一

标题：Team Work

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

Directions: For this part, you'll have to write an essay entitled Team Work. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

1) 为什么我们要学习团队合作；

2) 你是如何在大学加强自己的团队合作能力的；

3) 学会团队合作的关键是什么。

As we all know, teamwork plays an important part in our success. However, what is teamwork? Without doubt, what is called teamwork means each person on the team should work within a group of people, which is number of people greater than one. Certainly, even if there are only two people in the group, they can be called a team. Therefore, it is an essential requirement of any employment that any potential employee is a team player.

As the saying goes: Many hands make light work; If everyone is moving forward together, then success takes care of itself; Talent wins games, but teamwork and intelligence win championships; A great person attracts great people and knows how to hold them together; etc. All the sayings above we have heard or not about team all emphasize the significance of cooperation to an extent. Therefore, it is necessary for us to learn to how to cooperate with others, which will turn out to be easier for us to succeed in our aims.

As current college students, playing an important role on the team no matter what where that is from. To my point of view, even the pupils know the effect of cooperation, which is the reason why we college students should take action right away! What's more, it is well known that any great project can make it without teams.

So during my time in university, I will take an active part in the teams to work hard in order to achieve more successes. For instance, give some suggestions or try my best to support the teamwork.

Instead of merely study hard regardless of the things around us, something that I think is the most important is every member of the team has a very specific role--as a captain, goalkeeper, striker, midfielder or defender. Apart from that, each member should care for each other. When one of the member is missing, the team is handicapped and so on. Only in this way, can the team achieve a great success.

1.1

As we all know, teamwork plays an important part in our success. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 play...part 在教材中出现过 4525 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: part, piece, section, division, portion, fraction, fragment,

segment, share 均可表示“整体的一部分”之意。

important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

1.2

However, what is teamwork? [修改]坛是普特www.put

1.3

Without doubt, what is called teamwork means each person on the team should work within a group of people, which is number of people greater than one. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: group, crowd, gang, band, mob, throng, masses, swarm 均含“群，帮，伙”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

[批改提示] person表示“人”。注意与people的区别。详情点击

1.4

Certainly, even if there are only two people in the group, they can be called a team. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: certainly, naturally, of course, surely 均有“肯定地，当然”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

1.5

Therefore, it is an essential requirement of any employment that any potential employee is a team player. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: profession, job, occupation, trade, vocation, career, work, employment 均含“职业”之意。

[批改提示] 批改提示，注意potent与potential的区别。

第2段

2.1

As the saying goes: Many hands make light work; If everyone is moving forward together, then success takes care of itself; Talent wins games, but teamwork and intelligence win championships; A great person attracts great people and knows how to hold them together; etc. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 attract...people 在教材中出现过 2116 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...work 在教材中出现过 3088 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 win...championship 在教材中出现过 14291 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 win...game 在教材中出现过 35020 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: athletics, sport, game 均有“体育运动”之意。 注意game和match的区别。

2.2

All the sayings above we have heard or not about team all emphasize the significance of cooperation to an extent. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 emphasize...significance 在教材中出现过 20 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: hear, listen, overhear 均含“听”之意。

[批改提示] emphasize/accentuate/ stress/ underline/ highlight

2.3

Therefore, it is necessary for us to learn to how to cooperate with others, which will turn out to be easier for us to succeed in our aims. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: aim, goal, purpose, end, target, object, objective 均有“目标，目的”之意。

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

[批改提示] cooperate近义表达有pull together/ work together/ join forces/ coordinate/ collaborate

第3段

3.1

As current college students, playing an important role on the team no matter what where that is from. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 play...role 在教材中出现过 26773 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院，大学”之意。

important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

3.2

To my point of view, even the pupils know the effect of cooperation, which is the reason why we college students should take action right away! [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 know...effect 在教材中出现过 252 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: act, action, deed, operation, performance 均含“行为，行动”之意。

[批改提示] reason表示“原因，理由”。注意与cause的区别。详情点击

the reason why 意为：...的原因是...，属于四六级经典高分句型。

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

3.3

What's more, it is well known that any great project can make it without teams.

[修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: big, large, great, grand 均含“大的”之意。

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

what's more意思是另外，而且?，是四六级经典补充类词组。

第4段

4.1

So during my time in university, I will take an active part in the teams to work hard in order to achieve more successes. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 achieve...success 在教材中出现过 1003 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: attain, reach, achieve, arrive 均有“达到”之意。

4.2

For instance, give some suggestions or try my best to support the teamwork. [修

改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 give...suggestion 在教材中出现过 161 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: give, accord, award, confer，grant, endow, present, bestow 均含有“给予，赠给”之意。

第5段

5.1

Instead of merely study hard regardless of the things around us, something that I think is the most important is every member of the team has a very specific role--as a captain, goalkeeper, striker, midfielder or defender. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...role 在教材中出现过 6325 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: each, every 都有“每一个”之意。

[批改提示] very的近义表达有extremely, exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。 important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

5.2

Apart from that, each member should care for each other. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: care, mind 均有“介意，在乎”之意。

[批改提示] apart from在做“除去??，除??意外”讲时，近义表达有with the exception of。

[批改提示] 注意care for和like区别。

5.3

When one of the member is missing, the team is handicapped and so on. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: lose, miss, misplace 均有“丢失，遗失”之意。

5.4

Only in this way, can the team achieve a great success.[修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 achieve...success 在教材中出现过 1003 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: attain, reach, achieve, arrive 均有“达到”之意。

As we know, a team teamwork plays an important part in our success to a degree.However,what success.However,what is teamwork?What teamwork?Without doubt,what is called teamwork means each person on the team should work within a group of people,which is number of people greater than one.Even one.Certainly,even if there are only two people in the group,they can be called a team.Therefore,it is an essential requirement of any employment that any potential employee is a team player.

Certainly,as player.

As the saying goes:Many hands make light work;If everyone is moving forward together,then success takes care of itself;Talent wins games,but teamwork and intelligence win championships;A great person attracts great people and knows how to hold them together;etc.All the sayings we have heard or not about team emphasize the significance of cooperation to an extent.In short, extent.What's more, it is necessary for us to learn to how to cooperate with others,which will turn out to be easier for us to succeed in our aims.

As the current college students,playing an important role on the team no matter what where that is from.Besides,even the pupils know the effect of cooperation,which is the reason why we college students should take action right away!It away!At the same time,itis well known that any great project can make it without teams.

So during my time in university,I will take an active part in the teams to work hard in order to achieve more success.For instance,give some suggestions or try my best to support the teamwork.

Meanwhile,something that I think is the most important is every member of the team has a very specific role--as a captain,goalkeeper,striker,midfielder or defender.Apart from that,each member should care for each other.When one of the member is missing,the team is handicapped and so on.Only in this way,can the team achieve a great success.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

二

Being Creative

As is known to us, imagination is the beginning of creation. You imagine what we desire, you will what you imagine and at last you create what you will. First all, anything unique is under the creation that is derived from the creative people.Result from the creation, various things meaningful start to exist. In short, creation is so important that we have to keep and develop it to an extent. In my opinion, creative people have a great deal of physical energy, but they are also often quiet and at rest. Besides, they can work long hours with great concentration while remaining fresh and enthusiastic all the time, which does not mean that creative people are always active. In fact, they rest often and sleep a lot. What's more, the key to success is that the creative people know how to control their energy, which is not ruled by the calendar, the clock or an external schedule. When necessary, they can focus it like a laser beam; when not, creative types immediately recharge their batteries, which is not a biorhythm inherited with their genes and was learned by trial and error as a strategy for achieving their goals.

Meanwhile, we should not only study hard but also catch the opportunities in order to be creative people. Only in this way, can we all have a bright future!

1.1

As is known to us, imagination is the beginning of creation.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: imagination, fancy, fantasy 均含有“想象，幻想”之意。

[批改提示] be known to... 表示“为...所熟知”。注意与be known by... 的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

1.2

You imagine what we desire, you will what you imagine and at last you create what you will.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: at last, at length, eventually, finally, in the end, lastly 均含有“最后，终于”之意。

[批改提示] imagine近义表达有think of/ envisage/ devise/ conceive of

1.3

First all, anything unique is under the creation that is derived from the creative people.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: creative, original, imaginative 都可表示“有创造力的”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

1.4

Result from the creation, various things meaningful start to exist.

[低频警示] meaningful...start 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[学习提示] 易混词汇: different, various, diverse 均含“不同的”之意。详情点击

1.5

In short, creation is so important that we have to keep and develop it to an extent.

important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

[批改提示] develop近义表达有advance/ progress/ evolve/ thrive/ flourish

[批改提示] 查看have to和must的区别。

[批改提示] keep近义表达有hold/ maintain/ preserve/ sustain

第2段

2.1

In my opinion, creative people have a great deal of physical energy, but they are also often quiet and at rest.

[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...deal 在教材中出现过 1543 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: creative, original, imaginative 都可表示“有创造力的”之意。

[批改提示] often的近义表达有frequently。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

2.2

Besides, they can work long hours with great concentration while remaining fresh and enthusiastic all the time, which does not mean that creative people are always active.

[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！

[学习提示] 易混词汇: active, energetic, vigorous, brisk, lively 均有“积极的，活跃的”之意。

[批改提示] besides表示“除了（包括）”。注意与except的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

2.3

In fact, they rest often and sleep a lot.

[学习提示] 注意sleep与fall asleep区别。

[批改提示] in fact的同义表达有in reality。

[批改提示] often的近义表达有frequently。

2.4

What's more, the key to success is that the creative people know how to control their energy, which is not ruled by the calendar, the clock or an external schedule.

[低频警示] external...schedule 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 control...energy 在教材中出现过 10 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: creative, original, imaginative 都可表示“有创造力的”之意。

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

what's more意思是另外，而且?，是四六级经典补充类词组。

2.5

When necessary, they can focus it like a laser beam; when not, creative types immediately recharge their batteries, which is not a biorhythm inherited with their genes and was learned by trial and error as a strategy for achieving their goals.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 achieve...goal 在教材中出现过 4646 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: attain, reach, achieve, arrive 均有“达到”之意。

[批改提示] error表示“错误，过失”。注意与fault的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

第3段

3.1

Meanwhile, we should not only study hard but also catch the opportunities in order to be creative people.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 catch...opportunity 在教材中出现过 6 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: arrest, capture, catch, seize, trap 均有“抓住，捕捉”之意。

[批改提示] 注意meantime和meanwhile的区别。

[批改提示] 注意catch和catch at区别。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

3.2

Only in this way, can we all have a bright future!

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...future 在教材中出现过 2575 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: bright, brilliant, glowing, radiant, luminous 均含有“明亮的”之意。

三

标题： My Favorite Foods.

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

Directions: For this part, you'll have to write an essay entitled My Favorite Foods. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

1) 你最喜欢的一种食物；

2) 你喜欢这种食物的原因；

3) 简述这种食物的制作过程。

My favorite foods

As is known to us, foods play an important part in our daily life, without which, it is impossible for us to live, let alone work, study, etc. Therefore, it is significant for us to treasure them and keep a balanced diet in order to keep fit and live for a long time.

To my point of view, food made of flour is my favorite, without which, it is difficult for me to live. I like all the food made of flour, for instance noodles, steamed bun, dumplings, etc. In my opinion, they play a significant role in my life, which gives me energy, enthusiasm and helps me to take an active part in the activities. Meanwhile, they also assist me to success and make me confidant.

Among them, I like dumplings best not only because they have various shapes but also they are filled with all kinds of materials, which all make me excited. It is easy to make the dumplings. First of all, you should make the pasta on which the delicious dumplings depend. It is necessary for you to cook it carefully.Secondly, stuffing in the dumplings also plays a major part in the making work.Besides, any material can regard as the stuffing, which is the reason why the dumplings is a kind of food being different from others. In short, my favorite food is dumplings, which is also the symbol of China.

1.1

As is known to us, foods play an important part in our daily life, without which, it is impossible for us to live, let alone work, study, etc.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 play...part 在教材中出现过 4525 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: food, provisions, diet 都有“食物”之意。

[批改提示] be known to... 表示“为...所熟知”。注意与be known by... 的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

1.2

Therefore, it is significant for us to treasure them and keep a balanced diet in order to keep fit and live for a long time.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: fit, proper, suitable, appropriate, apt, fitting 均表示“适当的，适合的”之意。

[批改提示] keep近义表达有hold/ maintain/ preserve/ sustain

第2段

2.1

To my point of view, food made of flour is my favorite, without which, it is difficult for me to live.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: food, provisions, diet 都有“食物”之意。

2.2

I like all the food made of flour, for instance noodles, steamed bun, dumplings, etc.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: food, provisions, diet 都有“食物”之意。

2.3

In my opinion, they play a significant role in my life, which gives me energy, enthusiasm and helps me to take an active part in the activities.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 give...energy 在教材中出现过 348 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 take...part 在教材中出现过 13283 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 play...role 在教材中出现过 26773 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: active, energetic, vigorous, brisk, lively 均有“积极的，活跃的”之意。

[批改提示] 注意activities和activity的区别。

2.4

Meanwhile, they also assist me to success and make me confidant.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: aid, assist, help 均有“帮助”之意。

[批改提示] 注意meantime和meanwhile的区别。

第3段

3.1

Among them, I like dumplings best not only because they have various shapes but also they are filled with all kinds of materials, which all make me excited.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...shape 在教材中出现过 279 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: among, between, amid, amongst 均含“在??之间，在??之中”之意。

[批改提示] all kinds of的近义表达有a great variety of。

第4段

4.1

It is easy to make the dumplings.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...dumpling 在教材中出现过 38 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: simple, easy 均含“简单的，轻易的”之意。

4.2

First of all, you should make the pasta on which the delicious dumplings depend.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...pasta 在教材中出现过 92 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: depend, rely 后跟on(upon)，均有“依赖，依靠”之意。

4.3

It is necessary for you to cook it carefully.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: indispensable, essential, necessary, requisite 均有“必不可少的，必需的”之意。

4.4

Secondly, stuffing in the dumplings also plays a major part in the making work.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 play...part 在教材中出现过 4525 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: chief, principal, main, major, leading, capital, foremost, primary 均含有“首要的，主要的”之意。

4.5

Besides, any material can regard as the stuffing, which is the reason why the dumplings is a kind of food being different from others.

[低频警示] food being different from others 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[学习提示] 易混词汇: different, various, diverse 均含“不同的”之意。详情点击

[批改提示] reason表示“原因，理由”。注意与cause的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] besides表示“除了（包括）”。注意与except的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] be different from表示“与...不同”。注意与be different in的区别。详情点击

第5段

5.1

In short, my favorite food is dumplings, which is also the symbol of China.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: food, provisions, diet 都有“食物”之意。

As is known to us,foods play an important part in our daily life,without which,it is impossible for us to live, let alone work,study,etc.Therefore,it is significant for us to treasure them and keep a balanced diet in order to keep fit and live for a long time.

To my point of view,food made of flour is my favorite,without which,it is difficult for me to live.I like all the cooked wheaten food,for instance noodles,steamed bread,dumplings,etc.In my opinion,they play a significant role in my life,which give me energy,enthusiasm and help me to take an active part in the activities.Meanwhile,they also assist me to success and make me confidant. Among them,I like dumplings best not only because they have various shapes but also they are filled with all kinds of materials,which all make me excited. It is easy to make the dumplings.First of all,you should make the pasta on which the delicious dumplings depend.It is necessary for you to cook it carefully.Secondly,stuffing in the dumplings also plays a major part in the making work.Besides, any material can regard as the stuffing,which is the reason why the dumplings is a kind of food different from others.

In short,my favorite food is dumplings,which is also the symbol of China.

As is known to us,foods us, foods play an important part in our daily life,without which,itlife, without which, it is impossible for us to live, let alone

work,study,etc.Therefore,it work, study, etc.Therefore, it is significant for us to treasure them and keep a balanced diet in order to keep fit and live for a long time.

To my point of view,food view, food made of flour is my favorite,without which,it favorite, without which, it is difficult for me to live.I like all the cooked wheaten food,for food made of flour, for instance noodles,steamed bread,dumplings,etc.In noodles, steamed bun, dumplings, etc.In my opinion,they opinion, they play a significant role in my life,which givelife, which gives me energy,enthusiasm energy, enthusiasm and help me to take an active part in the activities.Meanwhile,they activities.Meanwhile, they also assist me to success and make me confidant.

Among them,I them, I like dumplings best not only because they have various shapes but also they are filled with all kinds of materials,which materials, which all make me excited.

It is easy to make the dumplings.First of all,you all, you should make the pasta on which the delicious dumplings depend.It is necessary for you to cook it carefully.Secondly,stuffingcarefully.Secondly, stuffing in the dumplings also plays a major part in the making work.Besides, any material can regard as the stuffing,which stuffing, which is the reason why the dumplings is a kind of food being different from others.

In short,my short, my favorite food is dumplings,which dumplings, which is also the symbol of China.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

四

标题：Optimism

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于300 字

满分: 100

要求：

Directions: For this part, you'll have to write an essay entitled Optimism. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

1) 什么叫乐观主义；

2) 乐观主义给我们的生活能带来什么；

3) 你是怎样保持乐观的。

Optimism

It is well known that optimism is necessary in our life! In my opinion, optimism means that look up in hope when faced with difficulties. Being positive all the time, smile to life, stick it out, never give up and keep trying anyway.Because an optimistic attitude is not a luxury, it is a necessity. The way you look at life will

determine how you feel, how you perform, and how well you will get along with other people. At the same time, optimism will provide a happy and hopeful atmosphere which everyone can lead a better life!

Absolutely, laughter, which is the sun that drives winter from the human face, plays an important part in being optimistic, with the help of which, you will turn out to be optimistic without doubt. Besides, optimism is the faith that leads to achievement for nothing can be done without hope and confidence. On the one hand, it will benefit you if you keep positive, result from which you can work fruitfully and effectively. Meanwhile, you can get rid of matters easily. As a result, you will have a wonderful life in the future.

As for me, I always take a deep breath when I get angry, feel nervous, face difficulties, etc. Apart from that, I usually take exercise when I am in a bad mood, which will help me calm down and address the matters reasonably. I think that we should all keep a good mood to be optimistic. Only in this way, can we all have a bright life!

1.1

It is well known that optimism is necessary in our life!

[学习提示] 易混词汇: indispensable, essential, necessary, requisite 均有“必不可少的，必需的”之意。

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

1.2

In my opinion, optimism means that look up in hope when faced with difficulties.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: difficulty, hardship 都表示“困难”之意。

[批改提示] face的近义表达有confront。

1.3

Being positive all the time, smile to life, stick it out, never give up and keep trying anyway.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: give, accord, award, confer，grant, endow, present, bestow 均含有“给予，赠给”之意。

[批改提示] keep近义表达有hold/ maintain/ preserve/ sustain

1.4

Because an optimistic attitude is not a luxury, it is a necessity.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: attitude, air, manner 均含“态度，风度”之意。

1.5

The way you look at life will determine how you feel, how you perform, and how well you will get along with other people.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: decide, determine, resolve, settle 都含“决定”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

1.6

At the same time, optimism will provide a happy and hopeful atmosphere which everyone can lead a better life!

[学习提示] 易混词汇: atmosphere, air, gas 均与“空气”有关。

[批改提示] provide的近义表达有lend或offer。

第2段

2.1

Absolutely, laughter, which is the sun that drives winter from the human face, plays an important part in being optimistic, with the help of which, you will turn out to be optimistic without doubt.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: drive, ride 均含有“乘，骑”之意。

important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

2.2

Besides, optimism is the faith that leads to achievement for nothing can be done without hope and confidence.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: belief, faith, confidence, conviction, credit, trust 都有“相信，信任”之意。

[批改提示] besides表示“除了（包括）”。注意与except的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] lead to的近义表达有contribute to/conduce to/result in。

2.3

On the one hand, it will benefit you if you keep positive, result from which you can work fruitfully and effectively.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: sure, certain, definite, positive 均含“无疑的，确信的”之意。

[批改提示] benefit近义表达有help/ improve/ assist/ enhance/ serve

[批改提示] keep近义表达有hold/ maintain/ preserve/ sustain

2.4

Meanwhile, you can get rid of matters easily.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: affair, business, matter, concern, thing 均含“事情”之意。

[批改提示] 注意meantime和meanwhile的区别。

2.5

As a result, you will have a wonderful life in the future.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...life 在教材中出现过 6249 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: marvelous, wonderful 都有“惊人的，奇异的，奇妙的”之意。

第3段

3.1

As for me, I always take a deep breath when I get angry, feel nervous, face difficulties, etc.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 take...breath 在教材中出现过 2227 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: angry, indignant, mad 均有“发怒的，愤怒的”之意。

3.2

Apart from that, I usually take exercise when I am in a bad mood, which will help me calm down and address the matters reasonably.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 take...exercise 在教材中出现过 53 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 address...matter 在教材中出现过 273 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: address, greet, salute, hail, welcome 均有“欢迎，致敬，致意，招呼”之意。

[批改提示] help近义表达有support/ assist/ aid

bad在写作中使用的太泛，在某些语境下可考虑换为unfavorable/dreadful/be less impressive等。

3.3

I think that we should all keep a good mood to be optimistic.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 keep...mood 在教材中出现过 17 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: optimistic, hopeful 均可表示“充满希望的，乐观的”之意。

[批改提示] keep近义表达有hold/ maintain/ preserve/ sustain

[批改提示] 此句型用的太过频繁，建议改为sb. suppose/claim+从句.

3.4

Only in this way, can we all have a bright life!

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...life 在教材中出现过 6249 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: bright, brilliant, glowing, radiant, luminous 均含有“明亮的”之意。

As is known to us all,optimism is necessary in our life!In my opinion,optimism means that look up in hope when faced with difficulties.smile all the time, positive to life,stick it out,never give up and keep trying anyway.Because an optimistic attitude is not a luxury,it is a necessity.The way you look at life will determine how you feel,how you perform,and how well you will get along with other people.At the same time,optimism will provide a happy and hopeful atmosphere which everyone can lead a better life!

Absolutely,laughter ,which is the sun that drives winter from the human face,plays an important part in the optimism world,with the help of which,you will turn out to be optimistic without doubt.Besides,optimism is the faith that leads to achievement for nothing can be done without hope and confidence.On the one hand, it will benefit you if you keep positive,result from which you can work fruitfully and effectively.Meanwhile, you can get rid of matters easily.As a result,you will have a wonderful life in the future.

As for me,I always take a deep breath when I angry,feel nervous,face difficulties,etc.Apart from that,I usually take exercise when I am in bad mood,which will help me calm down and address the matters reasonably.I think that we should all keep a good mood to be optimistic.Only in this way,can we all have a bright life!

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As It is well known to us all,optimism that optimism is necessary in our life!In my opinion,optimism means that look up in hope when faced with difficulties.smiledifficulties.Smile all the time, positive to life,stick it out,never give up and keep trying anyway.Because an optimistic attitude is not a luxury,it is a necessity.The way you look at life will determine how you feel,how you perform,and how well you will get along with other people.At the same time,optimism will provide a happy and hopeful atmosphere which everyone can lead a better life!

Absolutely,laughter ,which life!

Absolutely,laughter,which is the sun that drives winter from the human face,plays an important part in the optimism world,with being optimistic,with the help of which,you will turn out to be optimistic without doubt.Besides,optimism is the faith that leads to achievement for nothing can be done without hope and confidence.On the one hand, it will benefit you if you keep positive,result from which you can work fruitfully and effectively.Meanwhile, you can get rid of matters easily.As a result,you will have a wonderful life in the future.

As for me,I always take a deep breath when I get angry,feel nervous,face difficulties,etc.Apart from that,I usually take exercise when I am in bad mood,which will help me calm down and address the matters reasonably.I think that we should all keep a good mood to be optimistic.Only in this way,can we all have a bright life!

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五

标题：Let the classics be classics

字数: 不低于300字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

Some people hold the view that the classics are classics because they have stood the test of time. Therefore, they are to be treasured by people of all generations, ours being no exception. Others believe that the classics represent the wisdom of the past. As we are advancing towards the future, it is our responsibility to venture into the unknown and generate new understanding of man and nature. What is your view on this issue?

Write an essay in 300-500 words in response to this question and give reasons to support your position.

答题时间：20xx年4月8日 18:00 至 20xx年5月10日 23:59

Let classics be classics

As is known to us all, the classics play an important part in our life. The classics have stood the test of time, which is the reason why they remained and to be the classics with time going by. Without doubt, the whole nation's hard work turns out to be the essence through putting them to the test. Meanwhile, the essence is from various aspects, which includes history, culture, custom, etc.All of them have ever taken us by surprise because of their brilliants.

