作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的

闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！

高分作文标志:

1：是否长短句交叉；2、是否会使用插入语；3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词； 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。

下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：

1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾20xx年x月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time

that

some

applicable

approaches were implemented by the

service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、

动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …

3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,

people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)

下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课

讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I ( By Simmy )

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling

an

army

of

useful

information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

exceedingly 替换 very thrilling 替换 exciting

sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth. google 替换 search an army of 替换 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity

of computers. Coincident with the advancement

of

science

and

technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情； Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular

Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With … Advancement 替换 development Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into

Current ( currently )替换 now Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.

Growing individuals 替换 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的 For a start, we can, freely, search

desired information at any moment .

Little by little, our knowledge will be

well enriched, and our horizons will

be greatly broadened. Additionally,

we can get huge recreations online by

chatting, playing games, or delivering

email.

For a start 替换 To begin with We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched,

and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动 Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides

Deliver 替换 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the

disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.

There is no denying that , however,

computers can function in the

disservice of human beings, 这个句子

有三个精彩之处，首先There is no

denying that这个句型，还有however

作为插入语， function in the

disservice of 替换 do harm to

Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替

换 disappearing )

Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词

As a classic proverb goes that no

garden has no weeds. Computers do

play

a

positive

role

in

the

development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

No garden has no weeds 替换 Every

coin has two sides

Computers do play ，do 强调 Positive 替换 important / good 等 A slice of 替换 a part ofUnfavorable 替换 bad

Impacts 替换 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语

Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage (

defects

替

换

disadvantage ) Facet 替换 aspect

以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下:

1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)

2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising

(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good

3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad

如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换

eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.

4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.

注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。

Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all ,替换most.

5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some

6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,

hold the view that, it is widely shared that,

it is universally acknowledged that)替think

(因为是书面语，所以要加that) 7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing 8: shared 代 common

9.reap huge fruits 替换get many

benefits )10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion

11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more

and more( 注意没有growingly这种形

式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.

Eg.sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.

12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly

13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful, 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer 15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely

替换very 16.hardly

necessary,

hardly inevitable ... 替换 unnecessary, avoidable

17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a

tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb

take interest in / sb. be interested in

18.capture one's attention替换attract

one's attention.

19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect 20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate,

suggest ,fear

21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.

22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth 23.desire 替换want.

24.pour attention into 替换attention to

25.bear in mind that 替换remember 26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)

27. interaction替换communication 28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth

29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance 30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible

pay

 

第二篇：新东方老师总结的四六级作文闪光点

作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！ 高分作文标志:

1：是否长短句交叉；2、是否会使用插入语；3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词； 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。

下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：

1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾20xx年x月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …

3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,

people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)

下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I ( By Simmy )

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

exceedingly 替换 very

thrilling 替换 exciting

sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth. google 替换 search an army of 替换 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing

popularity

of

computers.

Coincident

with

the

advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情； Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With … Advancement 替换 development

Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into Current ( currently )替换 now

Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth. Growing individuals 替换 more and more people It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.

For a start 替换 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动 Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides Deliver 替换 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures,

AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语， function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to

Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing ) Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides Computers do play ，do 强调 Positive 替换 important / good 等 A slice of 替换 a part ofUnfavorable 替换 bad

Impacts 替换 effects / influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语 Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) Facet 替换 aspect

以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下:

1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons) 2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good

3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害

的)替换bad

如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换

eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.

4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a

multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many. 注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all ,替换most.

5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语，所以要加that) 7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing

8: shared 代 common

9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits )10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion

11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly. Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.

Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly 13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,

14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer 15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very

16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换unnecessary, avoidable

17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in

18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.

19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代indicate, suggest ,fear

21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.

22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth

23.desire 替换want.

