漫画类作文

第一、审题

brief description then express your idea on side-effects 第二、先构思再动笔

漫画表达的意义 用一两句概括 （how to give a vivid description with the key information）

题目要求着重讨论的要点 （what is my idea? Do I have any examples? How do I support my argument?）

总结 一两句总结 （make a short summary）

第三、不局限于漫画本身，注意题目要求讨论的部分 漫画所代表的现象背后的原因？其他的类似的例子？ 注意审题

第四、用词、句式多样性

题目中的关键词（如本题是modern communication system、mobile phone）会反复提及 想好同义词 增加用词的多样性 写作时注意上下文有意识得选择不同的词表达同一个意思 句式多样 （如插入语 this phenomenon, to my understanding, is a sheer reflection of the challenge posed by

advancement of technology.

同位语从句 This is the sad reality that many students are getting too dependent on their mobile phones.

定语从句 In this picture which gives a vivid description of the modern class, we can see that ….

强调句 It is modern communication system that brings us great convenience and it is also the same communication system that drives us away.

倒装句 Gone are the days when our phones are merely mobile telephones.

伴随状语 Mobile phones are great creations of modern technology, bringing us much convenience and pleasure.）

第五、语义表达

避免chinglish的句子

Mobile phones make us possible to contact others anytime anywhere. (X)

Mobile phones make it possible for us to contact others anytime anywhere.

More and more students are more and more like use mobile phones.(X)

Great many students are growing increasingly fond of using

mobile phones.

第六、语法、措辞

With the time goes by

Mobile phones make our society more and more progress.

There are many people use cell phone.

If we do like this

口语化的句子在正式讨论文中不能出现 （That’s all; know; Today I want to talk about…）

You

 

第二篇：法漫画类作文写作方法

漫画类作文写作方法

一．了解漫画作文（3分钟）

1.什么是漫画作文？

漫画类材料作文是材料作文的一种特殊形式，是一种变"画"为文的作文方式。这种题型提供给考生的是图画或表格，要求考生茬看懂图的意思后写作文，主要训练和考查考生的观察力、思考力、创造力和表达能力。

漫画是一种夸张变形的艺术表现形式，主要有两种类型：一种是褒贬型漫画，其中以贬义型最为常见，也就是我们所熟悉的讽刺型 漫画;而另一类就是哲理型漫画，即让读者在或形象或抽象的图画中引发哲理性思考和体恬。

命题特点

看图作文的主要考查特点是生动、形象、直观、图文并茂。它要求行文时做到：主题明确，即文章能概括图画所反映的中心思想；图文一致，即文章能体现图画中所反映的主要内容。

2．能力要求

看图作文要求考生具有敏锐的观察力，丰富的想像力、严谨的逻辑思维能力、冷静的分析能力，以及最终将以上能力综合体现出来的良好的书面表达能力。

3．语言表达特点

表达准确，过渡自然。看图作文行文时要注意词汇与句型的精心选择，准确表达。表达

过程中要注意图画信息的连接方式，尤其要注意句与句，段与段之间的意思连贯。为此，考生应学会灵活使用连接词、指示代词等，适当地根据自己的需要和文章的进展调整信息出现的顺序。

二．漫画作文写作步骤：

1．读图

2．解意

文字说明部分往往含有重要信息，应该仔细阅读。其次要辨明褒贬，找准角度，选一个合适的切入点。还要联系生活，突出主旨。

3．谋篇

1).描述图片（6分钟）

The picture is talking about/shows…

The picture shows a common phenomenon.

The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.

In the picture, there are…/…is (are) doing…

（让学生根据漫画及提示进行练习） look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a computer, whose monitor is underwear.

2).现象及联系实际分析（6分钟）

It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere.

The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of…

The picture indicate that we…Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that…

This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among…（让学生根据漫画及提示进行练习）

vividly parents’ distress and feelings of helplessness when they are faced with the problem. kids from getting on line –“the software solution”; others may make some rules to limit the time

3) 建议或解决方案（6分钟）

应从大到小，由远及近，从意识到行动来写。

I think/believe that

As far as I’m concerned,

In my opinion,

From my point of view,

It is better/advisable to…

I consider it necessary…

Only in this way can….

It’s high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon.

Immediate measures should be taken to …

The government shoud make laws to…

The media shoud appeal for…

We should raise people’s awareness of…

Everyone should make great efforts to…

（让学生根据漫画及提示进行练习）

hand, the government should make laws to censor the Internet and block inappropriate sites, resist bad information consciously. Only in this way can the Internet be made safer for the

三．写作中应注意的问题：（4分钟）

1..注意过渡词的使用。

表示平行、对等或选择关系

and, as well as, together with, not only…but also...

表示转折关系

but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while

表示对比关系

on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand...

表示因果关系

so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to,

due to, thanks to.

表示时间、顺序关系

first, second …, then, next, finally,

for one thing ... for another, in the end,

表示递进、强调关系

besides, what’s more, in addition, worse still,

above all

表示解释、说明关系

such as, for example, for instance(例如),

in other words, and so on

表示结论

in short, in brief, in a word, in general,

on the whole, in conclusion

2.复杂句式的使用。

People suggest that the conference be put off. (被动句)

She walked out of the room and many students followed her.（非谓语动词）

Followed by many students, she walked out of the room。（分词）

What surprised him was that the little girl knew so many things.（从句）

So curious was the couple about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.（倒装） It was not until in 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began. （强调句）

But for the efforts of firefighters, many lives would not have been saved.（虚拟语气）

3.书写要整齐，卷面要干净。

四．巩固练习：（要求学生按上面所学的三个步骤分步来写）（20分钟）

下图描绘的是现在人类面临的窘境。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述这种现象，说明其产生的原因及后果，并发表你的看法。

注意：

1. 仔细品味图中的幽默，要适当发挥想象，不要做简单描述。

2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

Nowadays, human beings are faced up with an embarrassing situation. __________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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范文：

Nowadays, human beings are faced with an embarrassing situation.

In the cartoon, we can see a man talking to a paper bird kept in his cage and beside him is a vast desert dotted with endless tree roots. Obviously, birds have lost their homes as people have cut down all the trees. As a result, humans have lost their animal friends.

The scene may seem ridiculous and unbelievable to us, but it may become a reality in the future if we go on developing economy regardless of the damage caused to the environment. Now in some places, trees have been cut down without limits. Some scientists say that there will be no vast forests in 20 or 30 years and many species will die out. It is really a terrible thing. Therefore, we should realize the importance of environmental protection and live in harmony with our animal friends. …