However, most people have different views on the classics with the great development of our country. On the one hand, some people consider them out of date. In their opinion, we are in the world needing to develop rather than fix our eyes on the past. On the other hand, some people regard them as the wisdom of the past. As a result of the classics, we learn many things from the previous generations to such an extent.

To my point of view, any thing has two sides. It is very necessary for us to analyse them and conclude from different aspect so as to get the fair and accurate answer. Although we are advancing towards the future, it is our responsibility to venture into the unknown and generate new understanding of man and nature and avoid the fault happened. We should still pay attention to the reference function from the classics, which prevents us from unnecessary mistakes and winding courses. Besides, the classics are classics. Therefore, it is our duty to treasure them and learn from them in order to be an excellent person. Only in this way, can we all make a great difference to the world and make it to be better! At the same time, let the classics be classics all the time!

1.1

As is known to us all, the classics play an important part in our life.

[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 play...part 在教材中出现过 4525 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: part, piece, section, division, portion, fraction, fragment, segment, share 均可表示“整体的一部分”之意。

[批改提示] be known to... 表示“为...所熟知”。注意与be known by... 的区别。详情点击

important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

1.2

The classics have stood the test of time, which is the reason why they remained and to be the classics with time going by.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 stand...test 在教材中出现过 396 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: remain, linger, stay 均有“停留，逗留”之意。

[批改提示] reason表示“原因，理由”。注意与cause的区别。详情点击

the reason why 意为：...的原因是...，属于四六级经典高分句型。

1.3

Without doubt, the whole nation's hard work turns out to be the essence

through putting them to the test.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: difficult, hard 均有“困难”之意。

[批改提示] nation表示“国家”。注意与country的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] through的近义表达有across，in term of，via。

1.4

Meanwhile, the essence is from various aspects, which includes history, culture, custom, etc.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: appearance, look, face, aspect 均含事物或人的“外表，容貌”之意。

[批改提示] 注意custom和customs，costume区别。

[批改提示] 注意meantime和meanwhile的区别。

1.5

All of them have ever taken us by surprise because of their brilliants.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: due to, owing to, because of, thanks to 均表示“由于”之意。 建议将by 改为 in 或 with。

第2段

2.1

However, most people have different views on the classics with the great development of our country.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...view 在教材中出现过 4707 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: development, evolution 都表示“发展，进化”之意。

[批改提示] 注意country和nation，village区别。

[批改提示] country表示“国家”。注意与state的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

2.2

On the one hand, some people consider them out of date.

out of date意为：过时的，陈旧的，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！

[批改提示] 注意consider和believe区别。

[批改提示] consider近义表达有think about/ reflect on/ ponder/ cogitate upon/ contemplate

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

2.3

In their opinion, we are in the world needing to develop rather than fix our eyes on the past.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 fix...eye 在教材中出现过 217 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: lack, need, want, require 均有“缺少，短少”之意。注意require和need的区别。

[批改提示] develop近义表达有advance/ progress/ evolve/ thrive/ flourish

[批改提示] fix近义表达有focus/ direct at/ fasten on

2.4

On the other hand, some people regard them as the wisdom of the past.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: admire, honour, respect, regard, esteem 均含“尊重，钦佩”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

2.5

As a result of the classics, we learn many things from the previous generations to such an extent.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 learn...thing 在教材中出现过 1470 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: previous, foregoing, preceding, prior, former 均可表示“在前的”之意。

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

第3段

3.1

To my point of view, any thing has two sides.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: phase, aspect, side, angle 均有“方面”之意。

3.2

It is very necessary for us to analyse them and conclude from different aspect so as to get the fair and accurate answer.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: accurate, exact, precise, right, true, correct 均含“准确的，正确的”之意。

建议将it is very necessary 改为it will be of great use。

[批改提示] 注意conclude和deduce区别。

[批改提示] very的近义表达有extremely, exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。

3.3

Although we are advancing towards the future, it is our responsibility to venture into the unknown and generate new understanding of man and nature and avoid the fault happened.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 generate...understanding 在教材中出现过 4 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 avoid...fault 在教材中出现过 6 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: advance, progress, proceed, move on, go 均含“前进，行进，进展”之意。

[批改提示] fault表示“缺点，毛病”。注意与error的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] 查看understanding 和comprehension的区别。

3.4

We should still pay attention to the reference function from the classics, which prevents us from unnecessary mistakes and winding courses.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: duty, obligation, responsibility, function 都有“义务，职责”之意。

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 pay...attention 在教材中出现过 18138 次

[批改提示] 注意course和coarse区别。

[批改提示] unnecessary的近义表达有undue。

3.5

Besides, the classics are classics.

[批改提示] besides表示“除了（包括）”。注意与except的区别。详情点击

3.6

Therefore, it is our duty to treasure them and learn from them in order to be an excellent person.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: duty, obligation, responsibility, function 都有“义务，职责”之意。

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

[批改提示] person表示“人”。注意与people的区别。详情点击

3.7

Only in this way, can we all make a great difference to the world and make it to be better!

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...difference 在教材中出现过 16384 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: big, large, great, grand 均含“大的”之意。

[批改提示] 注意difference和disparity，distinction区别。

3.8

At the same time, let the classics be classics all the time!

[低频警示] be classics all 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[学习提示] 易混词汇: same, identical, very, equal, equivalent 均含“相同的”之意。 六

标题：看图作文

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of some college students’ lack of self-reliance and then explain the consequences of such a phenomenon. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

Should we pay attention to our self-reliance?

As the picture says that many college students send their dirty clothes to their home receiving the clean clothes from home in return, which takes me by great surprise.

To my point of view, it is significant for us to pay attention to self-reliance and learn to live well independently. Without doubt, college is an environment full of various phenomenon on earth, where we can not only master a large amount of academic knowledge but also know about life skill at the same time. As a result, we are likely to make our dreams come true easier with the assistance of the

kinds of skills.

With time passing by, the original dream may be going to change with time rolling by, which has been far from our aims. Eventually, it is common for us to find that more and more students get used to killing time, for instance, playing computer games, going shopping, absenting classes, drinking wine, etc, apart from which, they are also tired of washing clothes, cleaning the dormitories and so on, result from which, it is common for us to see that they fill the rooms with rubbish, dirty and smelly. Besides, they even deliver the laundry home in order to have them washed by their parents and send them back. As a result, it turns out to be the phenomenon on the picture at the beginning.

In short, it plays an important role in our personal life to be an independent person. Only in this way, can we all have a bright future.

第1段

1.1

As the picture says that many college students send their dirty clothes to their home receiving the clean clothes from home in return, which takes me by great surprise. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 receive...clothes 在教材中出现过 12 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 send...clothes 在教材中出现过 41 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: clothes, clothing, coat, dress, garment, robe, gown, uniform, costume, suit 均有“衣服，服装”之意。

[批改提示] clothes表示“衣服”。注意与cloth的区别。详情点击

第2段

2.1

To my point of view, it is significant for us to pay attention to self-reliance and learn to live well independently. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 pay...attention 在教材中出现过 18138 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: dwell, reside, live, lodge, inhabit, settle 均有“居住，定居”之意。

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

2.2

Without doubt, college is an environment full of various phenomenon on earth, where we can not only master a large amount of academic knowledge but also know about life skill at the same time. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: quantity, amount, number, sum 均有“总数，总量”之意。

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

[批改提示] master表示“掌握，精通”。注意与grasp的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] large的同意表达有miraculous或marvelous 。

2.3

As a result, we are likely to make our dreams come true easier with the assistance of the kinds of skills. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: help, aid, assistance, support 均有“帮助，支持”之意。

[批改提示] true的近义表达有accurate 。

第3段

3.1

With time passing by, the original dream may be going to change with time rolling by, which has been far from our aims. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: aim, goal, purpose, end, target, object, objective 均有“目标，目的”之意。

3.2

Eventually, it is common for us to find that more and more students get used to killing time, for instance, playing computer games, going shopping, absenting classes, drinking wine, etc, apart from which, they are also tired of washing clothes, cleaning the dormitories and so on, result from which, it is common for us to see that they fill the rooms with rubbish, dirty and smelly.[修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 clean...dormitory 在教材中出现过 4 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 go...class 在教材中出现过 8 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 use...student 在教材中出现过 90 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 wash...clothes 在教材中出现过 346 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 fill...room 在教材中出现过 901 次

3.3

Besides, they even deliver the laundry home in order to have them washed by their parents and send them back. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 deliver...home 在教材中出现过 20 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: send, deliver, dispatch, forward, ship, transmit 均含“送出，发送，传送”之意。

[批改提示] besides表示“除了（包括）”。注意与except的区别。详情点击

3.4

As a result, it turns out to be the phenomenon on the picture at the beginning.

[修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: marvel, miracle, wonder, phenomenon 均含“奇迹”之意。

第4段

4.1

In short, it plays an important role in our personal life to be an independent person. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 play...role 在教材中出现过 26773 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: personal, private, individual 均含“个人的，私人的”之意。

[批改提示] person表示“人”。注意与people的区别。详情点击

important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

4.2

Only in this way, can we all have a bright future. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...future 在教材中出现过 2575 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: bright, brilliant, glowing, radiant, luminous 均含有“明亮的”之意。

As the picture says that many college students send their dirty clothes to their home and receive the clean clothes from home,which surprises takes me a lot. To by great surprise.

To my point of view,it is significant for us to pay attention to self-reliance and learn to live well by ourselves.College is an environment full of various phenomenon,where we can not only master a variety of academic knowledge but also know about life skill.As a result,we are likely to make our dreams come true easier with the assistance of the kinds of skills.

With time going passing by,the original dream is going to change which has been far from our aims.It is common for us to find that more and more students get used to killing time,for instance,playing computer games,going shopping,absenting classes,drinking wine,etc.Apart from that,they are also tired of washing clothes,cleaning the dormitories and so on,result from which,it is common for us to see that they fill the rooms with rubbish.They even send the dirty clothes to their home in order to make them washed by their parents.Therefore,it turns out to be the phenomenon on the picture at the beginning.

In short,it plays an important part role in our daily life to be an independent person.Only in this way,can we all have a bright future.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

As the picture says that many college students send their dirty clothes to their home and receive the clean clothes from home,which home in return,which takes me by great surprise.

To my point of view,it is significant for us to pay attention to self-reliance and learn to live well by ourselves.College independently.College is an environment full of various phenomenon,where we can not only master a large amount of academic knowledge but also know about life skill.As a result,we are likely to make our dreams come true easier with the assistance of the kinds of skills. With time passing by,the original dream is going to change which has been far from our aims.It is common for us to find that more and more students get used to killing time,for instance,playing computer games,going shopping,absenting classes,drinking wine,etc.Apart from that,they are also tired of washing clothes,cleaning the dormitories and so on,result from which,it is common for us

to see that they fill the rooms with rubbish.Theyrubbish,dirty and smelly.They even send the dirty clothes to their home in order to make them washed by their parents.Therefore,it parents.As a result,it turns out to be the phenomenon on the picture at the beginning.

In short,it plays an important role in our daily life to be an independent person.Only in this way,can we all have a bright future.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

As the picture says that many college students send their dirty clothes to their home and receive receiving the clean clothes from home in return,which takes me by great surprise.

To my point of view,it is significant for us to pay attention to self-reliance and learn to live well independently.College independently.Without doubt,college is an environment full of various phenomenon,where phenomenon on earth,where we can not only master a large amount of academic knowledge but also know about life skill.As skill to some extent.As a result,we are likely to make our dreams come true easier with the assistance of the kinds of skills.

With time passing by,the original dream is may be going to change with time rolling by,which has been far from our aims.It aims.Eventually,it is common for us to find that more and more students get used to killing time,for instance,playing computer games,going shopping,absenting classes,drinking wine,etc,apart from which,they are also tired of washing clothes,cleaning the dormitories and so on,result from which,it is common for us to see that they fill the rooms with rubbish,dirty and smelly.They smelly.Besides,they even send the dirty clothes to their home in order to make them washed by their parents.As a result,it turns out to be the phenomenon on the picture at the beginning.

In short,it plays an important role in our personal life to be an independent person.Only in this way,can we all have a bright future.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

As the picture says that many college students send their dirty clothes to their home receiving the clean clothes from home in return,which takes me by great surprise.

To my point of view,it is significant for us to pay attention to self-reliance and learn to live well independently.Without doubt,college is an environment full of various phenomenon on earth,where we can not only master a large amount of academic knowledge but also know about life skill to some extent.As at the

same time.As a result,we are likely to make our dreams come true easier with the assistance of the kinds of skills.

With time passing by,the original dream may be going to change with time rolling by, which has been far from our aims.Eventually,it is common for us to find that more and more students get used to killing time,for instance,playing computer games,going shopping,absenting classes,drinking wine,etc,apart from which,they are also tired of washing clothes,cleaning the dormitories and so on,result from which,it is common for us to see that they fill the rooms with rubbish,dirty and smelly.Besides,they even send the dirty clothes to their home in order to make have them washed by their parents.As parents and send them back.As a result,it turns out to be the phenomenon on the picture at the beginning.

In short,it plays an important role in our personal life to be an independent person.Only in this way,can we all have a bright future.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

As the picture says that many college students send their dirty clothes to their home receiving the clean clothes from home in return,which takes me by great surprise.

To my point of view,it is significant for us to pay attention to self-reliance and learn to live well independently.Without doubt,college is an environment full of various phenomenon on earth,where we can not only master a large amount of academic knowledge but also know about life skill at the same time.As a result,we are likely to make our dreams come true easier with the assistance of the kinds of skills.

With time passing by,the original dream may be going to change with time rolling by, which has been far from our aims.Eventually,it is common for us to find that more and more students get used to killing time,for instance,playing computer games,going shopping,absenting classes,drinking wine,etc,apart from which,they are also tired of washing clothes,cleaning the dormitories and so on,result from which,it is common for us to see that they fill the rooms with rubbish,dirty and smelly.Besides,they even mail deliverthe dirty clothes laundry home in order to have them washed by their parents and send them back.As a result,it turns out to be the phenomenon on the picture at the beginning.

In short,it plays an important role in our personal life to be an independent person.Only in this way,can we all have a bright future.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

七

标题：【写作能力调研活动】Let the classics be classics

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

Some people hold the view that the classics are classics because they have stood the test of time. Therefore, they are to be treasured by people of all generations, ours being no exception. Others believe that the classics represent the wisdom of the past. As we are advancing towards the future, it is our responsibility to venture into the unknown and generate new understanding of man and nature. What is your view on this issue?

Write an essay in 100-500 words in response to this question and give reasons to support your position.

有 些人认为经典作品之所以经典，是因为它们经受住了时间的考验。因此，无论身处哪一个时代，人们都应该将它们视为珍宝，我们这代人当然也不例外。也有些人认为经典著作代表着过去的智慧。我们正向着未来大步迈进，探索未知世界、发掘对人与自然的新认识是我们的责任。对此，你有何看法？

就这一主题写一篇100-500词的文章(本科学生字数要求300-500字，其他学生要求100-300字)，并给出合适的理由证明你的观点。

答题时间：20xx年4月8日 18:00 至 20xx年5月10日 23:59

范文:null

Let classics be classics

As is known to us all, the classics play an important part in our life. The classics have stood the test of time, which is the reason why they remained and to be the classics with time going by. Without doubt, the whole nation's hard work turns out to be the essence through putting them to the test. Meanwhile, the essence is from various aspects, which includes history, culture, custom, etc.All of them have ever taken us by surprise because of their brilliants.

However, most people have different views on the classics with the great development of our country. On the one hand, some people consider them out of date. In their opinion, we are in the world needing to develop rather than fix our eyes on the past. On the other hand, some people regard them as the wisdom of the past. As a result of the classics, we learn many things from the previous generations to such an extent.

To my point of view, any thing has two sides. It is very necessary for us to analyse them and conclude from different aspect so as to get the fair and accurate answer. Although we are advancing towards the future, it is our responsibility to venture into the unknown and generate new understanding of man and nature and avoid the fault happened. We should still pay attention to

the reference function from the classics, which prevents us from unnecessary mistakes and winding courses. Besides, the classics are classics. Therefore, it is our duty to treasure them and learn from them in order to be an excellent person. Only in this way, can we all make a great difference to the world and make it to be better! At the same time, let the classics be classics all the time!

1.1

As is known to us all, the classics play an important part in our life.

[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 play...part 在教材中出现过 4525 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: part, piece, section, division, portion, fraction, fragment, segment, share 均可表示“整体的一部分”之意。

[批改提示] be known to... 表示“为...所熟知”。注意与be known by... 的区别。详情点击

important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

1.2

The classics have stood the test of time, which is the reason why they remained and to be the classics with time going by.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 stand...test 在教材中出现过 396 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: remain, linger, stay 均有“停留，逗留”之意。

[批改提示] reason表示“原因，理由”。注意与cause的区别。详情点击

the reason why 意为：...的原因是...，属于四六级经典高分句型。

1.3

Without doubt, the whole nation's hard work turns out to be the essence through putting them to the test.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: difficult, hard 均有“困难”之意。

[批改提示] through的近义表达有across，in term of，via。

[批改提示] nation表示“国家”。注意与country的区别。详情点击

1.4

Meanwhile, the essence is from various aspects, which includes history, culture, custom, etc.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: appearance, look, face, aspect 均含事物或人的“外表，容貌”之意。

[批改提示] 注意meantime和meanwhile的区别。

[批改提示] 注意custom和customs，costume区别。

1.5

All of them have ever taken us by surprise because of their brilliants.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: due to, owing to, because of, thanks to 均表示“由于”之意。 建议将by 改为 in 或 with。

第2段

2.1

However, most people have different views on the classics with the great

development of our country.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...view 在教材中出现过 4707 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: development, evolution 都表示“发展，进化”之意。

[批改提示] country表示“国家”。注意与state的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

[批改提示] 注意country和nation，village区别。

2.2

On the one hand, some people consider them out of date.

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

[批改提示] consider近义表达有think about/ reflect on/ ponder/ cogitate upon/ contemplate

out of date意为：过时的，陈旧的，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！

[批改提示] 注意consider和believe区别。

2.3

In their opinion, we are in the world needing to develop rather than fix our eyes on the past.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 fix...eye 在教材中出现过 217 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: lack, need, want, require 均有“缺少，短少”之意。注意require和need的区别。

[批改提示] fix近义表达有focus/ direct at/ fasten on

[批改提示] develop近义表达有advance/ progress/ evolve/ thrive/ flourish

2.4

On the other hand, some people regard them as the wisdom of the past.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: admire, honour, respect, regard, esteem 均含“尊重，钦佩”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

2.5

As a result of the classics, we learn many things from the previous generations to such an extent.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 learn...thing 在教材中出现过 1470 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: previous, foregoing, preceding, prior, former 均可表示“在前的”之意。

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

第3段

3.1

To my point of view, any thing has two sides.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: phase, aspect, side, angle 均有“方面”之意。

3.2

It is very necessary for us to analyse them and conclude from different aspect so as to get the fair and accurate answer.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: accurate, exact, precise, right, true, correct 均含“准确的，

正确的”之意。

[批改提示] very的近义表达有extremely, exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。 建议将it is very necessary 改为it will be of great use。

[批改提示] 注意conclude和deduce区别。

3.3

Although we are advancing towards the future, it is our responsibility to venture into the unknown and generate new understanding of man and nature and avoid the fault happened.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 generate...understanding 在教材中出现过 4 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 avoid...fault 在教材中出现过 6 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: advance, progress, proceed, move on, go 均含“前进，行进，进展”之意。

[批改提示] 查看understanding 和comprehension的区别。

[批改提示] fault表示“缺点，毛病”。注意与error的区别。详情点击

3.4

We should still pay attention to the reference function from the classics, which prevents us from unnecessary mistakes and winding courses.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 pay...attention 在教材中出现过 18138 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: duty, obligation, responsibility, function 都有“义务，职责”之意。

[批改提示] unnecessary的近义表达有undue。

[批改提示] 注意course和coarse区别。

3.5

Besides, the classics are classics.

[批改提示] besides表示“除了（包括）”。注意与except的区别。详情点击

3.6

Therefore, it is our duty to treasure them and learn from them in order to be an excellent person.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: duty, obligation, responsibility, function 都有“义务，职责”之意。

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

[批改提示] person表示“人”。注意与people的区别。详情点击

3.7

Only in this way, can we all make a great difference to the world and make it to be better!

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...difference 在教材中出现过 16384 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: big, large, great, grand 均含“大的”之意。

[批改提示] 注意difference和disparity，distinction区别。

3.8

At the same time, let the classics be classics all the time!

[学习提示] 易混词汇: same, identical, very, equal, equivalent 均含“相同的”之意。

八

标题：What I Should Appreciate in My Life

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于250 字

满分: 100

要求：

Direction: In text “Three Days to See”, Helen Keller suggest us to “live each day with a gentleness, a vigor, and a keenness of appreciation”. Do you think you have something or someone to appreciate in your life？ Please write an essay entitled “What I Should Appreciate in My Life” You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

1) 生活中应该感恩的人或事有什么

2) 为什么这些人或事值得我们感恩

What I Should Appreciate in My Life

Life is precious, which make up with the family, society, country and the world. At the same time, it is appreciation that we should always remember all the life. It is necessary for us to live in harmony with the people around us, working happily, making great progress, even achieving a lot that not only include something mentally but also physically to appreciate. It turns out to be a bright future without doubt that is not merely helpful to me. Therefore, it plays an important part in our life to learn to appreciate to some extent.

On the one hand, we should behave ourselves and learn to appreciate.However, what should I appreciate in my life? In my opinion, we should appreciate everyone around me. We should appreciate our parents because they give us a wonderful world. Because of neighbors, I am likely to get rid of matters when relatives are away from us. It is possible for me get out of trouble and get rid of sadness with roommates accompanying me. Thankful for what my teachers have done for me, result from which it is possible for me to be a successful person.Certainly, it is also significant for me to thank for competitors who make me to improve myself to the best of my ability and make great progress, etc. On the other hand, we should appreciate what others do for us. It is all things above that we should appreciate in our life.

1.1

Life is precious, which make up with the family, society, country and the world.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: valuable, precious 均含“贵重的，有价值的”之意。

[批改提示] country表示“国家”。注意与state的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] 注意country和nation，village区别。

1.2

At the same time, it is appreciation that we should always remember all the life.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 remember...life 在教材中出现过 147 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: memorize, remember, recall, recolect, remind 均有“记忆，记住，回忆”之意。

[批改提示] 注意the life/life的区别。

1.3

It is necessary for us to live in harmony with the people around us, working happily, making great progress, even achieving a lot that not only include something mentally but also physically to appreciate.

[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 achieve...lot 在教材中出现过 91 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...progress 在教材中出现过 10001 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: attain, reach, achieve, arrive 均有“达到”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

1.4

It turns out to be a bright future without doubt that is not merely helpful to me.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: bright, brilliant, glowing, radiant, luminous 均含有“明亮的”之意。

1.5

Therefore, it plays an important part in our life to learn to appreciate to some extent.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 play...part 在教材中出现过 4525 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: appreciate, enjoy 均含“欣赏”之意。

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

第2段

2.1

On the one hand, we should behave ourselves and learn to appreciate.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: appreciate, enjoy 均含“欣赏”之意。

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

2.2

However, what should I appreciate in my life?

[学习提示] 易混词汇: appreciate, enjoy 均含“欣赏”之意。

2.3

In my opinion, we should appreciate everyone around me.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: appreciate, enjoy 均含“欣赏”之意。

2.4

We should appreciate our parents because they give us a wonderful world.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 give...world 在教材中出现过 220 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: appreciate, enjoy 均含“欣赏”之意。

2.5

Because of neighbors, I am likely to get rid of matters when relatives are away from us.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: due to, owing to, because of, thanks to 均表示“由于”之意。

2.6

It is possible for me get out of trouble and get rid of sadness with roommates accompanying me.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: accompany, conduct, attend, escort 均有“陪同，伴随”之意

[批改提示] possible的近义表达有feasible。

2.7

Thankful for what my teachers have done for me, result from which it is possible for me to be a successful person.

[批改提示] successful的近义表达有triumphant。

[批改提示] person表示“人”。注意与people的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] possible的近义表达有feasible。

[批改提示] 注意grateful和thankful的区别。

2.8

Certainly, it is also significant for me to thank for competitors who make me to improve myself to the best of my ability and make great progress, etc.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: ability, capacity, capability, genius, talent, competence, faculty, gift, aptitude 均可表示人的“能力，才能”之意。

[批改提示] competitor的近义表达有rival或opponent。

[批改提示] 查看who和whoever，whom的区别。

第3段

3.1

On the other hand, we should appreciate what others do for us.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: appreciate, enjoy 均含“欣赏”之意。

3.2

It is all things above that we should appreciate in our life.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: appreciate, enjoy 均含“欣赏”之意。

Life is precious,which make up with the family,society,country and the world.At the same time,it is appreciation that we should always remember all the life.Thanks to appreciation,it is possible for us to live in harmony with the people around us, work happily,make great progress,even achieve a lot which not only include something mentally but also physically.It turns out to be a bright future without doubt that is at least helpful to me.Therefore,it plays an important part in our life to learn to appreciate to some extent.