24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 替换remember

26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思) 27. interaction替换communication

28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth 29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance

30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible

 

第三篇：大学英语四六级作文高分框架模板

大学英语四六级作文高分框架模板

四六级考试考前这段时间除了做好心态调整，建议大家看看作文范文和框架模板，不要去背太多的高级模板，那样有害无益。在此，小编为大家总结了一些英语四六级作文框架范文，这些句型和框架都是偏简单的高分句型，供大家参考学习。

整体而言四六级考试分为社会现象话题以及人品励志话题。

以下所有范文不允许大家背诵，只可以摘抄，照搬的后果很不好。可以断定，如果你能熟练默写以下句型，考试只要能用上三四句，你的作文必然提高30分。当然前提是：你本身的水平只在70左右。请大家务必不要照搬全文，只可以模仿框架，采用其中的句型。 第一部分：社会现象预测

1. 任何与环境保护有关的话题或图画。(图画自己想象)

第一段：Asis depicted by the picture, sb is doing sth/sth is happening, showing the importanceof environment. This picture shows the common phenomenon that environmentprotection is becoming increasingly urgent, suggesting the destructive effectshuman beings made on the ecological balance, which is very thought-provoking. (注意，第一段图画描述一定要短，如果只要你以“谈论某某事情”开头，那就在简单描述图画后立即谈论)

第二段：currently，with industry and economy developing rapidly, anincreasing number of people are paying little or no attention to therelationship between human beings and nature. A typical example is waterpollution. There is no denying in saying that, in order to develop industry,the number of various factories and plants is dramatically increasing, which,directly or indirectly, causes serious water waste and water pollution. 培训搜px.wangxiao.so培训网提示您: (本段在分析污染的原因。大家务必学会举例，举例一定要举简单典型的例子，不可以详细描述，以免陷入太深而犯语法错误。)第三段：It is high time that we took effective andefficient measures to solve the problem reflected by the picture. First andforemost, the administration should make legislations to punish those whopollute environment. Secondly, it is very critical to carry out thoselegislations. It is easier said than done. So carrying out is, to a largedegree, more important then thinking out. Last but not the least, to strengthenthe public awareness of environment protection is necessary. Only by doing so canwe find the way out for the problem of pollution. (本段在谈论解决措施。这一段有些长，大家可以摘抄其中的句子默写背诵)

框架总结(类型：现象+原因+措施)：(非常重要)

第一段：Asis depicted by the picture, sb is doing sth/sth is happening, showing theimportance of ( ). This picture shows the common phenomenon that ( ) is becoming increasingly urgent, suggesting thedestructive effects of A on B, which is very thought-provoking。

第二段：currently，with industry and economy developing rapidly, anincreasing number of people are paying little or no attention to( ). A typical example is ( ). There is no denying in saying that, inorder to ( )， the number of ( ) is dramatically increasing, which,directly or indirectly, causes serious ( )。

第三段：It is high time that we took effective andefficient measures to solve the problem reflected by the picture. First andforemost, the administration should

( ). Secondly, it is verycritical to carry out those legislations. It is easier said than done. Socarrying out is, to a large degree, more important then thinking out. Last butnot the least, to strengthen the public awareness of ( ) is necessary. Only by doing so can wefind the way out for the problem of ( )。

2. 任何与文化交流和传播有关的话题。比如中文或中国文化在世界的传播，或中西方文化交流的融合。这种题的目标是：讨论文化交流，或者弘扬中华民族文化，增强民族自豪感。(四六级作文可能是图画，可能是名言故事)

This picture/famous saying/story indicatesthe common phenomenon that an increasing number of westerners are beginning tolearn Chinese and get close to Chinese culture, showing the importance ofcross-cultural communication。

Currently, with the world globalizing andChinese culture spreading, the Chinese language and Chinese culture arewelcomed by more and more westerners. A case in point is the foundation ofConfucius Schools in western countries. Nowadays, in order to understand Chinaand appreciate Chinese culture, many countries are adopting the policy ofencouraging learning Chinese and Chinese culture, which is a common practiceaccepted among different nations。

Based on an analysis of the current situation,it is not too much to say that Chinese culture/cross-cultural communicationwill continue to develop for a better and faster direction. There is a trendthat Chinese and Chinese culture may spread at an ever-increasing speed。

