作文的第一要点是条理性

万能逻辑模板:

1-并列-2-递进-3

1-递进-2-转折-3

1-转折-2-递进-3

Exp:do u agree or disagree 可以转换为二选一类型

总结开篇(先用一句背景引入话题,然后跟下面的模板)

(phnmn+story)The other day, I met Miss Lee, my old classmate, who told me that...Miss

Lee's case is not unusual, it is typical of thousands of...

字数推荐：250+380

一战战果：300+480

平衡类 type：which is better

Obviously, There can be no doubt that both....and...have advantages(二选一转换类型 the policy

has its disadvantages as well as its advantages.).But is the former more important than the

latter? ...., it is often said,(排比,暗示后文的内容,前后呼应). Yet\on the other hand,however.. ...

As a result ,it is extremely difficult ,maybe even impossible,to reach an agreement over the

issue(,but what is undeniable is that ...)

倾向性（两正一反一让步） 题型：二选一且通常对立

EX76 (with ...and with ...,people in a larger population have a tendency to ....at the same

time,there is much discussion over sci and tech nowadays.one of the questions under debate is

whether...Those who object to it argue that...But people who advocate it, on the other hand,

claim that,...There is probably some truth on both sides, but as to me,（from personal

experiences,)i tend to be in favor of\object to it.

Depends

Tech:Whatever the arguments for and against ....,it must be realized that ...in and of itself is

neither good nor bad.it is the uses to which it is put that determines its value to society.

contigent

总结body，段首句

平衡类 trpe:which is better or depends 类

Many people always go into rapture at the mere mention of ...,rather than (1 in 2)....,when it

comes to the very issue that...

While it is true that people derive great benefits from (1 in 2)...,on the other hand ,however,(1 in

2 )... seems to be of equal importance from the perspective of \in terms of ....

倾向性（两正一反一让步） 题型：二选一且通常对立

正一very few people may deny the profound fact that..

正二 ...is but one of many.... in addition,equally,if not more,important is the ....

一反：In contrat,when ...is taken into account,the effect of the comparison between..and ...is heightened by the obvious disadvantage .... has.（从反面强调比较对象的劣势）

让步：However, ... is not without problems.When it comes to the disadvantages, the biggest

one, perhaps, is that

on the other hand ,when ...is placed on it too much emphasis,the opposite is usually the case.(过分

强调的缺点/瑕疵)

一个事物的并列特征:

in the first place ,few people ,if any, may deny the very convenience ...brings to us in the field

of ...as a matter of fact,quite a few people go into rapture at the mere mention of ...they,so to

speak,equates ...with success,and keep sparing no efforts in achieving so.

（equally important is the ..） equally importantly/furthermore/all to often,when it comes to the

aspect of...very few can parallel ...

In addition to ...and....,from the perspective of ...,....to a certain degree,provides us with lots of

benefits.

结尾：

倾向性（两正一反一让步） 题型：二选一且通常对立

From what has been discussed above,we may safely\confidently draw the conclusion

that ,although...seems to be understandable in a certain field,it is ...that ...

Depends

In short,(dscr)...whether ...is better or not are contigent\dependent.the importance(etc)vary

from case to case,and more often than not depends on different situations where....（ As far

as i am concerned ,the best situation is to combine ...in this way,获益更多，远离危害）

并列

From what has been discussed above,we may safely\confidently draw the conclusion that ,,,,

例证连接：

A common example which is frequently cited is...

A classic case in point can be best provided by...

Now, I have recalled ... Instances like these could be easily multiplied, but these will suffice to

show that ...

Integrated writings

3 typ:

1、补充支持add to/support 2、质疑反对cast doubt on/challenges 3、对比contrast

In this set of materials ,the reading passage discusses (a technique)...,and the listening passage

adds to/casts doubt on/etc it(the technique) by (providing an example)......

According to the reading passage,(the technique of hindcasting)...,(同位语/非限定性定从 下定义，解释说明)indicates that ......in 2 aspects.in the first place,....in addition,......

(通用模板)On the other hand,however,as is mentioned in the listening passage,.......(in general+relation+content)

（specially）质疑对比类的第三段可以如下形式相关联∶ while it is true that ......,as the reading passage states,it is also true that ......

这部分写作无需记过多笔记，重点把握核心，在写作的栏目旁边呈现reading part

 

第二篇：TOEFL 作文结构

TOEFL作文重点在结构，不是句子---抛鱼引砖贴 ：）

TOEFL英语考试作文的重点在于整个文章的结构。所有的机考题目都是在让你回答一个问题或者直接解释你的一个想法或态度，因此要把作文当成一个证明题来做。

大体上说，TOEFL的作文要写5个自然段。

第一段：一定要说出你的观点或想法。虽然可以用演绎方式，但如果文字能力不好，不能一下吸引读者的注意力的话，很难叫读者跟着你的思路一步一步看到你推理出的结论来。所以，最好是开头就给出你的观点来，好处是清楚明了。

第二段：本着先抑后扬的方式，该段要从反方向讲 -- 开头就用让步的形式，比如 It is true that (whatever you think is right) might be ( the opposite)。接着通过几句话推理或举例将反面观点推翻。

第三段和第四段：分别从两个方面论证自己的观点或选择是正确的。

第五段：总结上面总体推理论证的过程，说白了就是把前面三段每一段的结论换个说法再说一便，然后坚定的说：俺的选择没错！

比如：单独旅行和跟团旅行你喜欢哪一种？为什么？

俺在单独旅行和跟团旅行当中喜欢前者。

虽然跟团旅行有好处，一、二、三，但是它的一个缺点使我特别不喜欢跟团，还是单独好。

首先，单独好在这里，因为所以~~~~

其次，单独好在那里，因为所以~~~~

总之，由于跟团不好在这里那里，而单独旅行好在这里那里，我就是觉得单独旅行好。

不用华丽的句子，但要一定的复杂句式和句式变化，按这个大套路写，注意每一段又是一个小证明题，要在一段中用推理或举例的方式推出一个结论，随便写几句就能有300字以上（偶写了不下400字），注意使用一些连词，TRANSACTION PHRASES，上网可以搜到。鬼子看文章的速度很快，只要一扫就可以看出你文章的结构，然后每一段看看开头和段落中的一些连词，比如 SINCE、BECAUSE、THEREFORE、AS THE RESULT等等就完了，具体内容他们不会太注意的。

好了，我的体会是TOFEL的文章结构重于句子，句式重于用词，你用中学词汇都没事，只要你的文章逻辑清楚你就能拿高分（当然不能错字满篇地）。

为自己的论点举个栗子证明：俺机考的作文上来就写，就用这个套路，基本没有停止敲字，用了29分十几秒，至少写了400字以上，最后连错字都没去找，得了6分~~~

（有砖的抛砖，向我开抛~~~~~ ：））