On the one hand,we should behave ourselves and form the habit to appreciate.However,what should I appreciate in my life? In my opinion,we should appreciate everyone around me.We should appreciate our parents because they give a wonderful for us.Because of neighbors,I am likely to get rid of matters when relatives are away from us.Thank for roommates,it is possible for me get out of trouble and sadness.Meanwhile,I Thankful for what my teachers have done for me,result from which it is possible for me to be a

successful person.Certainly,it is also significant for me to appreciate competitors who make me to improve myself to the best of my ability and make great progress,etc.

On the other hand,we should appreciate everything other body do for us,which is necessary for us to live,work and make progress.It is all things above that we should keep in mind,which is what we should appreciate in our life.

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Life is precious,which make up with the family,society,country and the world.At the same time,it is appreciation that we should always remember all the life.Thanks to appreciation,it is possible for us to live in harmony with the people around us, work happily,make great progress,even achieve a lot which not only include something mentally but also physically.It turns out to be a bright future without doubt that is at least helpful to me.Therefore,it plays an important part in our life to learn to appreciate to some extent.

On the one hand,we should behave ourselves and form the habit to appreciate.However,what should I appreciate in my life? In my opinion,we should appreciate everyone around me.We should appreciate our parents because they give a wonderful for us.Because of neighbors,I am likely to get rid of matters when relatives are away from us.Thank for roommates,it is possible for me get out of trouble and sadness.Meanwhile,I Thankful for what my teachers have done for me,result from which it is possible for me to be a successful person.Certainly,it is also significant for me to appreciate competitors who make me to improve myself to the best of my ability and make great progress,etc.

On the other hand,we should appreciate everything other body others do for us,which is necessary for us to live,work and make progress.It us.It is all things above that we shouldkeep in mind,which is what we should appreciate in our life.

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On the one hand,we should behave ourselves and form the habit learn to appreciate.However,what should I appreciate in my life? In my opinion,we

should appreciate everyone around me.We should appreciate our parents because they give us a wonderfulfor us.Because world.Because of neighbors,I am likely to get rid of matters when relatives are away from us.Thank for us.Thanks to roommates,it is possible for me get out of trouble and sadness.Meanwhile,I Thankful for what my teachers have done for me,result from which it is possible for me to be a successful person.Certainly,it is also significant for me to appreciate thank for competitors who make me to improve myself to the best of my ability and make great progress,etc.

On the other hand,we should appreciate everything what others do for us.It is all things above that we should appreciate in our life.

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Life is precious,which make up with the family,society,country and the world.At the same time,it is appreciation that we should always remember all the life.Learning to appreciate,itlife.It is possible for us to live in harmony with the people around us, work happily,make great progress,even achieve a lot which not only include something mentally but alsophysically.It physically to appreciate.It turns out to be a bright future without doubt that is not merely helpful to me.Therefore,it plays an important part in our life to learn to appreciate to some extent.

On the one hand,we should behave ourselves and learn to appreciate.However,what should I appreciate in my life? In my opinion,we should appreciate everyone around me.We should appreciate our parents because they give us a wonderful world.Because of neighbors,I am likely to get rid of matters when relatives are away from us.Thanks to roommates,it us.It is possible for me get out of trouble and sadness.Meanwhile,I sadness with roommates accompanying me.Meanwhile,I Thankful for what my teachers have done for me,result from which it is possible for me to be a successful person.Certainly,it is also significant for me to thank for competitors who make me to improve myself to the best of my ability and make great progress,etc. On the other hand,we should appreciate what others do for us.It is all things above that we should appreciate in our life.

说明：

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Life is precious,which make up with the family,society,country and the world.At the same time,it is appreciation that we should always remember all the life.It is possible necessaryfor us to live in harmony with the people around us, work

happily,make working happily,making great progress,even achieve achieving a lot which that not only include something mentally but also physically to appreciate.It turns out to be a bright future without doubt that is not merely helpful to me.Therefore,it plays an important part in our life to learn to appreciate to some extent.

On the one hand,we should behave ourselves and learn to appreciate.However,what should I appreciate in my life? In my opinion,we should appreciate everyone around me.We should appreciate our parents because they give us a wonderful world.Because of neighbors,I am likely to get rid of matters when relatives are away from us.It is possible for me get out of trouble and get rid of sadness with roommates accompanying me.Meanwhile,I Thankfulme.Thankful for what my teachers have done for me,result from which it is possible for me to be a successful person.Certainly,it is also significant for me to thank for competitors who make me to improve myself to the best of my ability and make great progress,etc.

On the other hand,we should appreciate what others do for us.It is all things above that we should appreciate in our life.

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九

标题：A Letter of Apology to Mother Nature

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于300 字

满分: 100

要求：

Please follow the outline given below:

1. What has man done wrong to Mother Nature?

2. Why should man apologize?

3. What should man do to restore the health of Mother Nature?

A Letter of Apology to Mother Nature

Great changes have taken place in our country during the recent years.Meanwhile, there are also much destruction appearing, which not only does much damage to the environment but also hurts humans themselves to such an extent. Result from the destruction, there is no doubt that many environmental problems arise eventually. For example, acid rain, land desertification, marine pollution, reduction of biodiversity, etc. The nature revenged people and made them know the great power of nature, which warns the people who have destroyed the mother nature in order to help them to be a person who tries his or her best to protect the environment. Besides, there are

many diseases which cannot be cured easily arising.

Therefore, it is necessary for us to protect the environment so as to make the environment around us better than that before.

What's more, it is necessary for people to apologize for what they do have damaged the environment and done harm to the mother nature, which will help them to a better person than before and make them to be a successful person to have a wonderful future.

Besides, it is also significant for us to do everything to the best of our ability in order to restore the health of the mother nature. On the one hand, we shouldn't throw litters here and there. Certainly, not spitting casually is also important and so on. On the other hand, the local government should take active action as well, such as taking some laws to limit the people's behaviors in order to make them to behave themselves. Only in this way, can we all live a world with a good environment and restore the health of mother nature. In short, we should take action right now.

1.1

Great changes have taken place in our country during the recent years.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 take...place 在教材中出现过 43 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: big, large, great, grand 均含“大的”之意。

[批改提示] country表示“国家”。注意与state的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] 注意country和nation，village区别。

1.2

Meanwhile, there are also much destruction appearing, which not only does much damage to the environment but also hurts humans themselves to such an extent.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 hurt...human 在教材中出现过 9 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 do...damage 在教材中出现过 4155 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: appear, emerge, show, loom 均有“出现”之意。

[批改提示] 注意damage和harm区别。

[批改提示] 注意destruction和ruin区别。

1.3

Result from the destruction, there is no doubt that many environmental problems arise eventually.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: arise, originate, result 均有“起源，源自”之意。

[批改提示] 注意destruction和ruin区别。

[批改提示] arise表示“上升，出现，发生”。注意与rise的区别。详情点击 There is no doubt that 意思是毫无疑问，是四六级经典句型。

1.4

For example, acid rain, land desertification, marine pollution, reduction of biodiversity, etc.

[低频警示] land...desertification 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[学习提示] 易混词汇: example, instance, case, sample, illustration, specimen 均有“例子，事例”之意。

1.5

The nature revenged people and made them know the great power of nature, which warns the people who have destroyed the mother nature in order to help them to be a person who tries his or her best to protect the environment.

[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

[批改提示] person表示“人”。注意与people的区别。详情点击

1.6

Besides, there are many diseases which cannot be cured easily arising.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: arise, originate, result 均有“起源，源自”之意。

[批改提示] besides表示“除了（包括）”。注意与except的区别。详情点击

第2段

2.1

Therefore, it is necessary for us to protect the environment so as to make the environment around us better than that before.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: surroundings, environment 均含“环境”之意。

[批改提示] better than在做“优于”讲时，近义表达有superior to。

第3段

3.1

What's more, it is necessary for people to apologize for what they do have damaged the environment and done harm to the mother nature, which will help them to a better person than before and make them to be a successful person to have a wonderful future.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...future 在教材中出现过 2575 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: surroundings, environment 均含“环境”之意。

[批改提示] successful的近义表达有triumphant。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

[批改提示] damage近义表达有hurt/ harm/ ruin/ mutilate/ incapacitate

第4段

4.1

Besides, it is also significant for us to do everything to the best of our ability in order to restore the health of the mother nature.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 restore...health 在教材中出现过 242 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: ability, capacity, capability, genius, talent, competence, faculty, gift, aptitude 均可表示人的“能力，才能”之意。

[批改提示] besides表示“除了（包括）”。注意与except的区别。详情点击

4.2

On the one hand, we shouldn't throw litters here and there.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: waste, garbage, rubbish, litter, debris, junk 均含“废物，垃

圾”之意。

4.3

Certainly, not spitting casually is also important and so on.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: certainly, naturally, of course, surely 均有“肯定地，当然”之意。

important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

4.4

On the other hand, the local government should take active action as well, such as taking some laws to limit the people's behaviors in order to make them to behave themselves.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 limit...behavior 在教材中出现过 14 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: act, action, deed, operation, performance 均含“行为，行动”之意。

建议将limit the people改为regulate people's behavior。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

4.5

Only in this way, can we all live a world with a good environment and restore the health of mother nature.

[低频警示] the health of mother nature 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 live...world 在教材中出现过 33 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 restore...health 在教材中出现过 242 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: surroundings, environment 均含“环境”之意。

4.6

In short, we should take action right now.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: act, action, deed, operation, performance 均含“行为，行动”之意。

Great changes have taken place in our country recent years.Meanwhile,there are also much destruction coming into being,which not only does much damage to the environment but also hurts humans themselves to such an extent.Result from the destruction which people do, there is no doubt that many environment problems arise eventually,for instance acid rain,soil desertification,marine pollution,reduction of biodiversity,etc.All of the damages punish people in turn who sees the great power of the nature,which warns the people who have destroyed the mother nature in order to help them to be a person who try his or her best to protect the environment.Besides,there are many refractory disease which cannot be cured easily arising.

Therefore, it is necessary for us to a environment protector so as to make the environment around us better than that before.

In my opinion,it is necessary for people to apologize for what they do have damaged the environment and do harm to the mother nature,which will help

them to form better characters than before and make them to be a successful person to have a wonderful future.

To my point of view, it is significant for us to do everything to the best of our ability in order to restore the health of the mother nature.On the one hand,we shouldn't throw litters here and there.Certainly, not spitting casually is also important and so on.On the other hand,the local government should take active action as well,such as take some laws to limit the people's behaviors in order to make them to behave themselves.Only in this way,can we all live a world with a good environment and restore the health of mother nature.In short,we should take action right now.

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Great changes have taken place in our country during the recent years.Meanwhile,there are also much destruction coming into being,which appearing,which not only does much damage to the environment but also hurts humans themselves to such an extent.Result from the destruction which that people do, there is no doubt that many problems aboutenvironment problems arise eventually,for instance eventually.For example, acid rain,soil desertification,marine pollution,reduction of biodiversity,etc.All of the damages punish people in turn who sees the great power of the nature,which nature in turn,which warns the people who have destroyed the mother nature in order to help them to be a person who try tries his or her best to protect the environment.Besides,there are many refractory disease diseases which cannot be cured easily arising.

Therefore, it is necessary for us to a protect the environment protector so as to make the environment around us better than that before.

In my opinion,it is necessary for people to apologize for what they do have damaged the environment and do done harm to the mother nature,which will help them to form a bettercharacters person than before and make them to be a successful person to have a wonderful future.

To my point of view, it is significant for us to do everything to the best of our ability in order to restore the health of the mother nature.On the one hand,we shouldn't throw litters here and there.Certainly, not spitting casually is also important and so on.On the other hand,the local government should take active action as well,such as take taking some laws to limit the people's behaviors in order to make them to behave themselves.Only in this way,can we all live a world with a good environment and restore the health of mother nature.In short,we should take action right now.

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Great changes have taken place in our country during the recent years.Meanwhile,there are also much destruction appearing,which not only does much damage to the environment but also hurts humans themselves to such an extent.Result from the destruction that people do, there is no doubt that many problems about the environment arise eventually.For example, acid rain,soil desertification,marine pollution,reduction of biodiversity,etc.All of the damages punish people who see and make them know the great power of the nature in turn,which warns the people who have destroyed the mother nature in order to help them to be a person who tries his or her best to protect the environment.Besides,there are many diseases which cannot be cured easily arising.

Therefore, it is necessary for us to protect the environment so as to make the environment around us better than that before.

In my opinion,it is necessary for people to apologize for what they do have damaged the environment and done harm to the mother nature,which will help them to a better person than before and make them to be a successful person to have a wonderful future.

To my point of view, it is significant for us to do everything to the best of our ability in order to restore the health of the mother nature.On the one hand,we shouldn't throw litters here and there.Certainly, not spitting casually is also important and so on.On the other hand,the local government should take active action as well,such as taking some laws to limit the people's behaviors in order to make them to behave themselves.Only in this way,can we all live a world with a good environment and restore the health of mother nature.In short,we should take action right now.

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Great changes have taken place in our country during the recent years.Meanwhile,there are also much destruction appearing,which not only does much damage to the environment but also hurts humans themselves to such an extent.Result from the destruction that people do, destruction, there is no doubt that many environment problems about the environmentarise eventually.For example, acid rain,soil desertification,marine pollution,reduction ofbiodiversity,etc.All of the damages punish biodiversity,etc.The nature revenges people andmake makes them know the great power of the nature in turn,which ,which warns the people who have destroyed the mother nature in

order to help them to be a person who tries his or her best to protect the environment.Besides,there are many diseases which cannot be cured easily arising.

Therefore, it is necessary for us to protect the environment so as to make the environment around us better than that before.

In my opinion,it

What's more,it is necessary for people to apologize for what they do have damaged the environment and done harm to the mother nature,which will help them to a better person than before and make them to be a successful person to have a wonderful future.

To my point of view, future.

Besides, it is also significant for us to do everything to the best of our ability in order to restore the health of the mother nature.On the one hand,we shouldn't throw litters here and there.Certainly, not spitting casually is also important and so on.On the other hand,the local government should take active action as well,such as taking some laws to limit the people's behaviors in order to make them to behave themselves.Only in this way,can we all live a world with a good environment and restore the health of mother nature.In short,we should take action right now.

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Great changes have taken place in our country during the recent years.Meanwhile,there are also much destruction appearing,which not only does much damage to the environment but also hurts humans themselves to such an extent.Result from the destruction, there is no doubt that many environmental problems arise eventually.For example, acid rain,soilrain,land desertification,marine pollution,reduction of biodiversity,etc.The nature revengesrevenged people and makes made them know the great power of the nature,which warns the people who have destroyed the mother nature in order to help them to be a person who tries his or her best to protect the environment.Besides,there are many diseases which cannot be cured easily arising.

Therefore, it is necessary for us to protect the environment so as to make the environment around us better than that before.

What's more,it is necessary for people to apologize for what they do have damaged the environment and done harm to the mother nature,which will help them to a better person than before and make them to be a successful person to have a wonderful future.

Besides, it is also significant for us to do everything to the best of our ability in

order to restore the health of the mother nature.On the one hand,we shouldn't throw litters here and there.Certainly, not spitting casually is also important and so on.On the other hand,the local government should take active action as well,such as taking some laws to limit the people's behaviors in order to make them to behave themselves.Only in this way,can we all live a world with a good environment and restore the health of mother nature.In short,we should take action right now.

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十

标题：Living in Harmony

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

Directions: For this part, you'll have to write an essay entitled Living in Harmony. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

1) 人为什么要和睦相处；

2) 你是如何和同学朋友们和睦相处的；

3) 和谐的人际关系和社会环境对于人的发展是否有影响。

Living in harmnony

As is known to us all, living in harmony is too important in our daily life to ignore not only on campus but also in society. With the help of it, it is very likely for us to study, work, live better than now and have a good future later. Only in this way, can we all make good contributions to our country sooner or later.

In my opinion, it is vital for us to learn to cooperate with others and learn to forgive the other people at the same time, which plays an important role on living in harmony. Result from forgiveness, it is possible for us to take an active part in the activities to collaborate with others better than don't forgive so as to live in harmony because no relationship can survive without the fresh air that benefits forgiveness. Whenever it is always unnecessary for us to be particular to things around us, by which people around us will be deeply impressed and we will leave a bad impression on them. We students should get on well with others particularly in campus. Such is a good opportunity for us to make friends, who will be the best ones in our life now and later or have some cooperative learning. Therefore, it is always good to live in harmony with others.

What's more, it is also significant for us to live in harmony in society. Even living in harmony will become our advantage over others, which will be the bricks

picked up to knock on the door to have a good career and help us to be a successful person in the future. Besides, living in harmony will promote the development of our country because it will turn out to be offering us a stable environment not only mentally but also physically to some extent. Living in harmony will be always our priceless treasure that will not let go of us all the time.

第1段

1.1

As is known to us all, living in harmony is too important in our daily life to ignore not only on campus but also in society.

[教师点评] living in harmony is too important in our daily life to ignore :too....to... 这一结构 整个句子的主语是living in harmony, 所以to 后面应该是be ignored

[学习提示] 易混词汇: harmony, agreement, concord, unity, accord 均有“和谐，一致”之意。

[批改提示] be known to... 表示“为...所熟知”。注意与be known by... 的区别。详情点击

important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

[批改提示] too和either都有“也，亦都”的意思。too用于肯定句，either用于否定句。

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

1.2

With the help of it, it is very likely for us to study, work, live better than now and have a good future later.

[教师点评] it is very likely for us : we are likely to .......

[教师点评] than now : 删除

[教师点评] later : 删除

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...future 在教材中出现过 2575 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: help, aid, assistance, support 均有“帮助，支持”之意。

[批改提示] 注意live与living的区别。

[批改提示] better than在做“优于”讲时，近义表达有superior to。

[批改提示] very的近义表达有extremely, exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。

1.3

Only in this way, can we all make good contributions to our country sooner or later.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...contribution 在教材中出现过 4906 次

[批改提示] country表示“国家”。注意与state的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] 注意country和nation，village区别。

第2段

2.1

In my opinion, it is vital for us to learn to cooperate with others and learn to forgive the other people at the same time, which plays an important role on living in harmony.

[教师点评] In my opinion, it is vital for us to learn to cooperate with others and learn to forgive the other people at the same time, which plays an important role on living in harmony. : 好

[教师点评] on living in harmony : in a good interpersonal relationship

[学习提示] 易混词汇: excuse, pardon, forgive, overlook 均有“原谅”之意。

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 play...role 在教材中出现过 26773 次

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

[批改提示] cooperate近义表达有pull together/ work together/ join forces/ coordinate/ collaborate

2.2

Result from forgiveness, it is possible for us to take an active part in the activities to collaborate with others better than don't forgive so as to live in harmony because no relationship can survive without the fresh air that benefits forgiveness.

[教师点评] Result from : 改为 With

[教师点评] the activities to : 删除

[教师点评] collaborate : collaborating

[教师点评] take : play

[教师点评] better than don't forgive : 累赘，删除

[教师点评] without the fresh air that benefits forgiveness : 这里用的不恰当，其实可以用课文里的那个句子。

[学习提示] 易混词汇: active, energetic, vigorous, brisk, lively 均有“积极的，活跃的”之意。

[批改提示] better than在做“优于”讲时，近义表达有superior to。

[批改提示] 注意activities和activity的区别。

[批改提示] possible的近义表达有feasible。

2.3

Whenever it is always unnecessary for us to be particular to things around us, by which people around us will be deeply impressed and we will leave a bad impression on them.

[教师点评] 这句意思表达的不太清楚哦！confused!

[低频警示] a bad impression on them 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 leave...impression 在教材中出现过 1206 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: idea, concept, conception, thought, notion,impression 均有“思想，观点，观念”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

[高分表达] 高分词组，leave...impression on意为“给某人留下...印象”。

2.4

We students should get on well with others particularly in campus.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: specially, especially, particularly 均可表示“特别地”之意。

2.5

Such is a good opportunity for us to make friends, who will be the best ones in our life now and later or have some cooperative learning.

[教师点评] Such : 表达模糊，应明确指出

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...learning 在教材中出现过 69 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...friend 在教材中出现过 1965 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: friend, mate, acquaintance, pal 都有“朋友”之意。

[批改提示] opportunity表示“机会”。注意与chance的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] 查看who和whoever，whom的区别。

2.6

Therefore, it is always good to live in harmony with others.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: harmony, agreement, concord, unity, accord 均有“和谐，一致”之意。

第3段

3.1

What's more, it is also significant for us to live in harmony in society.

[教师点评] live in harmony : with whom?

[学习提示] 易混词汇: harmony, agreement, concord, unity, accord 均有“和谐，一致”之意。

what's more意思是另外，而且?，是四六级经典补充类词组。

3.2

Even living in harmony will become our advantage over others, which will be the bricks picked up to knock on the door to have a good career and help us to be a successful person in the future.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...career 在教材中出现过 4142 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: advantage, benefit, interest, favour, profit, gain 均有“利益，好处”之意。

[批改提示] person表示“人”。注意与people的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] 注意与merit和good point的区别

[批改提示] help近义表达有support/ assist/ aid

3.3

Besides, living in harmony will promote the development of our country because it will turn out to be offering us a stable environment not only mentally but also physically to some extent.

[教师点评] 这句感觉可要可不要

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 offer...environment 在教材中出现过 98 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 promote...development 在教材中出现过 488 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: development, evolution 都表示“发展，进化”之意。

[批改提示] 注意country和nation，village区别。

[批改提示] country表示“国家”。注意与state的区别。详情点击

3.4

Living in harmony will be always our priceless treasure that will not let go of us all the time.

[教师点评] let go o : let go of 这个词用在这里不太恰当，表达的意思也不太清楚

[学习提示] 易混词汇: harmony, agreement, concord, unity, accord 均有“和谐，一致”之意。

As is known to us all,living in harmony is too important in our daily life to ignore not only in the campus but also in society.With the help of it,it is very likely for us to study,work,live better than now and have a good future later.Only in this way,can we all make good contributions to our country sooner or later.

In my opinion,it is vital for us to learn to cooperate with others and learn to forgive the other people at the same time,which plays an important role on living in harmony.Result from forgiveness,it is possible for us to take an active part in teams to collaborate with others better than don't forgive so as to live in harmony because no relationship can survive without the oxygen of forgiveness.Whenever it is always unnecessary for us to be particular to things around us,by which people around us will be deeply impressed and we will have some bad impressions on them.We students should learn to get in well with others particularly in campus.Such is a good opportunity for us to make friends,who will be the best ones in our life now and later or have some cooperative learning with us.Therefore,it is always good to live in harmony with others.

What's more,it is significant for us to live in harmony in society as well.Even living in harmony will become a advantage over others,which will be the bricks picked up to knock on the door of career and help you to be a successful person in the future.Besides,living in harmony will promote the development of our country because it will turn out to be offering us a stable environment not only mentally but also physically to some extent.Living in harmony will be always our priceless treasure that will not let go of us all the time.

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As is known to us all,living in harmony is too important in our daily life to ignore not only in the on campus but also in society.With the help of it,it is very likely for us to study,work,live better than now and have a good future later.Only in this way,can we all make good contributions to our country sooner or later. In my opinion,it is vital for us to learn to cooperate with others and learn to forgive the other people at the same time,which plays an important role on living in harmony.Result from forgiveness,it is possible for us to take an active part in teams the activities to collaborate with others better than don't forgive

so as to live in harmony because no relationship can survive without the oxygen of fresh air that is from forgiveness.Whenever it is always unnecessary for us to be particular to things around us,by which people around us will be deeply impressed and we will have some a bad impressions impression on them.We students should learn to get in on well with others particularly in campus.Such is a good opportunity for us to make friends,who will be the best ones in our life now and later or have some cooperative learning with us.Therefore,it learning.Therefore,it is always good to live in harmony with others.

What's more,it is also significant for us to live in harmony in society as well.Evensociety.Even living in harmony will become a our advantage over others,which will be the bricks picked up to knock on the door of to have a good career and help you us to be a successful person in the future.Besides,living in harmony will promote the development of our country because it will turn out to be offering us a stable environment not only mentally but also physically to some extent.Living in harmony will be always our priceless treasure that will not let go of us all the time.