分析：本文第一段指出现象，第二段分析原因并举例，第三段预测趋势。请大家务必注意，如果作文题目只给出了两点，比如指出现象--“以某某开头”，然后讨论另一个规定的问题，这时没有说第三段该写什么，那么大家可以自己写第三段：比如趋势讨论，解决措施，谈论危害等等，只要不和前面的两段重复和矛盾。

请大家按照前面的启示自己总结这类题型的模板。自己总结的才是独特的。如果全国人民都写一样，后果不堪设想。

3. 任何与勤俭节约和浪费有关的图画或名言。这是个时代主题。请大家多多关注。 厉行节约：practiceeconomy。

The picture/saying tells us the harm ofwaste, indicating a common phenomenon that an increasing number of people areignoring the negative effects exerted by waste, emphasizing the necessity ofpracticing economy。

With society advancing and economy developing,currently, it is not uncommon to see a lot of phenomena of waste. A case inpoint is water waste and water pollution. (后面的可以根据前面的内容写)....。.

It is high timethat we took steps to fight against the phenomenon of waste....。.(根据前面内容自己写)。

4. 社会现象另外需要特别注意：大学生做兼职，创业，实践等等话题。虽然这些话题很土，而且以前考试中多少有涉及，但继续考的可能性很大。

第二部分 关于名言励志话题：(六级更加要注意)

1. 实践能力与知识的区分以及各自的重要性。2. 孝敬美德与乐于助人的品质。3. 友谊就是阳光。4.宽容和理解的重要性。5. 坚韧不拔的意志，乐观心态的重要性。 通用写法：

The famoussaying places a high value on the importance of ( the quality of doingsth/doing sth/being+adj. )， showing the necessity of enhancing our awareness ofthe significance of (being+adj。).

A case in pointis ( friendship/filial piety/academic studies/college students). There is nodenying in saying that without the quality of ( )， we would not achieve anything great inour personal growth and academic studies (或者是buildinga

harmonious society). It is not too much to say that ( ) plays an indispensable role in our life。

In order toenhance our awareness of ( )， it isnecessary that we attach great importance to (doing sth。). From my perspective,the role played by

(school/reading/society/self-restraint) can never beoveremphasized。

以上只是一个大概的框架，大家可以自己添加，或者省略，最后总结四六级写作10大核心必用句型。

1. As is depicted by the picture, sb is doing sth, doingsth, showing the importance/harm of doing sth。

2. This picture reflects a common phenomenon that anincreasing number of people are paying close/little or no attention to theimportance/negative influence of doing sth。

3. That we must take steps to enhance the awareness ofdoing sth/being+adj is a common practice。

4. There is no denying in saying that sth/to do sth/doingsth/being adj. plays an indispensable role in our personal growth and academicstudies/in building a harmonious society and creating a happy and meaningful life。

5. It is high time that we took effective steps to fightagainst the problem/phenomena reflected by the picture。

6. The role played by ( )can never be neglected due to the factthat without the participation of ( )，we would not succeed in doing sth。

7. This famous saying indicates the importance of thequality of being+adj/doing sth, suggesting the necessity of enhancing theawareness of being+adj/doing sth。

8. Only in this way can the problem reflected by thepicture/saying be solved。

9. Currently, with society and economy/culture andinformation technology/ industry and commerce developing rapidly, an increasingnumber of people pay little or no attention to the role played by sth/negativeinfluence exerted by sth。

10. There is no doubt in saying that doing sth/being adj.can, directly or indirectly, to a large degree, bring positive/negativeinfluence on our personal growth and academic progress。

四六级作文的每一段都必须严格按照题目的要求写，不可以违背题目的要求自己编造段落主题。如果题目只给出了两个段落主题，那么可以自己添加各种内容：如趋势预测、危害探讨、如何解决、生活中该怎么办，等等。所有的句子大家要么不用，如果用，就必须彻底达到准确迅速默写的程度，万万不可自己随意改动老师给的句型。