Study Plan

Dear Immigration Officer,

My name is Hongyan SHEN. I’d like to further my study and widen my knowledge in New Zealand; I am studying in Shanghai Business School in China, and major in Hotel management. Over all my life experience, I realized that I need more than my talent and successful records to achieve higher goals，especially as China joined the WTO and plays an active role in the global economy. Having an advanced education in overseas, such as a master degree qualification is valuable for further career.

New Zealand is an economically advanced country which has the highly developed business system and first-class education quality. So I believe that the advanced education system in New Zealand can provide me with high quality program.

I have been accepted to study at the New Zealand College of Business. The college maximizes the potential of every student, helping them to achieve a place at Lincoln University. I am very honoured to be one of the students in this College. They prepare students thoroughly; maximize the potential of every one of the students, helping them to achieve a place at the kind of university which would be out of reach through less rigorous preparation.

For my study plan, Firstly, I will study 16 weeks IESOL Course, and then I will finish my Diploma in Business Administration Level 7 in one year because I passed the exam of New Zealand College of Business. After that, I plan to receive my further one year education at Lincoln University for my Master degree.

After I finish my study in New Zealand, I will return to China and pursue a suitable career and display my advantages to the fullest extent.

My parents have comfortable income, and already prepared the sufficient money to pay my tuition fees and living expenses for me in New Zealand. My parents hope that I can devote my time to learning and obtain a degree as soon as possible, then return to China and find a good and satisfied job.

Thank you for your time in processing my application. I wish you can offer me an opportunity to study abroad.

Yours Sincerely

HongYan SHEN

 

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To distinguished Singapore consulate visa officer:

I’m the applicant tailan, I graduated from the first vocational school in LeShan city ,my major is accounting and I have got the degree certificate. Pursuing instead of “learning”

All the time since pre-school education is my desire for professional .Even though my major in school is accounting .I have devoted to the pre-school education with great enthusiasm and I didn’t delay in the professional at the same time .I came to know that the major of pre-school education rely on passion and love is not enough. It needs not only a moral ,intellectual ,physical and the art of body ,also demand me to master the pre-school education for me is “pursuing”rather simply”learning”

What are my advantages in pre-school education

First ,I truly love it , when I was in school when I dreamed of becoming a kindergarten teacher ,all these years the dream has never been fade in my heart ,I own a heart full of enthusiasm and passion to study pre-school education ,and then I have some experiences of pre-school education and have been developed a profound understanding in the current situation of China pre-school education ,once i filling with ambition to be a replacement for a pre-school teacher for several classes ,the specific job is to help a main pre-school teacher deal with childern’s game and studying matters although I was an assistant ,I didn’t relax to own request ,I humbly to pre-school teacher consulting all kinds of experiences and question which is can’t learned from books the above two points in my advantages

Why I choose you --Singapore At present ,China is in rapid development of pre-school stage ,yet, according to my investigation the foundation of china education is very weak especially the pre-school education most teacher can’t keep the balance between theory and practice after careful consideration. I have deeply felt that It’s necessary to seek knowledge from the KLC which is the notable leader of pre-school education in Asia .moreover Singapore is such a country that people is very friendly and social stability and Singapore education is diversified, it combine theory with practice so I want to study in Singapore .

The plans of future

After returning to china ,I’m going to realize my dream to engage in early childhood education ,utilize what I learn in to my teacher quest to self--fulfillment what’s the most important is make my contribution to the pre-school education of motherland

Here .I sincerely hope that your country will accept my application for study abroad Thank you

Proposer:tailan