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As is known to us all,living in harmony is too important in our daily life to ignore not only on campus but also in society.With the help of it,it is very likely for us to study,work,live better than now and have a good future later.Only in this way,can we all make good contributions to our country sooner or later.

In my opinion,it is vital for us to learn to cooperate with others and learn to forgive the other people at the same time,which plays an important role on living in harmony.Result from forgiveness,it is possible for us to take an active part in the activities to collaborate with others better than don't forgive so as to live in harmony because no relationship can survive without the fresh air that is from benefits forgiveness.Whenever it is always unnecessary for us to be particular to things around us,by which people around us will be deeply impressed and we will have leave a bad impression on them.We students shouldlearn to get on well with others particularly in campus.Such is a good opportunity for us to make friends,who will be the best ones in our life now and later or have some cooperative learning.Therefore,it is always good to live in harmony with others.

What's more,it is also significant for us to live in harmony in society.Even living in harmony will become our advantage over others,which will be the bricks picked up to knock on the door to have a good career and help us to be a successful person in the future.Besides,living in harmony will promote the development of our country because it will turn out to be offering us a stable

environment not only mentally but also physically to some extent.Living in harmony will be always our priceless treasure that will not let go of us all the time.

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【和丽君总评】文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。 但是要注意句子要简洁明了，长句子要自己把握好、谨慎使用，否则很容易出错

As is known to us all, living in harmony is too important in our daily life to ignore not only on campus but also in society.

living in harmony is too important in our daily life to ignore :too....to... 这一结构 整个句子的主语是living in harmony, 所以to 后面应该是be ignored

With the help of it, it is very likely for us to study, work, live better than now and have a good future later.

it is very likely for us :we are likely to .......

than now :删除

later:删除

In my opinion, it is vital for us to learn to cooperate with others and learn to forgive the other people at the same time, which plays an important role on living in harmony.

In my opinion, it is vital for us to learn to cooperate with others and learn to forgive the other people at the same time, which plays an important role on living in harmony.:好

on living in harmony:in a good interpersonal relationship

Result from forgiveness, it is possible for us to take an active part in the activities to collaborate with others better than don't forgive so as to live in harmony because no relationship can survive without the fresh air that benefits forgiveness.

Result from :改为 With

the activities to :删除

collaborate :collaborating

take :play

better than don't forgive :累赘，删除

without the fresh air that benefits forgiveness:这里用的不恰当，其实可以用课文里的那个句子。

Such is a good opportunity for us to make friends, who will be the best ones in our life now and later or have some cooperative learning.

Such:表达模糊，应明确指出

What's more, it is also significant for us to live in harmony in society.

live in harmony:with whom?

Living in harmony will be always our priceless treasure that will not let go of us all the time.

let go o:let go of 这个词用在这里不太恰当，表达的意思也不太清楚

Whenever it is always unnecessary for us to be particular to things around us, by which people around us will be deeply impressed and we will leave a bad impression on them.

这句意思表达的不太清楚哦！confused!

Besides, living in harmony will promote the development of our country because it will turn out to be offering us a stable environment not only mentally but also physically to some extent.

这句感觉可要可不要

十一

标题：A Great Man / Woman

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

1. Write an essay about a great man or woman who is or was disabled.

2. Write about his / her story

3. What qualities in this person inspire you the most?

A Great Woman--Helen Keller

As we know, Helen Keller is a great woman not noly because of her unique achievement but also because of her persevering character, which helps her conquer the difficulties as well as encourage someone else overcome many matters who turn out to be a bright future!

Helen Keller was born in American, who is a blind and deaf writer but a disabled educator. She was unlucky who lost her vision, hearing and tongue after she was born for nineteen. However, she created a wonder in the world, which has an important influnce on various people at home and abroad. With the help of Sulivan, she not noly learned to write, read but also learned to talk. Meanwhile, she also graduated from Harvard University after she achieved her school work for four years. Certainly, she writed many works for instance, MY LIFE, THREE DAYS TO SEE, MIDSTREAM, etc. These works have affected a lot of generations.Last but not least, she made contributions to the disabled.

As for me, Helen Keller is a great heroine in my mind which is not just up to her achievement and character. I have to speak highly of her. In short, I will try my best to do anything in my life in future in order to have a good future.

1.1

As we know, Helen Keller is a great woman not noly because of her unique achievement but also because of her persevering character, which helps her conquer the difficulties as well as encourage someone else overcome many

matters who turn out to be a bright future!

[拼写错误] 拼写不规范，建议将not noly改为not only。

[低频警示] persevering...character 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[低频警示] overcome...matter 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[拼写错误] noly 拼写错误，可替换选项为：Nolly, only, nobly

[低频警示] her unique achievement 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

第2段

2.1

Helen Keller was born in American, who is a blind and deaf writer but a disabled educator.

[低频警示] disabled...educator 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[低频警示] a disabled educator 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[学习提示] 易混词汇: author, writer 均有“作者，作家”之意。

[批改提示] 查看who和whoever，whom的区别。

2.2

She was unlucky who lost her vision, hearing and tongue after she was born for nineteen.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: lose, miss, misplace 均有“丢失，遗失”之意。

[批改提示] 查看who和whoever，whom的区别。

2.3

However, she created a wonder in the world, which has an important influnce on various people at home and abroad.

[拼写错误] influnce 拼写错误，可替换选项为：influence, influenced, influences

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 create...wonder 在教材中出现过 9 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: create, compose, design, invent, make, produce 均有“创造，制作”之意。

important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

2.4

With the help of Sulivan, she not noly learned to write, read but also learned to talk.

[拼写错误] 拼写不规范，建议将not noly改为not only。

[拼写错误] noly 拼写错误，可替换选项为：Nolly, only, nobly

[学习提示] 易混词汇: help, aid, assistance, support 均有“帮助，支持”之意。

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

2.5

Meanwhile, she also graduated from Harvard University after she achieved her school work for four years.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 achieve...work 在教材中出现过 6 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: attain, reach, achieve, arrive 均有“达到”之意。

[批改提示] 注意meantime和meanwhile的区别。

2.6

Certainly, she writed many works for instance, MY LIFE, THREE DAYS TO SEE, MIDSTREAM, etc.

[拼写错误] 拼写不规范，建议将writed改为written

[学习提示] 易混词汇: certainly, naturally, of course, surely 均有“肯定地，当然”之意。

2.7

These works have affected a lot of generations.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 affect...lot 在教材中出现过 127 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: affect, influence, impress 均含“影响”之意。

2.8

Last but not least, she made contributions to the disabled.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...contribution 在教材中出现过 4906 次

第3段

3.1

As for me, Helen Keller is a great heroine in my mind which is not just up to her achievement and character.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: alphabet, letter, character, script 均有“字母”之意。

[批改提示] character表示“特征，性格”。注意与characteristic的区别。详情点击

3.2

I have to speak highly of her.

[批改提示] 查看have to和must的区别。

3.3

In short, I will try my best to do anything in my life in future in order to have a good future.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...future 在教材中出现过 2575 次

十二

标题：College Life

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

Directions: For this part, you'll have to write an essay entitled College Life. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

1) 你在来到大学前对大学生活是如何看待的；

2) 来到大学后你的大学生活是怎样的；

3) 怎样的大学生活才是有意义的大学生活。

College Life

Three months ago, I was still a student who had just graduated from the senior high school. Meanwhile, I dream of my college life again and again. I keep my dream in mind that I can be bound to be admitted into Peking University which

is always my target and the target will exist all the time unless I make it come true. Certainly, it's necessary for me to make a plan for my college life. Therefore, I have been preparing everything seriously during the summer vacation before I arrive in the college. Although I am regrettable for the result that I can't realize my dream before, I am sure that I must be admitted into Peking University only if I do everything to the best of my ability.

How time flies, I have been my college for three days so far. The college life is a little different from that I have imagined many times. However, the difference is that the college life is wonderful, colorful and meaningful. In college, I am not only acquainted with much knowledge but also make a lot of good friends. Without doubt I can share my thoughts with them and they will do that like me. Besides, they will try their best to assist me when I get into trouble. What's more, I know many good teachers who teach me to live better and something they refer has also changed my view on future, which will be sure to help me to be a good member of the society absolutely. Last but not least, I start to play basketball and learn to ease myself in terms of sports, which benefit me to some degree.

In my opinion, the most meaningful college life should be that I am acquainted with much knowledge, make many friends, master a lot of technology, etc. Only in this way, can I become as excellent as possible in order to live better in the future.

第1段

1.1

Three months ago, I was still a student who had just graduated from the senior high school.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: pupil, student, learner, scholar 均含“学生”之意。

[批改提示] 查看who和whoever，whom的区别。

[批改提示] 注意before和ago区别。详情点击

1.2

Meanwhile, I dream of my college life again and again.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院，大学”之意。

[批改提示] 注意meantime和meanwhile的区别。

1.3

I keep my dream in mind that I can be bound to be admitted into Peking University which is always my target and the target will exist all the time unless I make it come true.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: fasten, tie, bind, secure, chain 都有“扎牢，捆，绑”之意。

[批改提示] keep近义表达有hold/ maintain/ preserve/ sustain

[批改提示] admit意思为“允许，准许进入”注意与permit区别。详情点击 be bound to是必定，一定的意思，属于四六级经典句型

[批改提示] true的近义表达有accurate 。

1.4

Certainly, it's necessary for me to make a plan for my college life.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...plan 在教材中出现过 3156 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: certainly, naturally, of course, surely 均有“肯定地，当然”之意。

1.5

Therefore, I have been preparing everything seriously during the summer vacation before I arrive in the college.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: attain, reach, achieve, arrive 均有“达到”之意。

1.6

Although I am regrettable for the result that I can't realize my dream before, I am sure that I must be admitted into Peking University only if I do everything to the best of my ability.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 realize...dream 在教材中出现过 810 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: ability, capacity, capability, genius, talent, competence, faculty, gift, aptitude 均可表示人的“能力，才能”之意。

[批改提示] 注意must和have to的区别。

[批改提示] 注意ago与before区别。详情点击

[批改提示] 批改提示，注意regretful与regrettable的区别。

第2段

2.1

How time flies, I have been my college for three days so far.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院，大学”之意。

2.2

The college life is a little different from that I have imagined many times.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 imagine...time 在教材中出现过 14 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院，大学”之意。

[批改提示] imagine近义表达有think of/ envisage/ devise/ conceive of

2.3

However, the difference is that the college life is wonderful, colorful and meaningful.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院，大学”之意。

[批改提示] 注意difference和disparity，distinction区别。

2.4

In college, I am not only acquainted with much knowledge but also make a lot of good friends.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...lot 在教材中出现过 10 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: inform, acquaint, notify, advise 都有“通知，告知”之意。

2.5

Without doubt I can share my thoughts with them and they will do that like me.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 share...thought 在教材中出现过 438 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: share, participate 均含有“分享，分担”之意。

2.6

Besides, they will try their best to assist me when I get into trouble.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: aid, assist, help 均有“帮助”之意。

[批改提示] besides表示“除了（包括）”。注意与except的区别。详情点击

[高分表达] 高分词组，get into trouble意为“惹上麻烦”。

2.7

What's more, I know many good teachers who teach me to live better and something they refer has also changed my view on future, which will be sure to help me to be a good member of the society absolutely.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 know...teacher 在教材中出现过 42 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 change...view 在教材中出现过 977 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: change, alter, vary, convert, modify, transform, turn 均含有“变化，改变”之意。

what's more意思是另外，而且?，是四六级经典补充类词组。

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

2.8

Last but not least, I start to play basketball and learn to ease myself in terms of sports, which benefit me to some degree.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 play...basketball 在教材中出现过 5141 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: class, degree, grade, rank 均有“级，等级”之意。

[批改提示] benefit近义表达有help/ improve/ assist/ enhance/ serve

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

第3段

3.1

In my opinion, the most meaningful college life should be that I am acquainted with much knowledge, make many friends, master a lot of technology, etc.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: inform, acquaint, notify, advise 都有“通知，告知”之意。

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...friend 在教材中出现过 1965 次

[批改提示] technology表示“工艺，技术”。注意与technique的区别。详情点击

3.2

Only in this way, can I become as excellent as possible in order to live better in the future.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: excellent, choice, splendid, select, prime, first-rate 均有“极好的”之意。

[批改提示] possible的近义表达有feasible。

[高分表达] 高分词组，as...as意为“和...一样地...”,第一个as为副词，表“一样地”，

而第二个as则为连接词，表“和，与”之意。

With time going by,I have been admitted into college almost three months.Something there is so different from that I have imagined.I have learnd various things not only about academy but also about relationship.In short,the life in college is so wonderful.

Three months ago,I was a student who had just graduated from senior high school and had also dreamed of the llife in college again and again.And then, I thought the life is bound to be wonderful and the knowledge is huge and useful.Meanwhile,I believe that the college is the place for me to plan for my future and take meatures to make the plan come ture.Besides,I thought I can learn increasingly knowledge

and make many good friends as well. Certainly,the summer holiday before I arrived in my college was the high time for me to prepare for the college. 说明：

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With time going by,I have been admitted into college almost three months.Something there is so different from that I have imagined.I have learnd various things not only about academy but also about relationship.In short,the life in college is so wonderful.Three months ago,I was still a student who had just graduated from the senior high schoolschool.Meanwhile,I dream of my college life again and had also dreamed again.I keep my dream in mind that I can be bound to be admitted into Peking University which is always my target and the target will exist all the time unless I make it come ture.Certainly, it's necessary for me to make a plan for my college life.Therefore,I have been preparing everything seriously during the summer vacation before I arrive in the college.Although I am regretable for the result that I can't realize my dream in my college entrance examination,I am sure that I must be admitted into Peking University only if I do everything to the best ofthe llife my ability.

How time flies, I have been my college for three days so far.The life in college again and again.And then, is a little different from that I thought have imagined many times.However, the difference is that the life is bound more wonderful,more colorful and more meanful.In college, I not only learn various knowledge but also make a lot of good friends.We can share thoughts each other.Besides,they will try their best to assist me when I get into trouble.Apart from the things upon,I come across many good teachers who teach the way to living better and something they reffer have also changed my view on future,which will sure to help me to be wonderful a good member of the society.Last but not least,I start to play basketable and the knowledge is huge and useful.Meanwhile,I believe learn to ease myself through sports,which

benefit me a lot to some degree.

In my opinion,the most meaningful college life should be that the college is the place for meI learn many knowledge,make many friends,master many abilities, etc.Only in this way,can we become as exerllent as possible in order to plan for my future and take meatures to make the plan come ture.Besides,I thought I can learn increasingly knowledge

and make many good friends as well. Certainly,the summer holiday before I arrived in my college was the high time for me to prepare for the college. have a light future.

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Three months ago,I was still a student who had just graduated from the senior high school.Meanwhile,I dream of my college life again and again.I keep my dream in mind that I can be bound to be admitted into Peking University which is always my target and the target will exist all the time unless I make it come ture.Certainly, true.Certainly, it's necessary for me to make a plan for my college life.Therefore,I have been preparing everything seriously during the summer vacation before I arrive in the college.Although I amregretable regrettable for the result that I can't realize my dream in my college entrance examination,I am sure that I must be admitted into Peking University only if I do everything to the best of my ability.

How time flies, I have been my college for three days so far.The college life in college is a little different from that I have imagined many times.However, the difference is that thecollege life is more wonderful,more colorful and more meanful.In meaningful than that I have dreamed of.In college, I am not only learn various acquainted with much knowledge but also make a lot of good friends.We friends.I can share my thoughts each other.Besides,theywith them and they will do that like me.Besides,they will try their best to assist me when I get into trouble.Apart from the things upon,I come across trouble.What's more,I knowmany good teachers who teach the way my various ways to living better and something they reffer have refer has also changed my view on future,which will be sure to help me to be a good member of the society.Last but not least,I start to play basketable basketble and learn to ease myself through sports,which benefit me a lot to some degree.

In my opinion,the most meaningful college life should be that I learn many muchknowledge,make many friends,master many abilities, etc.Only in this way,can we I become as exerllent as possible in order to have a light future. 说明：

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3.黄色是增加部分

Three months ago,I was still a student who had just graduated from the senior high school.Meanwhile,I dream of my college life again and again.I keep my dream in mind that I can be bound to be admitted into Peking University which is always my target and the target will exist all the time unless I make it come true.Certainly, it's necessary for me to make a plan for my college life.Therefore,I have been preparing everything seriously during the summer vacation before I arrive in the college.Although I am regrettable for the result that I can't realize my dream in my college entrance examination,I before I am admitted into college,I am sure that I must be admitted into Peking University only if I do everything to the best of my ability.

How time flies, I have been my college for three days so far.The college life is a little different from that I have imagined many times.However, the difference is that the college life is more wonderful,more colorful wonderful,colorful and more meaningful than that I have dreamed of.In meaningful.In college, I am not only acquainted with much knowledge but also make a lot of good friends.I can share my thoughts with them and they will do that like me.Besides,they will try their best to assist me when I get into trouble.What's more,I know many good teachers who teach my various ways me to living live better and something they refer has also changed my view on future,which will be sure to help me to be a good member of the society.Last but not least,I start to play basketble basketball and learn to ease myself through sports,which benefit me a lot to some degree.

In my opinion,the most meaningful college life should be that I learn am acquainted withmuch knowledge,make many friends,master many abilities, etc.Only in this way,can I become as exerllent excellent as possible in order to have a light live better in the future.

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Three months ago,I was still a student who had just graduated from the senior high school.Meanwhile,I dream of my college life again and again.I keep my dream in mind that I can be bound to be admitted into Peking University which is always my target and the target will exist all the time unless I make it come true.Certainly, it's necessary for me to make a plan for my college life.Therefore,I have been preparing everything seriously during the summer vacation before I arrive in the college.Although I am regrettable for the result that I can't realize my dream before I am admitted into college,I before,I am sure that I must be admitted into Peking University only if I do everything to the

best of my ability.

How time flies, I have been my college for three days so far.The college life is a little different from that I have imagined many times.However, the difference is that the college life is wonderful,colorful and meaningful.In college, I am not only acquainted with much knowledge but also make a lot of good friends.I can share my thoughts with them and they will do that like me.Besides,they will try their best to assist me when I get into trouble.What's more,I know many good teachers who teach me to live better and something they refer has also changed my view on future,which will be sure to help me to be a good member of the society.Last but not least,I start to play basketball and learn to ease myself through sports,which benefit me a lot to some degree.

In my opinion,the most meaningful college life should be that I am acquainted with much knowledge,make many friends,master many abilities, a lot of technology, etc.Only in this way,can I become as excellent as possible in order to live better in the future.

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2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Three months ago,I was still a student who had just graduated from the senior high school.Meanwhile,I dream of my college life again and again.I keep my dream in mind that I can be bound to be admitted into Peking University which is always my target and the target will exist all the time unless I make it come true.Certainly, it's necessary for me tomake a plan be prepared for my college life.Therefore,I have been preparing everything seriously during the summer vacation before I arrive in the college.Although I am regrettable for the result that I can't realize my dream before,I am sure that I must be admitted into Peking University only if I do everything to the best of my ability.

How time flies, I have been my college for three days so far.The college life is a little different from that I have imagined many times.However, the difference is that the college life is wonderful,colorful and meaningful.In college, I am not only acquainted with much knowledge but also make a lot of good friends.I can share my thoughts with them and they will do that like me.Besides,they will try their best to assist me when I get into trouble.What's more,I know many good teachers who teach me to live better and something they refer has also changed my view on future,which will be sure to help me to be a good member of the society.Last but not least,I start to play basketball and learn to ease myself through sports,which benefit me to some degree.

In my opinion,the most meaningful college life should be that I am acquainted with much knowledge,make many friends,master a lot of technology, etc.Only in this way,can I become as excellent as possible in order to live better in the

future.

说明：

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2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Three months ago,I was still a student who had just graduated from the senior high school.Meanwhile,I dream of my college life again and again.I keep my dream in mind that I can be bound to be admitted into Peking University which is always my target and the target will exist all the time unless I make it come true.Certainly, it's necessary for me to be really ready make a plan for my college life.Therefore,I have been preparing everything seriously during the summer vacation before I arrive in the college.Although I am regrettable for the result that I can't realize my dream before,I am sure that I must be admitted into Peking University only if I do everything to the best of my ability.

How time flies, I have been my college for three days so far.The college life is a little different from that I have imagined many times.However, the difference is that the college life is wonderful,colorful and meaningful.In college, I am not only acquainted with much knowledge but also make a lot of good friends.I friends.Without doubt I can share my thoughts with them and they will do that like me.Besides,they will try their best to assist me when I get into trouble.What's more,I know many good teachers who teach me to live better and something they refer has also changed my view on future,which will be sure to help me to be a good member of the society.Last society absolutely.Last but not least,I start to play basketball and learn to ease myself through sports,which benefit me to some degree.

In my opinion,the most meaningful college life should be that I am acquainted with much knowledge,make many friends,master a lot of technology, etc.Only in this way,can I become as excellent as possible in order to live better in the future.

说明：

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2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Three months ago,I was still a student who had just graduated from the senior high school.Meanwhile,I dream of my college life again and again.I keep my dream in mind that I can be bound to be admitted into Peking University which is always my target and the target will exist all the time unless I make it come true.Certainly, it's necessary for me to make a plan for my college life.Therefore,I have been preparing everything seriously during the summer vacation before I arrive in the college.Although I am regrettable for the result that I can't realize my dream before,I am sure that I must be admitted into

Peking University only if I do everything to the best of my ability.

How time flies, I have been my college for three days so far.The college life is a little different from that I have imagined many times.However, the difference is that the college life is wonderful,colorful and meaningful.In college, I am not only acquainted with much knowledge but also make a lot of good friends.Without doubt I can share my thoughts with them and they will do that like me.Besides,they will try their best to assist me when I get into trouble.What's more,I know many good teachers who teach me to live better and something they refer has also changed my view on future,which will be sure to help me to be a good member of the society absolutely.Last but not least,I start to play basketball and learn to ease myself through in terms of sports,which benefit me to some degree.

In my opinion,the most meaningful college life should be that I am acquainted with much knowledge,make many friends,master a lot of technology, etc.Only in this way,can I become as excellent as possible in order to live better in the future.

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十三

标题：Try to be a Good Listener

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

Directions: For this part, you'll have to write an essay entitled Try to be a Good Listener. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

1) 人际交往中倾听的重要性；

2) 如何做好一个倾听者；

3) 列举一个表现倾听重要性的事例。

Try to be a Good Listener

As is known to us all, listening to others plays a significant role in our personal relationships. Or else, it will be not uncommon to hear people complaining that no one listens to them and no one understands them, which contributes to the increasing number of broken homes, the failure of personal relationships, the married couple who fail to have a communication, or of children who feel deserted, etc. In short, it is necessary to come into a habit to listen to others carefully.

In my opinion, it will do good to be a good listener to care about the little affairs.

Only in this way can we know about others well and seek our faults and weaknesses. Besides, it is equally vital to correct our mistakes during the time that we communicate with others. Certainly, we should also fix our eyes on the speakers when they are speaking and don't talk with anyone else, all of which will be the way to respecting him or her and reduce the gaps and improve the relationships each other.

For example, people will misunderstand each other sometimes. However it is helpful for us to be a good listener, through which, we can find out the problems and deal with them in order to keep in touch with others all the time. To such an extent, listening is very important to us, which can not only assist us to form a good habit but also can relieve our pressure in personal relationships. Therefore it will benefit us to be a good listener.

1.1

As is known to us all, listening to others plays a significant role in our personal relationships.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 play...role 在教材中出现过 26773 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: hear, listen, overhear 均含“听”之意。

[批改提示] be known to... 表示“为...所熟知”。注意与be known by... 的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] listen to侧重点为听的倾向，注意与hear区别。

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

1.2

Or else, it will be not uncommon to hear people complaining that no one listens to them and no one understands them, which contributes to the increasing number of broken homes, the failure of personal relationships, the married couple who fail to have a communication, or of children who feel deserted, etc.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...communication 在教材中出现过 381 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 hear...people 在教材中出现过 804 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: baby, child, infant, youngster 均有“孩子”之意。

[批改提示] hear侧重点是听到、听见什么，注意与listen to区别。

[批改提示] understand的近义表达有appreciate。

1.3

In short, it is necessary to come into a habit to listen to others carefully.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: come, arrive, reach 均含“到达”之意。

[批改提示] listen to侧重点为听的倾向，注意与hear区别。

第2段

2.1

In my opinion, it will do good to be a good listener to care about the little affairs.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: affair, business, matter, concern, thing 均含“事情”之意。

2.2

Only in this way can we know about others well and seek our faults and

weaknesses.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: error, fault, blunder, flaw, mistake, shortcoming, defect, slip 均有“错误，缺点”之意。

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

2.3

Besides, it is equally vital to correct our mistakes during the time that we communicate with others.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 correct...mistake 在教材中出现过 537 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: correct, rectify, remedy, revise, amend 均含“纠正，改正”之意。

[批改提示] besides表示“除了（包括）”。注意与except的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] communicate近义表达有pass on/ convey/ impart/ spread

2.4

Certainly, we should also fix our eyes on the speakers when they are speaking and don't talk with anyone else, all of which will be the way to respecting him or her and reduce the gaps and improve the relationships each other.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 reduce...gap 在教材中出现过 168 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 improve...relationship 在教材中出现过 338 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: certainly, naturally, of course, surely 均有“肯定地，当然”之意。

[批改提示] fix近义表达有focus/ direct at/ fasten on

第3段

3.1

For example, people will misunderstand each other sometimes.

