth., win the first prize in the competition, win a gold /silver/ bronze medal, etc.

? 他人评价：

。。。is an inspiring leader/ a model worker,/an advanced teacher,

… be respected by all his students, be honored as, be considered as, be famous/known as, be regarded as,

His hard work brought him great success.

。。。make great contributions to our country

…one of the most important persons in the past ten years.

… consider sb. as a genius

… consider sb. as the greatest leader.

… set a good example to all of us.

…think/speak highly of him, etc.

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二、常用句型

⑴ Sun Shuwei, a world champion in diving(同位语), is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.

孙淑伟，一位跳水的世界冠军，是一位来自广东的十四岁男孩。

⑵ I’m Li Hui, a girl of seventeen 我叫李辉，是个17岁的女孩子.

⑶ Abraham Lincoln， the son of a poor family (同位语), was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. 亚伯拉汗·林肯, 一个贫苦家庭的儿子,于1809年2月12日出生于肯塔基州。 ⑴ Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980 (19xx年出生于上海), is a world famous basketball player. 姚明19xx年出生于上海，是一位世界著名的蓝球运动员。

⑵ Born of a poor clerk ’s family(出生在一个贫困的小职员家庭中), Charles Dickens had little schooling. Charles Dickens出生在一个贫困的小职员家庭中，接受的教育很少。 我那位漂亮的英语老师长着两只大眼睛, 留着长发).

⑴ In his life, he got many honours， one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award (他一生中获得了很多荣誉，其中包括获得“2005感动中国年度人物”的称号).(定语从句)

⑵ In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold medal(分词短语), he became the idol of the youth. 20xx年，在他打破世界纪录并获得金牌之后，他成了年青人的偶像。 ⑶ Not only does he show interest in science, but also he has a gift for music.(倒装句式) 他不但对科学极有兴趣，而且具有音乐的天赋。

Lei Feng set a good example to us, so all the people show great respect to him .

雷锋给我们树立了一个良好的榜样，因此，所有的人都很敬重他。

此外, 以下短语很有用, 请熟读背诵：

⑴ be admitted into a key university 考上重点大学

⑵ major in law主修法律

⑶ get a master’s degree 获得硕士学位

⑷ graduate from Harvard University毕业于哈佛大学

⑸ win the first prize获得一等奖

⑹ win a gold medal赢得一枚金牌

⑺ win the Nobel Prize 获得诺贝尔奖

⑻ become a world champion 成为世界冠军

⑼ set a good example to us 给我们树立了良好的榜样

(10) be highly thought of受到好评

(11) be awarded a medal for因……而获得奖章

(12) be awarded the title of获得……称号

(13) devote ...to ... 把……专用于/奉献给

（2012广东高考题）

你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。

【写作内容】

请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物

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*硕士学位：master’s degree; **博士：doctor

【写作要求】

只能用5个句子表达全部内容。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

Version 1

Allan Stewart, of Australian nationality, on March 7, 1915. He challenge oneself. Therefore, , he decided to study law, and in 2006 he for becoming the oldest person Because he was so good at arranging his study time, he got praise from his teacher, and in 2012 he managed to get his fourth degree by network learning.

Version 2

March 7, 1915, Allan Stewart, (who is) an Australian, become the oldest man over the world in 2006. He believed that one is never too old to challenge oneself. He in 1936 and then his doctor’s degree in medicine. In his eighties, he decided to study law, after which he obtained his third degree in 2006. In 2012, he managed to get his fourth degree by online learning and won praise from his teacher for his good time management in study.

写作实例分析：

李华自我介绍

假设你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作，你需要用英文给人事部经理写一封信，介绍自己的基本情况，简介信包括下表所列内容：

姓名:：李华 出生年月: 19xx年8月 出生地： 广东省佛山市

学历： 1994—2000 佛山第一中学; 2000—2004 大学计算机系; 2004—至今 在一家计算机公司工作.

所学主要课程：计算机、中文、数学、英语、体育

特长爱好:：游泳（曾获得过大学游泳比赛一等奖），音乐

写作要求：

1． 简介必须包括以上全部内容（信的开头和结尾已经写好）；

2． 使用5个句子。

Dear Manager,

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_______________________________________________________________________________

I am waiting for your reply.

