应用文

建议信 (Letter of suggestion)

一、简介 

(1) 建议信写作注意事项

      写作目的是提出建议或忠告。不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。

  (2) 写作方法

     ① 首段：

a.       简介自己，不要罗嗦；

b.      说明目的，注意语气。

② 主体：

a.       提出具体建议；

b.      首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则变成投诉信；

c.       经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文，因为内容与议论文相似。

③    尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，易于接受。

  (3) 写作流程图

                         

 

二、结构

第一部分：说明写信的目的

套语：

(1) 来信收到，得知你下个月要对中国进行一次为期十天的访问，我建议……

   I have received your letter saying that you plan to have a visit to China for ten days next month. I recommend that……

(2) 写此信是要提出我对饭店管理进一步提高和改进的建议——建立我们自己的网站来吸引更多的客户。

   I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to establish a website of our own to attract more clients.

第二部分：介绍详情、提出建议

套语：

我建议……

I’d like to suggest that ……

May I suggest that……

In my opinion ……

I would like to make a recommendation that …

I am writing to advise you of ……

If I were you, I would ……

第三部分：提出希望采纳建议，盼望回复

套语：

(1)  请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。

    Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks.

三、示例

Writing   (30 minutes)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the summer holiday for a week. You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.

1、表示欢迎。   2、提出对度假安排的建议。    3、祝愿

建议信模板

Dear        ,

    ① I am very ______ to know that           .     ① 写信的原因

② I'm looking forward to            .               ② 表示欢迎

    ③ I'm afraid that                      .        ③ 表述建议理由

④ I'd like to suggest that     first……then _ .           ④ 提出建议

⑤ I believe this kind of arrangement will________________      ⑤ 有说服力

⑥ Moreover，if       _____________  ,        ⑥ 补充建议

⑦ It is necessary for you to                  .       ⑦ 提出建议

⑧ With_______________you will             .      ⑧ 建议理由

    ⑨ Wish_____________________________               ⑨祝愿

A Letter to a Schoolmate

June 23rd, 2001

Dear Xiao Wang,

I am very glad to knowthat you are soon        

coming to Beijing to join me in the summer holiday.   第一段表示欢迎

I 'm looking forward to your arrival.

If you can stay in Beijing only for a week,        表明建议的原因

I am afraid that you will have a tight schedule 语气亲切，符合说话人身份关系

for visiting a number of places of historic interest.

I'd like to suggest that you first visit some famous      叙述词和副词

places that you have the greatest interest in,such as    一目了然

the Palace Museum, the Summer Place（颐和园）, the Great

Wall; then you can visit those places you think less    then使文章结构

important. I believe this kind of arrangement

will make you have enough time to appreciate（欣赏）       使自己的安排具有说服力

what you really want to see.

Moreover if you really want to be a good      

traveler,It is necessary for you to read some           建议有理有据

books about these places before you come to see

them with your own eyes. With more knowledge

about these places, you willhave a better

understanding of Chinese history and culture.

I am eager to meet you soon in Beijing.

Wish you in advance a pleasant trip to Beijing.      表达良好的祝愿，符合文体要求

     Best wishes!

Yours ever,

 

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