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

3.2

However it is helpful for us to be a good listener, through which, we can find out the problems and deal with them in order to keep in touch with others all the time.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 find_out...problem 在教材中出现过 12 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: problem, question, issue, matter 均含“问题”之意。

[批改提示] find out在做“找出”讲时，近义表达有come up with。

[批改提示] keep近义表达有hold/ maintain/ preserve/ sustain

[批改提示] through的近义表达有across，in term of，via。

3.3

To such an extent, listening is very important to us, which can not only assist us to form a good habit but also can relieve our pressure in personal relationships.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: aid, assist, help 均有“帮助”之意。

[批改提示] very的近义表达有extremely, exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。 important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

3.4

Therefore it will benefit us to be a good listener.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: accordingly, consequently, hence, so, therefore, thus 均有“因此，所以”之意。

[批改提示] benefit近义表达有help/ improve/ assist/ enhance/ serve

As is known to us all,listening to others plays a significant role in our personal relationships.Or else,it will be not uncommon to hear people complaining that no one listens to them and no one understands them,which contributes to the increasing number of broken homes,the failure of personal relationships,the married couple who fail to have communication,or of children who feel deserted,etc.In short, it is necessary to come into a habit to listen to others carefully.

In my opinion, it will do good to be a good listener to care about the little affairs.Only in this way can we know about others well and seek our faults and weaknesses . Besides,it is equally vital to correct our mistakes during the time that we communicate with others.Certainly,we also should look into the eyes of speakers and don't talk with anyone else,all of which will be the way to respecting him or her and reduce the gaps and improve the relationships each other.

For example,there will be some misunderstanding between people.However it is helpful for us to be a good listener,through which,we can find out the problems and deal with them in order to keep in touch with others all the time.To such an extent,listening is very important to us,which can not only assist us to form a good habit but also can relieve our pressure in personal relationships.Therefore it will benefit us to be a good listener.

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3.黄色是增加部分

As is known to us all,listening to others plays a significant role in our personal relationships.Or else,it will be not uncommon to hear people complaining that no one listens to them and no one understands them,which contributes to the increasing number of broken homes,the failure of personal relationships,the married couple who fail to have acommunication,or of children who feel deserted,etc.In short, it is necessary to come into a habit to listen to others carefully.

In my opinion, it will do good to be a good listener to care about the little affairs.Only in this way can we know about others well and seek our faults and weaknesses . weaknesses.Besides,it is equally vital to correct our mistakes during the time that we communicate with others.Certainly,we should also should look into the speaker's eyes of speakers and don't talk with anyone else,all of which will be the way to respecting him or her and reduce the gaps

and improve the relationships each other.

For example,there example,people will be some misunderstanding between people.Howevermisunderstand each others sometimes.However it is helpful for us to be a good listener,through which,we can find out the problems and deal with them in order to keep in touch with others all the time.To such an extent,listening is very important to us,which can not only assist us to form a good habit but also can relieve our pressure in personal relationships.Therefore it will benefit us to be a good listener.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

As is known to us all,listening to others plays a significant role in our personal relationships.Or else,it will be not uncommon to hear people complaining that no one listens to them and no one understands them,which contributes to the increasing number of broken homes,the failure of personal relationships,the married couple who fail to have a communication,or of children who feel deserted,etc.In short, it is necessary to come into a habit to listen to others carefully.

In my opinion, it will do good to be a good listener to care about the little affairs.Only in this way can we know about others well and seek our faults and weaknesses. Besides,it is equally vital to correct our mistakes during the time that we communicate with others.Certainly,we should also look into fix our eyes on the speaker's eyes speakers and don't talk with anyone else,all of which will be the way to respecting him or her and reduce the gaps and improve the relationships each other.

For example,people will misunderstand each others other sometimes.However it is helpful for us to be a good listener,through which,we can find out the problems and deal with them in order to keep in touch with others all the time.To such an extent,listening is very important to us,which can not only assist us to form a good habit but also can relieve our pressure in personal relationships.Therefore it will benefit us to be a good listener.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

As is known to us all,listening to others plays a significant role in our personal relationships.Or else,it will be not uncommon to hear people complaining that no one listens to them and no one understands them,which contributes to the increasing number of broken homes,the failure of personal relationships,the married couple who fail to have a communication,or of children who feel

deserted,etc.In short, it is necessary to come into a habit to listen to others carefully.

In my opinion, it will do good to be a good listener to care about the little affairs.Only in this way can we know about others well and seek our faults and weaknesses. Besides,it is equally vital to correct our mistakes during the time that we communicate with others.Certainly,we should also fix our eyes on the speakers when they are speaking and don't talk with anyone else,all of which will be the way to respecting him or her and reduce the gaps and improve the relationships each other.

For example,people will misunderstand each other sometimes.However it is helpful for us to be a good listener,through which,we can find out the problems and deal with them in order to keep in touch with others all the time.To such an extent,listening is very important to us,which can not only assist us to form a good habit but also can relieve our pressure in personal relationships.Therefore it will benefit us to be a good listener.

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十四

标题：The Commercialized Festivals

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a passage The Commercialized Festivals. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese.

1 当下，各种节日普遍商业化，有的已经失去原有的节日含义；

2 举例说明某一节日原有含义、如何庆祝等；

3 我对节日商业化的看法和建议。

The Commercialized Festivals

Nowadays, great changes have taken place with the rapid and great development in China. Meanwhile, some bad phenomena have also appeared, of which festivals becoming commercialized are a part as well. As a result, the traditional meanings of some festivals are disappearing.

For instance, the Mid-Autumn Festival is well known to all chinese. In history, 15th day of August is a significant time for people to get together to celebrate the festival and share the joy, etc. Certainly, eating moon cakes is also the traditional custom. However, the festival is becoming a chance for merchant to make a fortune with time going by. Some merchants do business in order to get big profit regardless of the health of people. They not only add various harmful

substances into the moon cake but also over package the moon cake so that it turns out to be the time for comparing with the higher, which has a bad effect both on the development of culture and the economy. All of them will prevent our country from developping.

To my point of view, it is necessary to try our best to change the bad atmosphere around us, which should include the Commercialized Festivals. We should take an active part in the team to settle the problem and our country should also take measures to join it. Only in this way, can our country have a bright future.

1.1

Nowadays, great changes have taken place with the rapid and great development in China.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 take...place 在教材中出现过 43 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: development, evolution 都表示“发展，进化”之意。

1.2

Meanwhile, some bad phenomena have also appeared, of which festivals becoming commercialized are a part as well.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: appear, emerge, show, loom 均有“出现”之意。

bad在写作中使用的太泛，在某些语境下可考虑换为unfavorable/dreadful/be less impressive等。

[批改提示] 注意meantime和meanwhile的区别。

1.3

As a result, the traditional meanings of some festivals are disappearing.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: vanish, disappear, fade, evaporate 均有“消失”之意。

第2段

2.1

For instance, the Mid-Autumn Festival is well known to all chinese.

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

[批改提示] 注意Chinese和the Chinese区别。

2.2

In history, 15th day of August is a significant time for people to get together to celebrate the festival and share the joy, etc.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 celebrate...festival 在教材中出现过 37 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: celebrate, congratulate 均有“庆祝，祝贺”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

2.3

Certainly, eating moon cakes is also the traditional custom.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 eat...cake 在教材中出现过 262 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: certainly, naturally, of course, surely 均有“肯定地，当然”之意。

[批改提示] 注意custom和customs，costume区别。

2.4

However, the festival is becoming a chance for merchant to make a fortune with time going by.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...fortune 在教材中出现过 1717 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: holiday, festival, vacation, leave 均有“假日，节日”之意。

[批改提示] chance的近义表达有alternative 。

[批改提示] 注意chance与opportunity的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] 注意fortune和destiny区别。

2.5

Some merchants do business in order to get big profit regardless of the health of people.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 get...profit 在教材中出现过 172 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 do...business 在教材中出现过 16795 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: affair, business, matter, concern, thing 均含“事情”之意。

[批改提示] big的近义表达有major/significant/substantial等。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

2.6

They not only add various harmful substances into the moon cake but also over package the moon cake so that it turns out to be the time for comparing with the higher, which has a bad effect both on the development of culture and the economy.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 package...cake 在教材中出现过 4 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 add...substance 在教材中出现过 61 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...effect 在教材中出现过 23155 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: civilization, culture 均含“文化，文明”之意。

bad在写作中使用的太泛，在某些语境下可考虑换为unfavorable/dreadful/be less impressive等。

2.7

All of them will prevent our country from developping.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 prevent...country 在教材中出现过 140 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: block, bar, hinder, obstruct, prevent, hamper 均含有“阻止，阻塞”之意。

[批改提示] country表示“国家”。注意与state的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] 注意country和nation，village区别。

第3段

3.1

To my point of view, it is necessary to try our best to change the bad atmosphere around us, which should include the Commercialized Festivals.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 change...atmosphere 在教材中出现过 137 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: atmosphere, air, gas 均与“空气”有关。

bad在写作中使用的太泛，在某些语境下可考虑换为unfavorable/dreadful/be less impressive等。

3.2

We should take an active part in the team to settle the problem and our country should also take measures to join it.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 settle...problem 在教材中出现过 202 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 take...measure 在教材中出现过 4091 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 take...part 在教材中出现过 13283 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: active, energetic, vigorous, brisk, lively 均有“积极的，活跃的”之意。

[批改提示] country表示“国家”。注意与state的区别。详情点击

3.3

Only in this way, can our country have a bright future.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...future 在教材中出现过 2575 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: bright, brilliant, glowing, radiant, luminous 均含有“明亮的”之意。

[批改提示] country表示“国家”。注意与state的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] 注意country和nation，village区别。

Nowadays,great changes have taken place with the rapid and great development in China.Meanwhile,some bad phenomena have also appeared,of which the commercialized festivals are a part as well.As a result,the traditional meanings of some festivals are disappearing.

For instance,the Mid-Autumn Festival is well known to all chinese.In history,15th day of August is a significant time for people to get together to celebrate the festival and share the joy,etc.Certainly,eating moon cakes is also the traditional custom.However,the festival is becoming a chance for merchant to make a fortune with time going by.Some merchants do business in order to get big profit regardless of the health of people.They not only add much harmful substances into the moon cake but also overpakage the moon cake so that it rns out to be the time for comparing with the higher,which has a bad effect both on the development of culture and the economy.All of them will prevent our country from developping.

To my point of view,it is necessary to exert ourselves to change the bad atmosphere aroud us,which should include the Commercialized Festivals.We take an active to settle the problem and our country should also take measures to join it.Only in this way,can our country have a bright future.

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Nowadays,great changes have taken place with the rapid and great development in China.Meanwhile,some bad phenomena have also appeared,of which the festivals becomingcommercialized festivals are a part as well.As a

result,the traditional meanings of some festivals are disappearing.

For instance,the Mid-Autumn Festival is well known to all chinese.In history,15th day of August is a significant time for people to get together to celebrate the festival and share the joy,etc.Certainly,eating moon cakes is also the traditional custom.However,the festival is becoming a chance for merchant to make a fortune with time going by.Some merchants do business in order to get big profit regardless of the health of people.They not only addmuch various harmful substances into the moon cake but also overpakage overpackage the moon cake so that it rns turns out to be the time for comparing with the higher,which has a bad effect both on the development of culture and the economy.All of them will prevent our country from developping.

To my point of view,it is necessary to exert ourselves try our best to change the bad atmosphere aroud around us,which should include the Commercialized Festivals.We shouldtake an active part in the team to settle the problem and our country should also take measures to join it.Only in this way,can our country have a bright future.

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2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Nowadays,great changes have taken place with the rapid and great development in China.Meanwhile,some bad phenomena have also appeared,of which festivals becoming commercialized are a part as well.As a result,the traditional meanings of some festivals are disappearing.

For instance,the Mid-Autumn Festival is well known to all chinese.In history,15th day of August is a significant time for people to get together to celebrate the festival and share the joy,etc.Certainly,eating moon cakes is also the traditional custom.However,the festival is becoming a chance for merchant to make a fortune with time going by.Some merchants do business in order to get big profit regardless of the health of people.They not only add various harmful substances into the moon cake but also overpackage over package the moon cake so that it turns out to be the time for comparing with the higher,which has a bad effect both on the development of culture and the economy.All of them will prevent our country from developping.

To my point of view,it is necessary to try our best to change the bad atmosphere around us,which should include the Commercialized Festivals.We should take an active part in the team to settle the problem and our country should also take measures to join it.Only in this way,can our country have a bright future. 说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Nowadays,great changes have taken place with the rapid and great development in China.Meanwhile,some bad phenomena have also appeared,of which festivals becoming commercialized are a part as well.As a result,the traditional meanings of some festivals are disappearing.

For instance,the Mid-Autumn Festival is well known to all chinese.In history,15th day of August is a significant time for people to get together to celebrate the festival and share the joy,etc.Certainly,eating moon cakes is also the traditional custom.However,the festival is becoming a chance for merchant to make a fortune with time going by.Some merchants do business in order to get big profit regardless of the health of people.They not only add various harmful substances into the moon cake but also overpackage over package the moon cake so that it turns out to be the time for comparing with the higher,which has a bad effect both on the development of culture and the economy.All of them will prevent our country from developping.

To my point of view,it is necessary to try our best to change the bad atmosphere around us,which should include the Commercialized Festivals.We should take an active part in the team to settle the problem and our country should also take measures to join it.Only in this way,can our country have a bright future. 说明：

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3.黄色是增加部分

十五

标题：Friendship

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

Directions: For this part, you'll have to write an essay entitled Friendship. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.

1) 友谊是否是生活的必须；

2) 怎样的友谊才是真正的友谊；

3) 如何获得真正的友谊。

Friendship

Different people regard friendship differently. Therefore, it is advisable for us to regard the friendship dialectically because every thing has two sides, in the way of which we will come to a decision across-and-board.

To my point of view, friendship is necessary for our life. Without it, we will have difficulty not only living but also working and we won't relax ourselves freely through communicating with others who are usually our friends about our confusion, happiness, success, etc. Certainly, we can tell our friends what

confuses us to reduce pressure and study efficiently to some degree and we can also enjoy ourselves. As a result, we will make great progress swiftly and it will turn out to be a bright future.

At the same time, friendship has also be made of two parts that include the beneficial one and the harmful one. And I think the true friendship should be the former and we can all become excellent as well as behave ourselves with it. We can become more intelligent as well, which we will benefit a lot from. Last but not least, the people with who you make true friends should also refer you to the errors so as to avoid you doing them again.

In my opinion, we should get on well with others in order to make true friends such as treating others sincerely, acknowledging our fault, learning to share what we have with others generously and so on. Meanwhile, it also counts to communicate with others frequently because it can not only reduce our stress but also deepen the friendship exactly. Only in these ways, can we all make true friends and have a wonderful life eventually.

第1段

1.1

Different people regard friendship differently.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 regard...friendship 在教材中出现过 4 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: different, various, diverse 均含“不同的”之意。详情点击

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

1.2

Therefore, it is advisable for us to regard the friendship dialectically because every thing has two sides, in the way of which we will come to a decision across-and-board.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 regard...friendship 在教材中出现过 4 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: come, arrive, reach 均含“到达”之意。

[批改提示] 查看every thing和everything的区别。

第2段

2.1

To my point of view, friendship is necessary for our life.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: indispensable, essential, necessary, requisite 均有“必不可少的，必需的”之意。

2.2

Without it, we will have difficulty not only living but also working and we won't relax ourselves freely through communicating with others who are usually our friends about our confusion, happiness, success, etc.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...difficulty 在教材中出现过 6217 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: confusion, disordr, disturbance, mess, chaos 均表示事物的“混乱”状态。

[批改提示] 查看freely与free的区别。

[批改提示] through的近义表达有across，in term of，via。

[批改提示] 查看who和whoever，whom的区别。

2.3

Certainly, we can tell our friends what confuses us to reduce pressure and study efficiently to some degree and we can also enjoy ourselves.

[批改提示] 注意enjoy和appreciate的区别。

[学习提示] 易混词汇: certainly, naturally, of course, surely 均有“肯定地，当然”之意。

[批改提示] confuse近义表达有puzzle/ bewilder/ obscure/ baffle/ bemuse

2.4

As a result, we will make great progress swiftly and it will turn out to be a bright future.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...progress 在教材中出现过 10001 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: bright, brilliant, glowing, radiant, luminous 均含有“明亮的”之意。

第3段

3.1

At the same time, friendship has also be made of two parts that include the beneficial one and the harmful one.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: beneficial, advantageous, profitable 均含有“有益的，有利的”之意。

[批改提示] 批改提示，注意beneficial与beneficent的区别。

[批改提示] be made of表示“用...制成”。注意与be made from的区别。

3.2

And I think the true friendship should be the former and we can all become excellent as well as behave ourselves with it.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: excellent, choice, splendid, select, prime, first-rate 均有“极好的”之意。

[批改提示] true的近义表达有accurate 。

[批改提示] 查看and用于句首的用法。

3.3

We can become more intelligent as well, which we will benefit a lot from.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: bright, clever, wise, brilliant, intelligent, ingenious, smart, shrewd 均含有“聪明的”之意。

[批改提示] benefit近义表达有help/ improve/ assist/ enhance/ serve

[批改提示] 批改提示，intelligent注意与intelligible，intellectual的区别。

3.4

Last but not least, the people with who you make true friends should also refer you to the errors so as to avoid you doing them again.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...friend 在教材中出现过 1965 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: escape, avoid 都有“躲避危险”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

[批改提示] 查看who和whoever，whom的区别。

[批改提示] true的近义表达有accurate 。

第4段

4.1

In my opinion, we should get on well with others in order to make true friends such as treating others sincerely, acknowledging our fault, learning to share what we have with others generously and so on.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 acknowledge...fault 在教材中出现过 16 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: acknowledge, admit, confess, recognize, concede 均含“承认”之意。

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

[批改提示] fault表示“缺点，毛病”。注意与error的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] true的近义表达有accurate 。

4.2

Meanwhile, it also counts to communicate with others frequently because it can not only reduce our stress but also deepen the friendship exactly.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 deepen...friendship 在教材中出现过 16 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 reduce...stress 在教材中出现过 406 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: calculate, count, compute, reckon 均含有“计算”之意。

[批改提示] communicate近义表达有pass on/ convey/ impart/ spread

[批改提示] 注意meantime和meanwhile的区别。

4.3

Only in these ways, can we all make true friends and have a wonderful life eventually.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...friend 在教材中出现过 1965 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...life 在教材中出现过 6249 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: at last, at length, eventually, finally, in the end, lastly 均含有“最后，终于”之意。

[批改提示] true的近义表达有accurate 。

Different people have different view on friendship.Therefore,it is advisable for us to regard the friendship dialectically because every thing has two sides,in the way of which we will come to a decision across-and-board.

To my point of view,friendship is necessary for our life.Without it, we will have difficulties in not only living but also working,in which case,we won't relax ourselves freely through communicating with others who are usually our friends about our confusion,happiness,success,etc.Whereas,with friendship we can share joy and reduce pressure in order to study efficiently to some degree.As a result,we will make great progress swiftly and it will turn out to be a bright future.

Certainly,different people have different definition on friendeship.At the same

time,friendship has also be divided into the benefitional and the harmful.However,I think the true friendship shoud be the former,with which we can all become a more excellent man or woman as well as form better personality.What'more,we can obtain more knowledge,which will benefit us absolutely.Last but not least,the people who have true friendship with you should also refer you to the errors so as to avoid you doing them again.

In my opinion,in order to achieve the true friendship,we should get on well with others,such as treating others sincerely,acknowledging our fault in time, learning to share what we have with others generously and so on.Meanwhile,it also counts to communicate with others frequently because it can not only reduce the stress between each other but also deepen the friendship exactly.Only in these way, am I sure that we can all obtain the true friendship and have a woderful life eventually.

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3.黄色是增加部分

Different people have different view on friendship.Therefore,it regard friendship differently.Therefore,it is advisable for us to regard the friendship dialectically because every thing has two sides,in the way of which we will come to a decision across-and-board.

To my point of view,friendship is necessary for our life.Without it, we will have difficulties indifficulty not only living but also working,in which case,we working,we won't relax ourselves freely through communicating with others who are usually our friends about our confusion,happiness,success,etc.Whereas,with friendship good friends we can share joyfun and reduce pressure in order to study efficiently to some degree.As a result,we will make great progress swiftly and it will turn out to be a bright future.

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In my opinion,in order to achieve the true friendship,we opinion,we should get on well withothers,such others in order to obtain the true friendship such as treating others sincerely,acknowledging our fault in time, fault, learning to share what we have with others generously and so on.Meanwhile,it also counts

to communicate with others frequently because it can not only reduce the stress between each other but also deepen the friendship exactly.Only in these way, am I sure that ways, can we can all obtain the true friendship and have a woderful life eventually.

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2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Different people regard friendship differently.Therefore,it is advisable for us to regard the friendship dialectically because every thing has two sides,in the way of which we will come to a decision across-and-board.

To my point of view,friendship is necessary for our life.Without it, we will have difficulty not only living but also working,we working and we won't relax ourselves freely through communicating with others who are usually our friends about ourconfusion,happiness,success,etc.Whereas,with good friends weconfusion,happiness,success,etc.Whereas,we can share fun with our friends and talk with them about our troubles to reduce pressure in order to and study efficiently to some degree.As a result,we will make great progress swiftly and it will turn out to be a bright future.

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In my opinion,we should get on well with others in order to obtain own the true friendship such as treating others sincerely,acknowledging our fault, learning to share what we have with others generously and so on.Meanwhile,it also counts to communicate with others frequently because it can not only reduce the stress between of each other but also deepen the friendship exactly.Only in these ways, can we all obtain own the true friendship and have a woderful wonderful life eventually.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Different people regard friendship differently.Therefore,it is advisable for us to regard the friendship dialectically because every thing has two sides,in the way

of which we will come to a decision across-and-board.

To my point of view,friendship is necessary for our life.Without it, we will have difficulty not only living but also working and we won't relax ourselves freely through communicating with others who are usually our friends about our confusion,happiness,success,etc.Whereas,we can share fun with tell our friends and talk with them about our troubles to reduce pressure and study efficiently to some degree.As degree and we can also share our happiness with them.As a result,we will make great progress swiftly and it will turn out to be a bright future.

At the same time,friendship has also be divided into made of two parts that include the beneficial one and the harmful one.However,I think the true friendship shoud be theformer,we former and we can all become excellent as well as form good personality with it.What's more,we can acquire more knowledge,which knowledge and it will do good to us absolutely.Last but not least,the people with who have you make true friendship with youfriends should also refer you to the errors so as to avoid you doing them again.

In my opinion,we should get on well with others in order to own the make true friendshipfriends such as treating others sincerely,acknowledging our fault, learning to share what we have with others generously and so on.Meanwhile,it also counts to communicate with others frequently because it can not only reduce the stress of each other but also deepen the friendship exactly.Only in these ways, can we all own the make true friendship friendsand have a wonderful life eventually.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Different people regard friendship differently.Therefore,it is advisable for us to regard the friendship dialectically because every thing has two sides,in the way of which we will come to a decision across-and-board.

To my point of view,friendship is necessary for our life.Without it, we will have difficulty not only living but also working and we won't relax ourselves freely through communicating with others who are usually our friends about our confusion,happiness,success,etc.Whereas,weconfusion,happiness,success,etc.Certainly,we can tell our friends about our troubles to reduce pressure and study efficiently to some degree and we can also share our happiness with them.As a result,we will make great progress swiftly and it will turn out to be a bright future.

At the same time,friendship has also be made of two parts that include the beneficial one and the harmful one.However,I one.And I think the true friendship shoud should be the former and we can all become excellent as well

as form good personality with it.What's more,we it.We can acquire more knowledge as well and it will do good to us absolutely.Last but not least,the people with who you make true friends should also refer you to the errors so as to avoid you doing them again.