Thank you.

Yours Truly,

Li Hua

写作指导：

文体: 记叙文，用第一人称

信息组织: ①写信目的，到贵公司工作；②姓名、出生地点、日期； ③学习简历；

④学习内容，现在情况；⑤爱好和特长.

时态: 现在进行时，一般过去时

参考范文：

Dear Manager,

①I am writing you a letter in order to apply for a position in your company. ②My name is

Li Hua and I was born in Foshan City of Guangdong Province in August 1981. ③I studied in

Foshan No. 1 Middle School from 1994 - 2000, and then I came to study in the Computer

Department of Guangzhou University for four years. ④I studied computer science, Chinese,

maths, English, P.E, and now I am working for a computer company. ⑤I like pop music and

swimming very much, and I once won the first prize for swimming in the school competition. I

am waiting for your reply.

Thank you.

Yours Truly,

Li Hua

基础写作训练1:

假设你是李华，学校网站英文版通讯员，最近学校网站准备宣传一些优秀学生，请你用

英文为李敏同学写一篇简介，李敏同学的基本情况如下：

姓名： 李敏 职务： 高二（1）班班长

特点： 健康、活泼 爱好 体育活动，唱歌跳舞

事迹： 她各科成绩都好，但她刚进校时，英语学习有困难，经过努力，成绩上去了。

20xx年参加全国物理奥林匹克竞赛并获得一等奖。她严于律己，乐于助人。

写作要求：

1． 简介必须包括以上全部内容；

2． 版面有限，只能使用5个句子。

写作指导：

1.文体: 记叙文，用第三人称

2.信息组织: ①姓名、职务、特点；②爱好、成绩； ③英语学习困难；④04物理竟赛；

⑤她的品格

时态: 一般现在时，一般过去时

参考范文：

Li Ming, the monitor of Class 1 Grade 2, is healthy and lively. She does well in all her subjects,

and she is fond of sports, singing and dancing. When she came to school, she had quite a lot of

difficulties with the language, but with great efforts she made a lot of progress in her English

language study. In 2006 she took part in the National Physics Olympic Competition and won the

first prize. Li Ming is very strict with herself in her work and daily life, and is always ready to

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help other people.

基础写作训练2:

请根据以下的中文提纲，写一篇关于成龙的英语介绍。

出生时间: 19xx年4月7日（香港）

职业: 演员，导演

主要经历: 八岁开始拍电影，只演和导演过众多电影，以《警察故事》，《我是谁》等著称。 表演风格: 精湛的中国功夫，滑稽的打斗以及幽默的对白。

评价: 为电影业做出过巨大贡献，被誉为超级影星。

写作要求：

1． 简介必须包括以上全部内容；

2． 版面有限，只能使用5个句子。

参考范文：

Jackie Chan, a great actor and director, was born in Hong Kong on April the 7th, 1954. He began to act in films at the age of 8. He has directed and acted in many films, such as Police Story, Who Am I and so on, which made him famous. In his films, we can see his excellent Chinese Kung Fu, funny fighting and humorous dialogues. Jackie Chan is considered (to be) a super star in Asia because he has made great contributions to the film industry.

基础写作训练3:

最近,李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。

[写作要点]请你根据她的事迹，用英语为班级板报写一篇短文,内容包括：

1.事迹:上周六下午,天气炎热,在别人休闲之时,她却不辞劳苦为班级选购歌咏比赛服装；

2.结果:被李越的事迹感动,我们竭尽全力赢得了一等奖；

3.评论:她关心班集体,常利用业余时间帮助别人;为我们树立了良好榜样。

参考词汇: singing contest 歌咏比赛 costume 服装

写作要求：

1． 简介必须包括以上全部内容；

2． 版面有限，只能使用5个句子。

参考范文：

Star Student of the Week

Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest regardless of the hot weather. took great pains to search, select and managed to find the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts，we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.

Apart from being warm-hearted and caring a lot about the class, Li Yue often devotes her spare time to helping others. She has set a good example to us, so she deserves the honor and we should learn from her.

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