In my opinion,we should get on well with others in order to make true friends such as treating others sincerely,acknowledging our fault, learning to share what we have with others generously and so on.Meanwhile,it also counts to communicate with others frequently because it can not only reduce the stress of each other but also deepen the friendship exactly.Only in these ways, can we all make true friends and have a wonderful life eventually.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Different people regard friendship differently.Therefore,it is advisable for us to regard the friendship dialectically because every thing has two sides,in the way of which we will come to a decision across-and-board.

To my point of view,friendship is necessary for our life.Without it, we will have difficulty not only living but also working and we won't relax ourselves freely through communicating with others who are usually our friends about our confusion,happiness,success,etc.Certainly,we can tell our friends about our troubles to reduce pressure and study efficiently to some degree and we can also have fun with them.As enjoy ourselves.As a result,we will make great progress swiftly and it will turn out to be a bright future.

At the same time,friendship has also be made of two parts that include the beneficial one and the harmful one.And I think the true friendship should be the former and we can all become excellent as well as form good personality characters with it.We can acquire muchknowledge as well and it will do good to us absolutely.Last but not least,the people with who you make true friends should also refer you to the errors so as to avoid you doing them again.

In my opinion,we should get on well with others in order to make true friends such as treating others sincerely,acknowledging our fault, learning to share what we have with others generously and so on.Meanwhile,it also counts to communicate with others frequently because it can not only reduce our stress but also deepen the friendship exactly.Only in these ways, can we all make true friends and have a wonderful life eventually.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Different people regard friendship differently.Therefore,it is advisable for us to

regard the friendship dialectically because every thing has two sides,in the way of which we will come to a decision across-and-board.

To my point of view,friendship is necessary for our life.Without it, we will have difficulty not only living but also working and we won't relax ourselves freely through communicating with others who are usually our friends about our confusion,happiness,success,etc.Certainly,we can tell our friends about our troubles to reduce pressure and study efficiently to some degree and we can also enjoy ourselves.As a result,we will make great progress swiftly and it will turn out to be a bright future.

At the same time,friendship has also be made of two parts that include the beneficial one and the harmful one.And I think the true friendship should be the former and we can all become excellent as well as form good characters behave ourselves with it.We can acquire knowledge be intelligent as well and it well,which will do good to us absolutely.Last but not least,the people with who you make true friends should also refer you to the errors so as to avoid you doing them again.

In my opinion,we should get on well with others in order to make true friends such as treating others sincerely,acknowledging our fault, learning to share what we have with others generously and so on.Meanwhile,it also counts to communicate with others frequently because it can not only reduce our stress but also deepen the friendship exactly.Only in these ways, can we all make true friends and have a wonderful life eventually.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Different people regard friendship differently.Therefore,it is advisable for us to regard the friendship dialectically because every thing has two sides,in the way of which we will come to a decision across-and-board.

To my point of view,friendship is necessary for our life.Without it, we will have difficulty not only living but also working and we won't relax ourselves freely through communicating with others who are usually our friends about our confusion,happiness,success,etc.Certainly,we can tell our friends about our troubles matters to reduce pressure and study efficiently to some degree and we can also enjoy ourselves.As a result,we will make great progress swiftly and it will turn out to be a bright future.

At the same time,friendship has also be made of two parts that include the beneficial one and the harmful one.And I think the true friendship should be the former and we can all become excellent as well as behave ourselves with it.We can be become more intelligent as well,which will do good to us absolutely.Last without doubt.Last but not least,the people with who you make true friends

should also refer you to the errors so as to avoid you doing them again.

In my opinion,we should get on well with others in order to make true friends such as treating others sincerely,acknowledging our fault, learning to share what we have with others generously and so on.Meanwhile,it also counts to communicate with others frequently because it can not only reduce our stress but also deepen the friendship exactly.Only in these ways, can we all make true friends and have a wonderful life eventually.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Different people regard friendship differently.Therefore,it is advisable for us to regard the friendship dialectically because every thing has two sides,in the way of which we will come to a decision across-and-board.

To my point of view,friendship is necessary for our life.Without it, we will have difficulty not only living but also working and we won't relax ourselves freely through communicating with others who are usually our friends about our confusion,happiness,success,etc.Certainly,we can tell our friends about our matters what confuses us to reduce pressure and study efficiently to some degree and we can also enjoy ourselves.As a result,we will make great progress swiftly and it will turn out to be a bright future.

At the same time,friendship has also be made of two parts that include the beneficial one and the harmful one.And I think the true friendship should be the former and we can all become excellent as well as behave ourselves with it.We can become more intelligent as well,which we will do good to us without doubt.Last benefit a lot from.Last but not least,the people with who you make true friends should also refer you to the errors so as to avoid you doing them again.

In my opinion,we should get on well with others in order to make true friends such as treating others sincerely,acknowledging our fault, learning to share what we have with others generously and so on.Meanwhile,it also counts to communicate with others frequently because it can not only reduce our stress but also deepen the friendship exactly.Only in these ways, can we all make true friends and have a wonderful life eventually.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

十六

标题：Why Personality Counts.

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

Directions: Please write an essay entitled Why Personality Counts. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese.

1. 人的性格各不相同。

2. 为什么一个人的性格很重要？

3. 如何培养有利于个人发展的性格？

Why Personality Counts

People come in all shapes and sizes. They also come with distinctive personalities, the combination of which makes you different from others. Without doubt, personalities are significant to all of us.

To most people's point of view, their personalities can be summed up in a word. The summary may be aggressive, outgoing, shy, responsible and so on, result from which, they are different from others. In a word, they are unique in the world. A person's personality is made up of many elements, such as emotional, social and intellectual. Meanwhile, it can help humans better know about each other. At a result, they are able to communicate with each other fluently so that they have more opportunities to study better, to live a greater life or work for the better future. More communication will do good to them to form a better habit to learn and to make fewer mistakes to such a degree, but the good results depend on the good characters, on which all of the great achievements are based. Therefore, it is necessary for us to come into being good characters. In my opinion, personality counts, which not only has an important influence in our daily life but also has an important influence in our future. At the same time, we should take an active part in the team to exert ourselves in oder to be excellent because our personalities can be shaped if we make the effort. First of all, keeping a good habit is vital on account of its positive influence, which can assist us to be in good spirits so as to work and study fruitful. Besides, being in good manners is necessary as well. On account of it, we can behave ourselves that will have a great impression on the people who we firstly meet. Finally, the good impression will lead to easy and great success. Certainly, it is also significant to learn about more knowledge which can make us advisable so that we can consider carefully before we take action. With everything considered, it is easy to make it to our destination because the whole great efforts that we make is necessary to lead to the good characters.

I am sure that we can succeed in forming the good characters as long as we are determined to work hard. Only in these ways, can we all have a bright future.In addition, it is the reason why personality counts.

第1段

1.1

People come in all shapes and sizes.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: come, arrive, reach 均含“到达”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

1.2

They also come with distinctive personalities, the combination of which makes you different from others.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: mixture, blend, combination, compound, composite 均含“混合”之意。

[批改提示] 注意distinctive和distinguished，distinct区别。

[批改提示] 批改提示，注意distinct与distinctive的区别。

1.3

Without doubt, personalities are significant to all of us.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: temper, character, nature, personality, disposition, complexion 均有“性格，气质，性情，习性”之意。

第2段

2.1

To most people's point of view, their personalities can be summed up in a word.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 sum_up...personality 在教材中出现过 17 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: temper, character, nature, personality, disposition, complexion 均有“性格，气质，性情，习性”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

2.2

The summary may be aggressive, outgoing, shy, responsible and so on, result from which, they are different from others.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: different, various, diverse 均含“不同的”之意。详情点击

[批改提示] be different from表示“与...不同”。注意与be different in的区别。详情点击

2.3

In a word, they are unique in the world.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: only, single, sole, unique, alone 均可表示“唯一的”之意。

2.4

A person's personality is made up of many elements, such as emotional, social and intellectual.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make_up...personality 在教材中出现过 3 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: component, constituent, element, ingredient 均含“组成，成分，部分”之意。

[批改提示] 批改提示，intellectual注意与intelligent，intelligible的区别。

[批改提示] personality表示“性格，个性”。注意与character的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] person表示“人”。注意与people的区别。详情点击

2.5

Meanwhile, it can help humans better know about each other.

[批改提示] 注意meantime和meanwhile的区别。

[批改提示] help近义表达有support/ assist/ aid

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

2.6

At a result, they are able to communicate with each other fluently so that they have more opportunities to study better, to live a greater life or work for the better future.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...opportunity 在教材中出现过 11 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: big, large, great, grand 均含“大的”之意。

[批改提示] able表示“能够??的”。注意与capable的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] communicate近义表达有pass on/ convey/ impart/ spread

2.7

More communication will do good to them to form a better habit to learn and to make fewer mistakes to such a degree, but the good results depend on the good characters, on which all of the great achievements are based.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...mistake 在教材中出现过 19736 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: alphabet, letter, character, script 均有“字母”之意。

[批改提示] 注意characters和character区别。

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

2.8

Therefore, it is necessary for us to come into being good characters.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: alphabet, letter, character, script 均有“字母”之意。

[批改提示] 注意characters和character区别。

[批改提示] come into being的近义表达有come into existence。

第3段

3.1

In my opinion, personality counts, which not only has an important influence in our daily life but also has an important influence in our future.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...influence 在教材中出现过 3940 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: advice, opinion, proposal, suggestion, recommendation, view 均含“意见，建议”之意。

[批改提示] 注意daily和diurnal区别。

固定短语使用错误，建议将our改为the。

[批改提示] personality表示“性格，个性”。注意与character的区别。详情点击

3.2

At the same time, we should take an active part in the team to exert ourselves in oder to be excellent because our personalities can be shaped if we make the effort.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 shape...personality 在教材中出现过 38 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 take...part 在教材中出现过 13283 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: active, energetic, vigorous, brisk, lively 均有“积极的，活跃的”之意。

3.3

First of all, keeping a good habit is vital on account of its positive influence, which can assist us to be in good spirits so as to work and study fruitful.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 keep...habit 在教材中出现过 15 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: aid, assist, help 均有“帮助”之意。

[批改提示] keep近义表达有hold/ maintain/ preserve/ sustain

on account of 意为：由于，属于四六级经典高分短语。

3.4

Besides, being in good manners is necessary as well.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: attitude, air, manner 均含“态度，风度”之意。

[批改提示] besides表示“除了（包括）”。注意与except的区别。详情点击

3.5

On account of it, we can behave ourselves that will have a great impression on the people who we firstly meet.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...impression 在教材中出现过 781 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: big, large, great, grand 均含“大的”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

on account of 意为：由于，属于四六级经典高分短语。

[批改提示] 查看who和whoever，whom的区别。

3.6

Finally, the good impression will lead to easy and great success.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: simple, easy 均含“简单的，轻易的”之意。

[批改提示] lead to的近义表达有contribute to/conduce to/result in。

3.7

Certainly, it is also significant to learn about more knowledge which can make us advisable so that we can consider carefully before we take action.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: act, action, deed, operation, performance 均含“行为，行动”之意。

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

[批改提示] consider近义表达有think about/ reflect on/ ponder/ cogitate upon/ contemplate

[批改提示] 注意consider和believe区别。

3.8

With everything considered, it is easy to make it to our destination because the whole great efforts that we make is necessary to lead to the good characters.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: alphabet, letter, character, script 均有“字母”之意。

[批改提示] lead to的近义表达有contribute to/conduce to/result in。

[批改提示] consider近义表达有think about/ reflect on/ ponder/ cogitate upon/ contemplate

[批改提示] 注意characters和character区别。

第4段

4.1

I am sure that we can succeed in forming the good characters as long as we are determined to work hard.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: alphabet, letter, character, script 均有“字母”之意。 succeed in意为成功地做成了某事，属于四六级经典高分短语。

[批改提示] 注意characters和character区别。

4.2

Only in these ways, can we all have a bright future.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...future 在教材中出现过 2575 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: bright, brilliant, glowing, radiant, luminous 均含有“明亮的”之意。

4.3

In addition, it is the reason why personality counts.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: calculate, count, compute, reckon 均含有“计算”之意。

[批改提示] personality表示“性格，个性”。注意与character的区别。详情点击 the reason why 意为：...的原因是...，属于四六级经典高分句型。

[批改提示] reason表示“原因，理由”。注意与cause的区别。详情点击

People come in all shapes and sizes.They also come with distinctive personalities,the combination of which makes you different from others.Without doubt,personalities are significant to all of us.

To most people's point of view,their personalities can be summed up in a word.The summary may be aggressive,outgoing,shy,responsible and so on,result from which,they are different from others.In a word,they are unique in the world.A person's personality is composed of many elements,such as emotional,social and intellectual.Meanwhile,it can help humans better know about each other.At a result,they are able to communicate with each other fluently so that they have more opportunities to study better,to live a greater life or work for the better future. More communication will do good to them to form a better habit to learn and to make less mistakes to such a degree,but the helpful results depend on the good personalities, on which all of the great achievements are based. Therefore,it is necessary for us to come into being a good personality.

In my opinion, personality counts ,which not only has an important influence in our daily life but also has an important influence in our future.At the same time,we should take an active part in the team to exert ourselves in oder to be more excellent because our personalities can be shaped if we make the effort.First of all,keeping a good habit is vital on account of its positive influence,which can assist us to be in good spirits so as to work and study fruitful.Besides,being in good manners is necessary as well.Due to it,we can behave ourselves that will have a great impression on the people who we firstly meet.Finally,the good impression will lead to the easier success.Certainly,it is

also significant to learn about more knowledge which can make us advisable so that we can consider carefully before we take action.With everything considered,it is easy to make it to our destination.Whereas,the all great efforts that we make is necessary to lead to the good personalities.

I am sure that we can succeed in forming the good personalities as long as we are determined to work hard. Only in these ways, can we all have a bright future.In addition,it is the reason why personality counts.

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People come in all shapes and sizes.They also come with distinctive personalities,the combination of which makes you different from others.Without doubt,personalities are significant to all of us.

To most people's point of view,their personalities can be summed up in a word.The summary may be aggressive,outgoing,shy,responsible and so on,result from which,they are different from others.In a word,they are unique in the world.A person's personality iscomposed made up of many elements,such as emotional,social and intellectual.Meanwhile,it can help humans better know about each other.At a result,they are able to communicate with each other fluently so that they have more opportunities to study better,to live a greater life or work for the better future. More communication will do good to them to form a better habit to learn and to make less fewer mistakes to such a degree,but the helpful results depend on the good personalities, on which all of the great achievements are based. Therefore,it is necessary for us to come into being a good personality.

In my opinion, personality counts ,which counts,which not only has an important influence in our daily life but also has an important influence in our future.At the same time,we should take an active part in the team to exert ourselves in oder to be more excellent because our personalities can be shaped if we make the effort.First of all,keeping a good habit is vital on account of its positive influence,which can assist us to be in good spirits so as to work and study fruitful.Besides,being in good manners is necessary as well.Due towell.On account of it,we can behave ourselves that will have a great impression on the people who we firstly meet.Finally,the good impression will lead to the easier success.Certainly,it is also significant to learn about more knowledge which can make us advisable so that we can consider carefully before we take action.With everything considered,it is easy to make it to our destination.Whereas,the all destination Because the whole great efforts that we make is necessary to lead to the good personalities.

I am sure that we can succeed in forming the good personalities as long as we

are determined to work hard. Only in these ways, can we all have a bright future.In addition,it is the reason why personality counts.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

People come in all shapes and sizes.They also come with distinctive personalities,the combination of which makes you different from others.Without doubt,personalities are significant to all of us.

To most people's point of view,their personalities can be summed up in a word.The summary may be aggressive,outgoing,shy,responsible and so on,result from which,they are different from others.In a word,they are unique in the world.A person's personality is made up of many elements,such as emotional,social and intellectual.Meanwhile,it can help humans better know about each other.At a result,they are able to communicate with each other fluently so that they have more opportunities to study better,to live a greater life or work for the better future. More communication will do good to them to form a better habit to learn and to make fewer mistakes to such a degree,but the helpful good results depend on the good personalities, characters, on which all of the great achievements are based. Therefore,it is necessary for us to come into being a good personality.characters.In my opinion, personality counts,which not only has an important influence in our daily life but also has an important influence in our future.At the same time,we should take an active part in the team to exert ourselves in oder to be excellent because excellent. Because our personalities can be shaped if we make the effort.First of all,keeping a good habit is vital on account of its positive influence,which can assist us to be in good spirits so as to work and study fruitful.Besides,being in good manners is necessary as well.On account of it,we can behave ourselves that will have a great impression on the people who we firstly meet.Finally,the good impression will lead to the easier easy and great success.Certainly,it is also significant to learn about more knowledge which can make us advisable so that we can consider carefully before we take action.With everything considered,it is easy to make it to our destination Because because the whole great efforts that we make is necessary to lead to the good personalities.characters.I am sure that we can succeed in forming the good personalities characters as long as we are determined to work hard. Only in these ways, can we all have a bright future.In addition,it is the reason why personality counts.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

People come in all shapes and sizes.They also come with distinctive personalities,the combination of which makes you different from others.Without doubt,personalities are significant to all of us.

To most people's point of view,their personalities can be summed up in a word.The summary may be aggressive,outgoing,shy,responsible and so on,result from which,they are different from others.In a word,they are unique in the world.A person's personality is made up of many elements,such as emotional,social and intellectual.Meanwhile,it can help humans better know about each other.At a result,they are able to communicate with each other fluently so that they have more opportunities to study better,to live a greater life or work for the better future. More communication will do good to them to form a better habit to learn and to make fewer mistakes to such a degree,but the good results depend on the good characters, on which all of the great achievements are based. Therefore,it is necessary for us to come into being good characters.

In my opinion, personality counts,which not only has an important influence in our daily life but also has an important influence in our future.At the same time,we should take an active part in the team to exert ourselves in order to be excellent. Because excellent because our personalities can be shaped if we make the effort.First of all,keeping a good habit is vital on account of its positive influence,which can assist us to be in good spirits so as to work and study fruitful.Besides,being in good manners is necessary as well.On account of it,we can behave ourselves that will have a great impression on the people who we firstly meet.Finally,the good impression will lead to easy and great success.Certainly,it is also significant to learn about more knowledge which can make us advisable so that we can consider carefully before we take action.With everything considered,it is easy to make it to our destination because the whole great efforts that we make is necessary to lead to the good characters.

I am sure that we can succeed in forming the good characters as long as we are determined to work hard. Only in these ways, can we all have a bright future.In addition,it is the reason why personality counts.

十七

标题： An Unforgettable Travel

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

Directions: For this part, you'll have to write an essay entitled An Unforgettable Travel. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

1) 你在旅行之前所做的准备；

2) 简要介绍旅行地的天气及风土人情；

3) 这次旅行难忘的原因。

An Unforgettable Travel

The only trip which has an unforgettable impression on me is the travel to Beijing, which I have been preparing about six years since I was admitted to the middle school. From then on, I have been determined to be into the Peking University, result from which, I will have an opportunity to visit Bejing, let alone the places of interest. Certainly, it is difficult for me to make it, but I never want to give up until now. Although I couldn't have realized my dream so far, I will exert myself to make it all the time because of my belief to join the Peking University in the future after the university life.

After the College Entrance Examination, I was so eager to start my trip to Beijing. Therefore, I bought the tickets as possible as early. In order to arrive in Beijing in time and safely, I began to prepare for it at least seven days ahead of the time. Of course, the clothes and the food is necessary. What's more, it is important for me to know about the circumstance of Beijing including the traffic, the environment, history, places of interest, etc.

With everything considered, I start to the way to close to my target. During the trip, I am so happy to get into the Peking University that is my dream. I stayed up all the way so as to enjoy the beautiful scenery. I was always in high spirits, which my mother was surprised in. I even ran on the playground or so one and a half hours as soon as I stepped into the Peking University regardless of my exhaustion because of my great enthusiasm. Last but not least, I visited the Summer Palace, the Great Wall, Tsinghua University, etc. Without doubt, this trip is memorable because of my arrival at Beijing. I also believe I can be admitted into it sooner or later as long as I work hard all the time.

第1段

1.1

The only trip which has an unforgettable impression on me is the travel to Beijing, which I have been preparing about six years since I was admitted to the middle school.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...impression 在教材中出现过 781 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: idea, concept, conception, thought, notion,impression 均有“思想，观点，观念”之意。

[批改提示] unforgettable的近义表达有memorable。

[批改提示] middle表示“中部”。注意与centre的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] admit意思为“允许，准许进入”注意与permit区别。详情点击

1.2

From then on, I have been determined to be into the Peking University, result from which, I will have an opportunity to visit Bejing, let alone the places of interest.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: decide, determine, resolve, settle 都含“决定”之意。

[批改提示] opportunity表示“机会”。注意与chance的区别。详情点击

1.3

Certainly, it is difficult for me to make it, but I never want to give up until now.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: certainly, naturally, of course, surely 均有“肯定地，当然”之意。

[批改提示] 查看until和before，by，up to的区别

[批改提示] want的近义表达有intend，tend，lack，need。

1.4

Although I couldn't have realized my dream so far, I will exert myself to make it all the time because of my belief to join the Peking University in the future after the university life.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 realize...dream 在教材中出现过 810 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: due to, owing to, because of, thanks to 均表示“由于”之意。

第2段

2.1

After the College Entrance Examination, I was so eager to start my trip to Beijing.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 start...trip 在教材中出现过 247 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: anxious, eager, keen 均有“急切的，渴望的”之意。

2.2

Therefore, I bought the tickets as possible as early.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: buy, purchase 均含“购买”之意。

[批改提示] possible的近义表达有feasible。

2.3

In order to arrive in Beijing in time and safely, I began to prepare for it at least seven days ahead of the time.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: attain, reach, achieve, arrive 均有“达到”之意。

[批改提示] prepare for在做“准备”讲时，近义表达有brace for。

[批改提示] 批改提示，注意in time与on time区别。

2.4

Of course, the clothes and the food is necessary.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: clothes, clothing, coat, dress, garment, robe, gown, uniform, costume, suit 均有“衣服，服装”之意。

[批改提示] clothes表示“衣服”。注意与cloth的区别。详情点击

2.5

What's more, it is important for me to know about the circumstance of Beijing including the traffic, the environment, history, places of interest, etc.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: condition, state, status, situation, circumstance 均有“状况，情况”之意。

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

what's more意思是另外，而且?，是四六级经典补充类词组。

第3段

3.1

With everything considered, I start to the way to close to my target.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: close, shut, slam 均有“关”之意。

[批改提示] consider近义表达有think about/ reflect on/ ponder/ cogitate upon/ contemplate

3.2

During the trip, I am so happy to get into the Peking University that is my dream.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: favourable, fortunate, happy, lucky 都可表示“有利的，好运的，顺利的”之意

3.3

I stayed up all the way so as to enjoy the beautiful scenery.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 enjoy...scenery 在教材中出现过 70 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: beautiful, fair, handsome, lovely, pretty, fine 均含“美丽的，漂亮的”之意。

[批改提示] 注意enjoy和appreciate的区别。

3.4

I was always in high spirits, which my mother was surprised in.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: high, tall, lofty 均有“高的”之意。

[高分表达] 高分词组，be surprised意为“对??感到惊讶”，同意表达有be astonished。

3.5

I even ran on the playground or so one and a half hours as soon as I stepped into the Peking University regardless of my exhaustion because of my great enthusiasm.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: due to, owing to, because of, thanks to 均表示“由于”之意。

3.6

Last but not least, I visited the Summer Palace, the Great Wall, Tsinghua University, etc.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: call on, see, visit, drop in 均含有“拜访，访问”之意。

3.7

Without doubt, this trip is memorable because of my arrival at Beijing.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: due to, owing to, because of, thanks to 均表示“由于”之意。

[批改提示] 批改提示，注意memorable与memorial的区别。

3.8

I also believe I can be admitted into it sooner or later as long as I work hard all the time.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: believe, trust, confide, rely 均含有“相信，信任”之意。

[批改提示] admit意思为“允许，准许进入”注意与permit区别。详情点击

[高分表达] 高分词组，as...as意为“和...一样地...”,第一个as为副词，表“一样地”， 而第二个as则为连接词，表“和，与”之意。

The only trip which has an unforgettable impression on me is the travel to Beijing,which I have been preparing about six years since I was admitted to the middle school.From then on,I have been determined to be into the Peking University,result from which,I will have an opportunity to visit Bejing,let alone the places of interest.Certainly,it is difficult for me to make it,however,I never want to give up untill now. Although I cannot realize my dream,I will exert myself to make it all the time because of my belief to join the Peking University in the future after the university life.

After the College Entrance Examination,I was so eager to start my trip to Beijing,therefore,I bought the tickets as possible as early. In order to arrive in Beijing in time and safely.I began to prepare the necessity at least seven days ahead of the time.Of courise,the clothes and the food is necessary.What's more, it is important for me to know about the circumstance of Beijing including the traffic,the environment,history,places of interest,etc.

With every thing considered,I start to the way to close to my target.During the trip,I am so happy to get into the Peking University that is my dream.So it is unforgettable.I also believe I can be admitted into it sooner or later as long as I work hard all the time.

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The only trip which has an unforgettable impression on me is the travel to Beijing,which I have been preparing about six years since I was admitted to the middle school.From then on,I have been determined to be into the Peking University,result from which,I will have an opportunity to visit Bejing,let alone the places of interest.Certainly,it is difficult for me to make it,however,I it,but I never want to give up untill until now. Although I cannot realizecouldn't have realized my dream,I dream so far,I will exert myself to make it all the time because of my belief to join the Peking University in the future after the university life.

After the College Entrance Examination,I was so eager to start my trip to Beijing,therefore,IBeijing.Therefore,I bought the tickets as possible as early. In order to arrive in Beijing in time and safely.I safely,I began to prepare the necessity for it at least seven days ahead of the time.Of courise,the course,the clothes and the food is necessary.What's more, it is important for me to know about the circumstance of Beijing including the traffic,the environment,history,places of interest,etc.

With every thing everything considered,I start to the way to close to my

target.During the trip,I am so happy to get into the Peking University that is my dream.So it is unforgettable.I also believe I can be admitted into it sooner or later as long as I work hard all the time.

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The only trip which has an unforgettable impression on me is the travel to Beijing,which I have been preparing about six years since I was admitted to the middle school.From then on,I have been determined to be into the Peking University,result from which,I will have an opportunity to visit Bejing,let alone the places of interest.Certainly,it is difficult for me to make it,but I never want to give up until now. Although I couldn't have realized my dream so far,I will exert myself to make it all the time because of my belief to join the Peking University in the future after the university life.

After the College Entrance Examination,I was so eager to start my trip to Beijing.Therefore,I bought the tickets as possible as early. In order to arrive in Beijing in time and safely,I began to prepare for it at least seven days ahead of the time.Of course,the clothes and the food is necessary.What's more, it is important for me to know about the circumstance of Beijing including the traffic,the environment,history,places of interest,etc.

With everything considered,I start to the way to close to my target.During the trip,I am so happy to get into the Peking University that is my dream.So it dream.I stayed up all the way so as to enjoy the polished scenery.I was always in high spirit, which my mother was surprised in. I even ran on the playground or so one and a half hours as soon as I stepped into the Peking University regardless of my exhaustion due to my high enthusiasm.Last but not least,I visited the Summer Palace, the Great Wall,etc.Without doubt,this trip isunforgettable.I memorable because of my arrival to my dream. I also believe I can be admitted into it sooner or later as long as I work hard all the time. 说明：

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The only trip which has an unforgettable impression on me is the travel to Beijing,which I have been preparing about six years since I was admitted to the middle school.From then on,I have been determined to be into the Peking University,result from which,I will have an opportunity to visit Bejing,let alone the places of interest.Certainly,it is difficult for me to make it,but I never want to give up until now. Although I couldn't have realized my dream so far,I will exert

myself to make it all the time because of my belief to join the Peking University in the future after the university life.

After the College Entrance Examination,I was so eager to start my trip to Beijing.Therefore,I bought the tickets as possible as early. In order to arrive in Beijing in time and safely,I began to prepare for it at least seven days ahead of the time.Of course,the clothes and the food is necessary.What's more, it is important for me to know about the circumstance of Beijing including the traffic,the environment,history,places of interest,etc.

With everything considered,I start to the way to close to my target.During the trip,I am so happy to get into the Peking University that is my dream.I stayed up all the way so as to enjoy the polished beautiful scenery.I was always in high spirit, spirits, which my mother was surprised in. I even ran on the playground or so one and a half hours as soon as I stepped into the Peking University regardless of my exhaustion due to because of my highgreat enthusiasm.Last but not least,I visited the Summer Palace, the GreatWall,etc.Without Wall, Tsinghua University, etc.Without doubt,this trip is memorable because of my arrival to my dream. at Beijing. I also believe I can be admitted into it sooner or later as long as I work hard all the time.

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标题：A Tourist With Good Manners

字数: 不低于500字并且不高于1000 字

满分: 100

要求：

十八

“外研社杯”全国英语写作大赛

（“FLTRP Cup” English Writing Contest）

西南林业大学初赛

(Preliminary Contest in Southwest Forestry University）

Directions: You are allowed 90 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Tourist with Good Manners. You should write at least 500 words according to the outline below:

1. 旅游成了人们生活中的重要内容，越来越多的人在节假日选择出游。

2. 在旅游中陋习频发，如不良卫生习惯，公共场所大呼小叫，乱刻乱划，乱扔垃圾等等。

3. 如何提升人们的旅游文明素质。

A Tourist with Good Manners

With the rapid development of economy, great changes have taken place in China during the recent years. Meanwhile, it is possible for people to live a more

wonderful life because they can affort to make it, result from which, traval has become a popular way for them to spend the vacation with the company of others or on their own. Without doubt, traval is playing a significant role in people's daily life.

Apparently, it is normal for people to live a wonderful life through traval, through which, they are likely to breathe fresh air and to visit the places of interest in different countries or states. Wheare, to our surprise, some bad behaviors have also come into being at the same time with more and more people taking part in the team which has regarded traval as the approach to relax themselves. For instance, many tourists cannot behave themselves. They throw litters here and there, apart from which, they have also formed the habit to write on the famous buildings like the Summer Palace, the Great Wall and so on, to feed the animals in the reserve on their food as well, etc. Somethings that cannot be ignorced is that they even shout in the public regardless of others, which lets alone annoy a number of people. At a result, there are many serious affairs taking place among humans. Certainly, it has a hamful influence in society. Therefore, it is necessary for us to take an active part in the teams that are determined to exert themselves to improve the circumstance and to make the environment around us better.

To my point of view, we students should take action right away on the one hand. For example, we can try our best to avoid the bad manners as possible as we can. For example, picking up the litters, not spitting vasually, protecting the grass and trees, etc. What's more, it will do good to not only ourselves but also the society if we can call on more people to join the teams like us. On the other hand, the local government should also take fruitful measures to change the circumstance. I believe that the education of the government can have a great influence on people to such a certain extent. Last but not least, with the effort of the whole nation, it is possible for the circumtance of traval to show a new look.Only in this way, can the atmosphere among tourists become better , can we have a more wonderful life and can we live a better society with more polished scenery and more people to behave themselves. And now, it time to take action.

十九

标题：How to Improve Parent-Teenager Relationship

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

Directions: Please write an essay entitled How to Improve Parent-Teenager Relationship. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese.

1. 孩子们在青少年时期常与父母存在诸多矛盾。

2. 你认为导致这些矛盾的原因是什么？

3. 如何来解决这些矛盾？

How to improve Parent-Teenager relationship

When we are young, we tend to communicate with our parents about all kinds of things that not only includes mental things but also includes physical things. However, the generation gap comes in being between us and our parents with time going by. Therefore it's time to settled with this problem in order to improve Parent-Teenager relationship.

As for me, I will give you some suggestions, which are as follows.

On the one hand, we'd better talk with our parents regularly. Only in this way, can our parents be able to know more about us in time, which is necessary to reduce the misunderstanding to such a degree. On the other hand, we should keep in touch with them as often as possible wherever we are and whenever it is.Because our parents are always waiting to answer the phone regardless of however late it is. What's more, it's our duty to visit them in our spare time. As far as I'm concerned, it will do good to both us and our parents to travel with them in person let alone solve the problem. Certainly, if it is possible, we should wander with them every weekend. At the result of it, our parents can have a great mood all the time, which is sure to help them to keep healthy and survive them older.

Last but not least, did we all take an active part in this activity, the old would live a happier life. So let's go!

第1段

1.1

When we are young, we tend to communicate with our parents about all kinds of things that not only includes mental things but also includes physical things.

[教师点评] that not only includes mental things but also includes physical things : "mental things and physical things "这个表达不太准确，可以稍微说具体点，比如说interesting school stories and secrets with our friends. 总之呢可以联系生活实际更具体一点会生动些。

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 include...thing 在教材中出现过 379 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: contain, include, embrace, involve, comprehend, hold, comprise 均含有“包括，包含”之意。

[批改提示] communicate近义表达有pass on/ convey/ impart/ spread

1.2

However, the generation gap comes in being between us and our parents with time going by.

[教师点评] comes in being : 正确的用法是： comes into being

[学习提示] 易混词汇: come, arrive, reach 均含“到达”之意。

1.3

Therefore it's time to settled with this problem in order to improve Parent-Teenager relationship.

[教师点评] settled with : 改为：settle with

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 improve...relationship 在教材中出现过 338 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: improve, better, perfect, refine 均有“改进，改善”之意。

[批改提示] 在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式it's,而应当使用单词的完整理式it is。

第2段

2.1

As for me, I will give you some suggestions, which are as follows.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 give...suggestion 在教材中出现过 161 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: give, accord, award, confer，grant, endow, present, bestow 均含有“给予，赠给”之意。

第3段

3.1

On the one hand, we'd better talk with our parents regularly.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: always, often, usually, frequently, repeatedly,regularly 均表示“频度”。

3.2

Only in this way, can our parents be able to know more about us in time, which is necessary to reduce the misunderstanding to such a degree.

[教师点评] to such a degree : 改为 to certain degree

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 reduce...misunderstanding 在教材中出现过 4 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: class, degree, grade, rank 均有“级，等级”之意。

[批改提示] 批改提示，注意in time与on time区别。

[批改提示] be able to表示“能够”，注意与can区别。详情点击

[批改提示] able表示“能够??的”。注意与capable的区别。详情点击

3.3

On the other hand, we should keep in touch with them as often as possible wherever we are and whenever it is.

[批改提示] keep近义表达有hold/ maintain/ preserve/ sustain

[批改提示] often的近义表达有frequently。

[批改提示] possible的近义表达有feasible。

3.4

Because our parents are always waiting to answer the phone regardless of however late it is.

[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！

[学习提示] 易混词汇: answer, reply, respond, retort, return 均有“回答”之意。

[批改提示] 副词always意为“总是”“老是”，如果与带-ing的进行时态用时常带贬义。

3.5

What's more, it's our duty to visit them in our spare time.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: duty, obligation, responsibility, function 都有“义务，职责”之意。

[批改提示] 在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式it's,而应当使用单词的完整理式it is。 what's more意思是另外，而且?，是四六级经典补充类词组。

3.6

As far as I'm concerned, it will do good to both us and our parents to travel with them in person let alone solve the problem.

[教师点评] us and our parents : 改为my parents and me .因为这里是说你自己的做法

[教师点评] let alone solve the problem : 这句和前面的意思不连贯

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 solve...problem 在教材中出现过 15482 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: problem, question, issue, matter 均含“问题”之意。

[批改提示] person表示“人”。注意与people的区别。详情点击

3.7

Certainly, if it is possible, we should wander with them every weekend.

[教师点评] should : 语气可以稍微降低点，建议改为can

[学习提示] 易混词汇: certainly, naturally, of course, surely 均有“肯定地，当然”之意。

[批改提示] possible的近义表达有feasible。

3.8

At the result of it, our parents can have a great mood all the time, which is sure to help them to keep healthy and survive them older.

[教师点评] At the result of it : as a result

[教师点评] survive them older : 正确的用法是survive their old time. 但这里不建议用survive，因为survive一般用在经历危险或不愉快的事时,你想表达的应该是父母能安度晚年，建议另换一个词(enjoy ).

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...mood 在教材中出现过 71 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: big, large, great, grand 均含“大的”之意。

[批改提示] help近义表达有support/ assist/ aid

表达不规范，建议将have a mood改为be in good mood

[批改提示] keep近义表达有hold/ maintain/ preserve/ sustain

第4段

4.1

Last but not least, did we all take an active part in this activity, the old would live a happier life.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 live...life 在教材中出现过 7617 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 take...part 在教材中出现过 13283 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: active, energetic, vigorous, brisk, lively 均有“积极的，活跃的”之意。

[批改提示] 注意would和used to的区别。

4.2

So let's go!

When we are young,we tend to communicate with our parents about all kinds of things that not only includes mental things but also includes physical things.However, the generation gap comes in being between us and our parents with time going by. Therefore it's time to settled with this problem in order to improve Parent-Teenager relationship.

As for me,I will give you some suggestions,which are as follows.

On the one hand,we'd better talk with our parents regularly. Only in this way,can our parents be able to know more about us in time,which is necessary to reduce the misunderstanding to such a degree.On the other hand, we should keep in touch with them as often as possible wherever we are and whenever it is. Because our parents are always waiting to answer the phone regardless of however late it is.What's more, it's our duty to visit them in our spare time. As far as I'm concerned,it will do good to both us and our parents to travel with them in person let alone solve the problem.Certainly, if it is possible, we should wander with them every weekend. At the result of it, our parents can have a great mood all the time,which is sure to help them to keep healthy and survive them older.

Last but not least, did we all take an active part in this activity, the old would live a happier life.So let's go!

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When we are young,we tend to communicate with our parents about all kinds of things that not only includes mental things but also includes physical things.However, the generation gap comes in being between us and our parents with time going by. Therefore it's time to settled with this problem in order to improve Parent-Teenager relationship.

As for me,I will give you some suggestions,which are as follows.

On the one hand,we'd better talk with our parents regularly. Only in this way,can our parents be able to know more about us in time,which is necessary to reduce the misunderstanding to such a degree.On the other hand, we should keep in touch with them as often as possible wherever we are and whenever it is. Because is, because our parents are always waiting to answer the phone regardless of however late it is.What's more, it's our duty to visit them in our spare time. As far as I'm concerned,it will do good to both us and our parents to travel with them in person let alone solve the problem.Certainly, if it is possible, we should wander with them every weekend. At the result of it, our parents can have a great mood all the time,which is sure to help them to keep healthy and survive them older.

Last but not least, did we all take an active part in this activity, the old would live a happier life.So let's go!

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二十

标题：How To Get Along Well With Others

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于200 字

满分: 100

要求：

Write an essay on this title. You should write at least 150 words.

How To Get Along Well With others

In my opinion, friends play an important part in our daily life. Not only in study but also in communication, it's necessary to get along well with others.Result from it, there will be great opportunities to make great progress.

In oder to get along well with others, my ideas are as follows. Firstly, in our daily life, we should help ones in need actively, which will make a good impression on them. Certainly, it will turn out to be precious friendless. Apart from that, take an active part in various activities, which can expand the interpersonal relationship to some extent. At the same time, allowance is also significant. Therefore, it would be intelligent to learn to forgive others properly. Only in this way, can we all make great progress.

What's more, difficult as it is before we can make it, we should still insist on doing it. In our study, it will assist us to solve problems easily. Through cooperation, we can master even more knowledge. To such degree, we can make rapid progress and achievement. Finally, it can help us to form a good habit. With the advantage over others, we will develop well in future.

第1段

1.1

In my opinion, friends play an important part in our daily life.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 play...part 在教材中出现过 4525 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: friend, mate, acquaintance, pal 都有“朋友”之意。 important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

[批改提示] 注意daily和diurnal区别。

1.2

Not only in study but also in communication, it's necessary to get along well with others.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: communication, traffic, transportation 均有“交通”之意。

[批改提示] 在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式it's,而应当使用单词的完整理式it is。

1.3

Result from it, there will be great opportunities to make great progress.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...progress 在教材中出现过 10001 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: big, large, great, grand 均含“大的”之意。

第2段

2.1

In oder to get along well with others, my ideas are as follows.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: idea, concept, conception, thought, notion, impression 均有“思想，观点，观念”之意。

2.2

Firstly, in our daily life, we should help ones in need actively, which will make a good impression on them.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 help...one 在教材中出现过 93 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...impression 在教材中出现过 2416 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: idea, concept, conception, thought, notion,impression 均有“思想，观点，观念”之意。

[批改提示] help近义表达有support/ assist/ aid

[批改提示] 注意daily和diurnal区别。

2.3

Certainly, it will turn out to be precious friendless.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: certainly, naturally, of course, surely 均有“肯定地，当然”之意。

2.4

Apart from that, take an active part in various activities, which can expand the interpersonal relationship to some extent.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 expand...relationship 在教材中出现过 220 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: active, energetic, vigorous, brisk, lively 均有“积极的，活跃的”之意。

[批改提示] 注意activities和activity的区别。

[批改提示] expand近义表达有increase/ extend/ multiply/ enlarge

[批改提示] apart from在做“除去??，除??意外”讲时，近义表达有with the exception of。

2.5

At the same time, allowance is also significant.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: earnings, allowance, income, salary, wage, pay, fee 都可表示“工资，收入”之意。

2.6

Therefore, it would be intelligent to learn to forgive others properly.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: excuse, pardon, forgive, overlook 均有“原谅”之意。

[批改提示] 注意would和used to的区别。

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

[批改提示] 批改提示，intelligent注意与intelligible，intellectual的区别。

2.7

Only in this way, can we all make great progress.

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...progress 在教材中出现过 10001 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: big, large, great, grand 均含“大的”之意。

第3段

3.1

What's more, difficult as it is before we can make it, we should still insist on doing it.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: insist, persist, persevere, adhere, cling 均有“坚持”之意。 what's more意思是另外，而且?，是四六级经典补充类词组。

3.2

In our study, it will assist us to solve problems easily.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: aid, assist, help 均有“帮助”之意。

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 solve...problem 在教材中出现过 15482 次

3.3

Through cooperation, we can master even more knowledge.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: knowledge, learning, scholarship 均有“知识，学问”之意。

[批改提示] through的近义表达有across，in term of，via。

[批改提示] master表示“掌握，精通”。注意与grasp的区别。详情点击

3.4

To such degree, we can make rapid progress and achievement.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: class, degree, grade, rank 均有“级，等级”之意。

3.5

Finally, it can help us to form a good habit.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: at last, at length, eventually, finally, in the end, lastly 均含有“最后，终于”之意。

[批改提示] help近义表达有support/ assist/ aid

3.6

With the advantage over others, we will develop well in future.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: advantage, benefit, interest, favour, profit, gain 均有“利益，好处”之意。

[批改提示] 注意与merit和good point的区别

[批改提示] develop近义表达有advance/ progress/ evolve/ thrive/ flourish

In my opinion, friends play an important in our daily life.Not only in study but also in communication,so it's necessary to get along welll with others. As the result of getting well with others, there will be great opportunities to make progress or live a wonderful life.

In oder to get along well with others, my ideas are as follows. At first,in our daily life, we should help ones in need actively,which will make a good impression on them.Certainly ,it will turn out to be precious friendness. Apart from that, take

an active part in various activities,which can expand your communication to some extent.At the same time, allowance also play an important role in our interpersonal interaction. Therefore, it is intelligent for us to learn to forgive others properly.Only in this way,can we all make great progress.

What's more, difficult as it is before we can get along well with others, we should still insist on doing it. In our study, getting well with others will assist us to solve problems easily.Because of cooperation, we can know about even more information. To such degree,we can make rapid progress and fruitful achievement. Finally,it can help us to form a good habit to exist.With the advantage over others, we will develop well in future.

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In my opinion, friends play an important in our daily life.Not only in study but also in communication,so it's necessary to get along welll well with others. As the result of getting well with others, there will be great opportunities to make progress or live a wonderful life.

In oder to get along well with others, my ideas are as follows. At first,in our daily life, we should help ones in need actively,which will make a good impression on them.Certainly ,it will turn out to be precious friendness. friendless. Apart from that, take an active part in various activities,which can expand your communication to some extent.At the same time, allowance also play an important role in our interpersonal interaction. Therefore, it is intelligent for us to learn to forgive others properly.Only in this way,can we all make great progress.

What's more, difficult as it is before we can get along well with others, we should still insist on doing it. In our study, getting well with others it will assist us to solve problems easily.Because of cooperation, we can know about even more information. To such degree,we can make rapid progress and fruitful achievement. Finally,it can help us to form a good habit to exist.With the advantage over others, we will develop well in future.

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In my opinion, friends play an important part in our daily life.Not only in study but also incommunication,so communication, it's necessary to get along well with others. As the result of getting well with others, it, there will be great opportunities to make progress or live a wonderful life.

In oder to get along well with others, my ideas are as follows. At first,in Firstly,in

our daily life, we should help ones in need actively,which will make a good impression on them.Certainly ,it will turn out to be precious friendless. Apart from that, take an active part in various activities,which can expand your communication to some extent.At the same time, allowance is also play an important role significant in our interpersonal interaction. Therefore, it is intelligent for us we are intalligent to learn to forgive others properly.Only in this way,can we all make great progress.

What's more, difficult as it is before we can get along well with others, make it, we should still insist on doing it. In our study, it will assist us to solve problems easily.Because of cooperation, we can know about even more information. To such degree,we can make rapid progress and achievement. Finally,it can help us to form a good habit to exist.With the advantage over others, we will develop well in future.

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In my opinion, friends play an important part in our daily life.Not only in study but also in communication, it's necessary to get along well with others. As the result of it, there will be great opportunities to make progress or live a wonderful life.

In oder to get along well with others, my ideas are as follows. Firstly,in our daily life, we should help ones in need actively,which will make a good impression on them.Certainly ,itthem.Certainly,it will turn out to be precious friendless. Apart from that, take an active part in various activities,which can expand your communication to some extent.At the same time, allowance is also significant in our interpersonal interaction. Therefore, we areintalligent intelligent to learn to forgive others properly.Only in this way,can we all make great progress.

What's more, difficult as it is before we can make it, we should still insist on doing it. In our study, it will assist us to solve problems easily.Because of cooperation, we can know about even more information. To such degree,we can make rapid progress and achievement. Finally,it can help us to form a good habit to exist.With live.With the advantage over others, we will develop well in future.

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In my opinion, friends play an important part in our daily life.Not only in study but also in communication, it's necessary to get along well with others. As the result of it, there will be great opportunities to make progress or live a wonderful

life.

In oder to get along well with others, my ideas are as follows. Firstly,in our daily life, we should help ones in need actively,which will make a good impression on them.Certainly,it will turn out to be precious friendless. Apart from that, take an active part in various activities,which can expand your communication to some extent.At the same time, allowance is also significant in our interpersonal interaction. significant. Therefore, we are intelligent to learn to forgive others properly.Only in this way,can we all make great progress.

What's more, difficult as it is before we can make it, we should still insist on doing it. In our study, it will assist us to solve problems easily.Because of cooperation, we can know about even more information. To such degree,we can make rapid progress and achievement. Finally,it can help us to form a good habit to live.With habit.With the advantage over others, we will develop well in future.

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In my opinion, friends play an important part in our daily life.Not only in study but also in communication, it's necessary to get along well with others. As the result of others.Result from it, there will be great opportunities to make progress or live a wonderful life.

In oder to get along well with others, my ideas are as follows. Firstly,in our daily life, we should help ones in need actively,which will make a good impression on them.Certainly,it will turn out to be precious friendless. Apart from that, take an active part in various activities,which can expand your communication to some extent.At the same time, allowance is also significant. Therefore, we are would be intelligent to learn to forgive others properly.Only in this way,can we all make great progress.

What's more, difficult as it is before we can make it, we should still insist on doing it. In our study, it will assist us to solve problems easily.Because of easily.Through cooperation, we can know about learn even more information. knowledge. To such degree,we can make rapid progress and achievement. Finally,it can help us to form a good habit.With the advantage over others, we will develop well in future.

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3.黄色是增加部分

In my opinion, friends play an important part in our daily life.Not only in study but also in communication, it's necessary to get along well with others.Result

from it, there will be great opportunities to make progress or live a wonderful life.

In oder to get along well with others, my ideas are as follows. Firstly,in our daily life, we should help ones in need actively,which will make a good impression on them.Certainly,it will turn out to be precious friendless. Apart from that, take an active part in various activities,which can expand your communication to some extent.At the same time, allowance is also significant. Therefore, we it would be intelligent to learn to forgive others properly.Only in this way,can we all make great progress.

What's more, difficult as it is before we can make it, we should still insist on doing it. In our study, it will assist us to solve problems easily.Through cooperation, we can learn mastereven more knowledge. To such degree,we can make rapid progress and achievement. Finally,it can help us to form a good habit.With the advantage over others, we will develop well in future. 说明：

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3.黄色是增加部分

In my opinion, friends play an important part in our daily life.Not only in study but also in communication, it's necessary to get along well with others.Result from it, there will be great opportunities to make progress or live a wonderful life.success.In oder to get along well with others, my ideas are as follows. Firstly,in our daily life, we should help ones in need actively,which will make a good impression on them.Certainly,it will turn out to be precious friendless. Apart from that, take an active part in various activities,which can expand your communication to some extent.At the same time, allowance is also significant. Therefore, it would be intelligent to learn to forgive others properly.Only in this way,can we all make great progress.

What's more, difficult as it is before we can make it, we should still insist on doing it. In our study, it will assist us to solve problems easily.Through cooperation, we can master even more knowledge. To such degree,we can make rapid progress and achievement. Finally,it can help us to form a good habit.With the advantage over others, we will develop well in future. 说明：

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2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

In my opinion, friends play an important part in our daily life.Not only in study but also in communication, it's necessary to get along well with others.Result from it, there will be great opportunities to make progress or live a wonderful life.success.In oder to get along well with others, my ideas are as follows.

Firstly,in our daily life, we should help ones in need actively,which will make a good impression on them.Certainly,it will turn out to be precious friendless. Apart from that, take an active part in various activities,which can expand your communication to some extent.At the same time, allowance is also significant. Therefore, it would be intelligent to learn to forgive others properly.Only in this way,can we all make great progress.

What's more, difficult as it is before we can make it, we should still insist on doing it. In our study, it will assist us to solve problems easily.Through cooperation, we can master even more knowledge. To such degree,we can make rapid progress and achievement. Finally,it can help us to form a good habit.With the advantage over others, we will develop well in future. 说明：

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2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

In From my opinion, point of view, friends play an important part in our daily life.Not only in study but also in communication, it's necessary to get along well with others.Result from it, there will be great opportunities to make great progress.

In oder to get along well with others, my ideas are as follows. Firstly,in our daily life, we should help ones in need actively,which will make a good impression on them.Certainly,it will turn out to be precious friendless. Apart from that, take an active part in various activities,which can expand your communication to some extent.At the same time, allowance is also significant. Therefore, it would be intelligent to learn to forgive others properly.Only in this way,can we all make great progress.

What's more, difficult as it is before we can make it, we should still insist on doing it. In our study, it will assist us to solve problems easily.Through cooperation, we can master even more knowledge. To such degree,we can make rapid progress and achievement. Finally,it can help us to form a good habit.With the advantage over others, we will develop well in future. 说明：

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3.黄色是增加部分

From In my point of view, opinion, friends play an important part in our daily life.Not only in study but also in communication, it's necessary to get along well with others.Result from it, there will be great opportunities to make great progress.

In oder to get along well with others, my ideas are as follows. Firstly,in our daily life, we should help ones in need actively,which will make a good impression on

them.Certainly,it will turn out to be precious friendless. Apart from that, take an active part in various activities,which can expand your communication the interpersonal relationship to some extent.At the same time, allowance is also significant. Therefore, it would be intelligent to learn to forgive others properly.Only in this way,can we all make great progress.

What's more, difficult as it is before we can make it, we should still insist on doing it. In our study, it will assist us to solve problems easily.Through cooperation, we can master even more knowledge. To such degree,we can make rapid progress and achievement. Finally,it can help us to form a good habit.With the advantage over others, we will develop well in future.

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二十一

标题：How to Learn English Well

字数: 不低于150字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

Directions: Please write an essay entitled How to Learn English Well. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese.

1. 英语学习在中国已经非常普遍。

2. 在英语学习中同学们普遍存在哪些问题？

3. 你有何建议来克服这些问题？

How to learn English well

As we know, English is widely used at home and aboard. Especially, not only students but also workers have come into being the habit to learn English regularly in China.

Nevertheless, a great quantity of students has difficulty in learning English.For instance, some students can't enrich their knowledge as much as possible. As a result, they don't have enough vocabulary and grammar for them to use flexibly, which limits them to exercise to some degree. Other than that, most of the students dare not speak English in public loudly. Certainly, as the result of shyness, they cannot make great and rapid progress in their English learning obviously. Last but not least, many students are afraid to make mistakes etc. All these problems have a great influence on their English learning.

In my opinion, it will do good to us if we manage to master enough vocabulary and grammar. Most of all, we should speak English loudly and widely.At the same time, dare to make errors. Only in this way, can we all make great progress.

As we know,English is widely used at home and aboard.Especially ,not only

students but also workers have come into being the habit to learn English regularly in China.

Nevertheless, a great quantity of students has difficulty in learning English. For instance, some students can't enrich their knowledge as much as possible. As a result,they don't have enough vocabulary and grammar for them to use fexibly, which limits them to exercise to some degree. Other than that,most of the students dare not to speak English in public loudly. Certainly, as the reslut of shyness,they can not make great and rapid progress in their English learning obviously. Last but not least, manny students are afraid of making mistakes etc. All these problems prevent their English learning.

In my opinion, it will do good to us if we manage to master enough vocabulary and grammar. Most of all, we should speak English loudly and widely. At the same time, dare to face the errors. Only in this way ,can we all make fruitful progress.

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3.黄色是增加部分

As we know,English is widely used at home and aboard.Especially,not only students but also workers have come into being the habit to learn English regularly in China.

Nevertheless, a great quantity of students has difficulty in learning English. For instance, some students can't enrich their knowledge as much as possible. As a result,they don't have enough vocabulary and grammar for them to use fexibly, flexibly, which limits them to exercise to some degree. Other than that,most of the students dare not to speak English in public loudly. Certainly, as the reslut of shyness,they can not cannot make great and rapid progress in their English learning obviously. Last but not least, manny students are afraid of making mistakes etc. All these problems prevent their English learning.

In my opinion, it will do good to us if we manage to master enough vocabulary and grammar. Most of all, we should speak English loudly and widely. At the same time, dare toface the make errors. Only in this way ,can we all make fruitful progress.

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2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

As we know,English is widely used at home and aboard.Especially,not only students but also workers have come into being the habit to learn English regularly in China.

Nevertheless, a great quantity of students has difficulty in learning English. For

instance, some students can't enrich their knowledge as much as possible. As a result,they don't have enough vocabulary and grammar for them to use flexibly, which limits them to exercise to some degree. Other than that,most of the students dare not speak English in public loudly. Certainly, as the reslut result of shyness,they cannot make great and rapid progress in their English learning obviously. Last but not least, manny many students are afraid of making mistakes etc. All these problems prevent limit their English learning.

In my opinion, it will do good to us if we manage to master enough vocabulary and grammar. Most of all, we should speak English loudly and widely. At the same time, dare to make errors. Only in this way ,can way,can we all make fruitful great progress.

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2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

As we know,English is widely used at home and aboard.Especially,not only students but also workers have come into being the habit to learn English regularly in China.

Nevertheless, a great quantity of students has difficulty in learning English. For instance, some students can't enrich their knowledge as much as possible. As a result,they don't have enough vocabulary and grammar for them to use flexibly, which limits them to exercise to some degree. Other than that,most of the students dare not speak English in public loudly. Certainly, as the result of shyness,they cannot make great and rapid progress in their English learning obviously. Last but not least, many students are afraid of making mistakes etc. All these problems limit have a great influnce on their English learning.

In my opinion, it will do good to us if we manage to master enough vocabulary and grammar. Most of all, we should speak English loudly and widely. At the same time, dare to make errors. Only in this way,can we all make great progress.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

As we know,English is widely used at home and aboard.Especially,not only students but also workers have come into being the habit to learn English regularly in China.

Nevertheless, a great quantity of students has difficulty in learning English. For instance, some students can't enrich their knowledge as much as possible. As a result,they don't have enough vocabulary and grammar for them to use flexibly, which limits them to exercise to some degree. Other than that,most of the

students dare not speak English in public loudly. Certainly, as the result of shyness,they cannot make great and rapid progress in their English learning obviously. Last but not least, many students are afraid of makingto make mistakes etc. All these problems have a great influence on their English learning. In my opinion, it will do good to us if we manage to master enough vocabulary and grammar. Most of all, we should speak English loudly and widely. At the same time, dare to make errors. Only in this way,can we all make great progress.

说明：

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2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Most of all, we should speak English loudly and widely.

widely.:用词错误

二十二

翻译

标题：四级汉译英翻译：中国家庭文化

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于300 字

满分: 100

原文：

在传统的中国家庭文化中，同一祖先的几代后裔(descendants) 居住在一起，形成一个大家庭。这种自治(autonomous)家族制度是 中国传统社会的基本单位。中国的孩子们跟随他们父亲的姓。这和 西方文化是一样的。如今在中国，孩子跟父亲的姓或母亲的姓在法 律上都是合法的。除了那些因为结婚加入到家庭中的人以外，人们 的姓氏都是一样的。

参考译文:In traditional Chinese family culture, descendants of several generations from the same ancestor lived together and formed a big fam?ily system. This kind of autonomous family system was the basic unit of traditional Chinese society. Chinese children follow their father’s fam?ily name. This is the same as western culture. Nowadays in China it is legally fine for a child to follow either father’s family name or mother’s family name. Within each family system, of course people except those who joined this family system through marriage all have the same family name.

翻译自测

Translation

As is known to us all, in the traditional China family culture, several generations of descendants who are from the common ancestor, live together, which turns out to come into being the large family to a degree. Without doubt, the traditional Chinese society is based on this kind of autonomous family rules.Meanwhile, chinese children acquire the family name from their fathers, which is the same as that in western culture. So far, it is legal for Chinese children owning their family name from their mothers or fathers. Certainly,

apart from the ones who join in the large family because of marrying, the whole family members have the common family name.

1.1

As is known to us all, in the traditional China family culture, several generations of descendants who are from the common ancestor, live together, which turns out to come into being the large family to a degree. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: come, arrive, reach 均含“到达”之意。

[批改提示] 注意descendant和posterity区别。

[批改提示] large的同意表达有miraculous或marvelous 。

[批改提示] be known to... 表示“为...所熟知”。注意与be known by... 的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

1.2

Without doubt, the traditional Chinese society is based on this kind of autonomous family rules. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 base...society 在教材中出现过 39 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: kind, sort, type, class, classification, category, species, variety 均有“种，类，类型”之意。

1.3

Meanwhile, chinese children acquire the family name from their fathers, which is the same as that in western culture. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: baby, child, infant, youngster 均有“孩子”之意。

[批改提示] 注意meantime和meanwhile的区别。

[批改提示] acquire近义表达有pick up/ get/ grasp/ gain/ attain

[批改提示] 注意Chinese和the Chinese区别。

1.4

So far, it is legal for Chinese children owning their family name from their mothers or fathers. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: baby, child, infant, youngster 均有“孩子”之意。

[批改提示] 注意Chinese和the Chinese区别。

1.5

Certainly, apart from the ones who join in the large family because of marrying, the whole family members have the common family name. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: due to, owing to, because of, thanks to 均表示“由于”之意。

[批改提示] large的同意表达有miraculous或marvelous 。

[批改提示] apart from在做“除去??，除??意外”讲时，近义表达有with the exception of。

[批改提示] 查看who和whoever，whom的区别。

[批改提示] join in表示“参加”。注意与take part in的区别。详情点击

In the traditional China family culture, several generations of descendants,who

are from the common ancestor, live together,which turns out to come into being the large family.The traditional Chinese society is based on this kind of autonomous family rules.Chinese children acquire the family name from their fathers,which is the same as that in western culture.So far,it is legal for Chinese children children,who own their family name from their mothers or fathers.Apart from the one because of marrying,the family members have the common family name.

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In the traditional China family culture, several generations of descendants,who descendants who are from the common ancestor, live together,which turns out to come into being the large family.The traditional Chinese society is based on this kind of autonomous family rules.Chinese children acquire the family name from their fathers,which is the same as that in western culture.So far,it is legal for Chinese children,who own children owning their family name from their mothers or fathers.Apart from the one who join in the large family because of marrying,the family members have the common family name.

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In the traditional China family culture, several generations of descendants who are from the common ancestor, live together,which turns out to come into being the large family.The traditional Chinese society is based on this kind of autonomous family rules.Chineserules.Meanwhile,chinese children acquire the family name from their fathers,which is the same as that in western culture.So far,it is legal for Chinese children owning their family name from their mothers or fathers.Apart fathers.Certainly,apart from the ones who join in the large family because of marrying,the whole family members have the common family name.

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In As is known to us all,in the traditional China family culture, several generations of descendants who are from the common ancestor, live together,which turns out to come into being the large family.The family to a degree.Without doubt,the traditional Chinese society is based on this kind of autonomous family rules.Meanwhile,chinese children acquire the family name

from their fathers,which is the same as that in western culture.So far,it is legal for Chinese children owning their family name from their mothers or fathers.Certainly,apart from the ones who join in the large family because of marrying,the whole family members have the common family name.

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二十三

标题：[20xx年12月四级预测]Killing Time Indoors

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

1. 现在很多人业余时间喜欢宅在家里

2. 人们对这种做法有不同的看法

3. 我的看法

范文:Nowadays a growing number of people, especially the 20s or 30s, tend to stay indoors for most of their spare time, especially during holidays. Some spend the majority of their time online chatting, blogging, shopping, dating or playing computer games. Some sit with their eyes glued to the television screen, day and night.

People‘s opinions vary when it comes to this ways of killing time. A great number of people maintain that staying indoors is cheaper, comfortable, and most importantly, very safe. Others, however, frown upon staying indoors for too long. They are worried that lack of physical exercise and face-to-face communication with others will do harm to people‘s body and mind.

Personally, I don‘t think staying indoors for most of the day should be advocated. Instead, people in all ages, with their physical conditions permitting, should be encouraged to spend more time outdoors. The fresh air, the brilliant sunshine, the pleasant green space, the interactions with other people, etc. are all good for people‘s health, both physically and psychologically.

自测

Killing Time Indoors

Nowadays, more and more people prefer to kill time indoors in their spare time. Different people have different views on the status that are based on some realities and we should all consider the points of view seriously and take an active part in the team which contribute to improving the situation to the best of our ability.

The majority of people agree that it is necessary to stay indoors. During the time, they are able to do many meaningful things. For instance, they can play basketball, play ping pang, play chess, play golf, play the piano, dance to music,

etc, which is used to enjoy themselves. It can not only exercise themselves but also make their life colorful to such an extent. At the same time, they also believe that staying indoors offers themselves more time to do something that they really interest than wander outdoors, in which ways they can prevent themselves from many temptations that maybe make them clime murder to some degree.Therefore, it is helpful for people to form good personalities.

Nevertheless, it is harmful in some other people's opinions. They insist that staying indoors will make them stupid and cannot considers affairs thoroughly, which limits their mind. Certainly, there is no doubt that they should go outdoors in order to breathe the fresh air, which will do good to their health. Result from which they can be full of energy and work fruitfully, which will make them face a bright future. Besides, it will help them to be outgoing because they can have more time to know about the world, share time with friends and so on, which promotes their ability to communicate with others than the people who kill time indoors.

From my point of view, different people have different opinions that depend on ourselves.

第1段

1.1

Nowadays, more and more people prefer to kill time indoors in their spare time.

[修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 kill...time 在教材中出现过 303 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: kill, murder, slaughter, massacre, assassinate, execute 均有“杀，杀死”之意。

[批改提示] prefer近义表达有favor/ go for/ opt

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

kill time意思是打发时间?，是四六级经典短语。

1.2

Different people have different views on the status that are based on some realities and we should all consider the points of view seriously and take an active part in the team which contribute to improving the situation to the best of our ability. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 consider...point_of_view 在教材中出现过 20 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 improve...situation 在教材中出现过 565 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...view 在教材中出现过 4707 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 take...part 在教材中出现过 13283 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: ability, capacity, capability, genius, talent, competence, faculty, gift, aptitude 均可表示人的“能力，才能”之意。

第2段

2.1

The majority of people agree that it is necessary to stay indoors. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: agree, accord, coincide, conform, correspond 均含“符合，一致”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

2.2

During the time, they are able to do many meaningful things. [修改]

[批改提示] able表示“能够??的”。注意与capable的区别。详情点击

2.3

For instance, they can play basketball, play ping pang, play chess, play golf, play the piano, dance to music, etc, which is used to enjoy themselves. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: ball, dance 均有“舞会”之意。

[批改提示] 注意enjoy和appreciate的区别。

[批改提示] 查看be used to do和be used to doing的区别。

2.4

It can not only exercise themselves but also make their life colorful to such an extent. [修改]

2.5

At the same time, they also believe that staying indoors offers themselves more time to do something that they really interest than wander outdoors, in which ways they can prevent themselves from many temptations that maybe make them clime murder to some degree. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 offer...time 在教材中出现过 223 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: believe, trust, confide, rely 均含有“相信，信任”之意。

2.6

Therefore, it is helpful for people to form good personalities. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: mould, forge, form, shape 均有“使成形”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

第3段

3.1

Nevertheless, it is harmful in some other people's opinions. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: advice, opinion, proposal, suggestion, recommendation, view 均含“意见，建议”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

3.2

They insist that staying indoors will make them stupid and cannot considers affairs thoroughly, which limits their mind. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 limit...mind 在教材中出现过 3 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 consider...affair 在教材中出现过 12 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: affair, business, matter, concern, thing 均含“事情”之意。

[批改提示] consider近义表达有think about/ reflect on/ ponder/ cogitate upon/ contemplate

3.3

Certainly, there is no doubt that they should go outdoors in order to breathe the fresh air, which will do good to their health. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 breathe...air 在教材中出现过 515 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: atmosphere, air, gas 均与“空气”有关。

There is no doubt that 意思是毫无疑问，是四六级经典句型。

3.4

Result from which they can be full of energy and work fruitfully, which will make them face a bright future. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 face...future 在教材中出现过 797 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: bright, brilliant, glowing, radiant, luminous 均含有“明亮的”之意。

be full of在写作中使用的太泛，在某些语境下可考虑换为abound in等。

[批改提示] face的近义表达有confront。

3.5

Besides, it will help them to be outgoing because they can have more time to know about the world, share time with friends and so on, which promotes their ability to communicate with others than the people who kill time indoors. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 promote...ability 在教材中出现过 25 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 kill...time 在教材中出现过 303 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...time 在教材中出现过 34459 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: ability, capacity, capability, genius, talent, competence, faculty, gift, aptitude 均可表示人的“能力，才能”之意。

[批改提示] communicate近义表达有pass on/ convey/ impart/ spread

第4段

4.1

From my point of view, different people have different opinions that depend on ourselves. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...opinion 在教材中出现过 2989 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: depend, rely 后跟on(upon)，均有“依赖，依靠”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

Nowadays,more and more people prefer to stay home kiling time in their spare time.Different people have different views on the stutas that are based on some realities and we should all consider the points of view seriously and take an active part in the team which contribute to improving the situation to the best of our ability.

The majority of people agree that it is necessary to stay indoors.During the time,they are able to do many meaningful things.For instance, they can play basketball, play ping pang, play chess,play golf,play the piano, dance to music,etc,which are used to enjoy themselves.It can not only exercise themselves but also make their life colorful to such an extent. At the same time,they also believe that staying indoors offers themselves more time to do

somethings that they really interest than wander outdoors, in which ways they can prevent themselves from many temptations that maybe make them clime murder to some degree.Therefore,it is helpful for people to form good personalities.

Nevertheless,it is harmful in some other people's opinions.They insist that staying indoors will make them stupid and cannot think affairs thoroughly,which limits their mind.Certainly,it is no doubt that they should go outdoors in order to take a deep fresh breath, which will do good to our health. Result from which they can work fruitfully and face a bright future.Besides,it will help them to be outgoing because they can have more time to know about the world,share time with friends and so on,which contribute their communication with others than they kill time indoors.

From my point of view, everything is different that depends on ourselves. 说明：

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Nowadays,more and more people prefer to stay home kiling killing time in their spare time.Different people have different views on the stutas status that are based on some realities and we should all consider the points of view seriously and take an active part in the team which contribute to improving the situation to the best of our ability.

The majority of people agree that it is necessary to stay indoors.During the time,they are able to do many meaningful things.For instance, they can play basketball, play ping pang, play chess,play golf,play the piano, dance to music,etc,which are is used to enjoy themselves.It can not only exercise themselves but also make their life colorful to such an extent. At the same time,they also believe that staying indoors offers themselves more time to do somethings something that they really interest than wander outdoors, in which ways they can prevent themselves from many temptations that maybe make them clime murder to some degree.Therefore,it is helpful for people to form good personalities.

Nevertheless,it is harmful in some other people's opinions.They insist that staying indoors will make them stupid and cannot think affairs thoroughly,which limits their mind.Certainly,it is no doubt that they should go outdoors in order to take a deep breathe the fresh breath,air, which will do good to our their health. Result from which they can be full of energy andwork fruitfully and fruitfully,which will make them face a bright future.Besides,it will help them to be outgoing because they can have more time to know about the world,share time with friends and so on,which contribute their communication with others than they kill time indoors.

From my point of view, everything is different people have different opinions that depends on ourselves.

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3.黄色是增加部分

Nowadays,more and more people prefer to stay home killing kill time indoors in their spare time.Different people have different views on the status that are based on some realities and we should all consider the points of view seriously and take an active part in the team which contribute to improving the situation to the best of our ability.

The majority of people agree that it is necessary to stay indoors.During the time,they are able to do many meaningful things.For instance, they can play basketball, play ping pang, play chess,play golf,play the piano, dance to music,etc,which is used to enjoy themselves.It can not only exercise themselves but also make their life colorful to such an extent. At the same time,they also believe that staying indoors offers themselves more time to do something that they really interest than wander outdoors, in which ways they can prevent themselves from many temptations that maybe make them clime murder to some degree.Therefore,it is helpful for people to form good personalities.

Nevertheless,it is harmful in some other people's opinions.They insist that staying indoors will make them stupid and cannot think considers affairs thoroughly,which limits theirmind.Certainly,it mind.Certainly,there is no doubt that they should go outdoors in order to breathe the fresh air, which will do good to their health. Result from which they can be full of energy and work fruitfully,which will make them face a bright future.Besides,it will help them to be outgoing because they can have more time to know about the world,share time with friends and so on,which contribute promots their communication ability to communicate with others than they kill time indoors.

From my point of view, different people have different opinions that depends on ourselves.

说明：

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2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Nowadays,more and more people prefer to stay home killing kill time indoors in their spare time.Different people have different views on the status that are based on some realities and we should all consider the points of view seriously and take an active part in the team which contribute to improving the situation to the best of our ability.

The majority of people agree that it is necessary to stay indoors.During the time,they are able to do many meaningful things.For instance, they can play basketball, play ping pang, play chess,play golf,play the piano, dance to music,etc,which is used to enjoy themselves.It can not only exercise themselves but also make their life colorful to such an extent. At the same time,they also believe that staying indoors offers themselves more time to do something that they really interest than wander outdoors, in which ways they can prevent themselves from many temptations that maybe make them clime murder to some degree.Therefore,it is helpful for people to form good personalities.

Nevertheless,it is harmful in some other people's opinions.They insist that staying indoors will make them stupid and cannot think considers affairs thoroughly,which limits theirmind.Certainly,it mind.Certainly,there is no doubt that they should go outdoors in order to breathe the fresh air, which will do good to their health. Result from which they can be full of energy and work fruitfully,which will make them face a bright future.Besides,it will help them to be outgoing because they can have more time to know about the world,share time with friends and so on,which contribute promots their communication ability to communicate with others than they kill time indoors.

From my point of view, different people have different opinions that depends on ourselves.

说明：

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2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Nowadays,more and more people prefer to kill time indoors in their spare time.Different people have different views on the status that are based on some realities and we should all consider the points of view seriously and take an active part in the team which contribute to improving the situation to the best of our ability.

The majority of people agree that it is necessary to stay indoors.During the time,they are able to do many meaningful things.For instance, they can play basketball, play ping pang, play chess,play golf,play the piano, dance to music,etc,which is used to enjoy themselves.It can not only exercise themselves but also make their life colorful to such an extent. At the same time,they also believe that staying indoors offers themselves more time to do something that they really interest than wander outdoors, in which ways they can prevent themselves from many temptations that maybe make them clime murder to some degree.Therefore,it is helpful for people to form good personalities.

Nevertheless,it is harmful in some other people's opinions.They insist that

staying indoors will make them stupid and cannot considers affairs thoroughly,which limits their mind.Certainly,there is no doubt that they should go outdoors in order to breathe the fresh air, which will do good to their health. Result from which they can be full of energy and work fruitfully,which will make them face a bright future.Besides,it will help them to be outgoing because they can have more time to know about the world,share time with friends and so on,which promots promotes their ability to communicate with others than they the people who kill time indoors.

From my point of view, different people have different opinions that depends depend on ourselves.

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二十四

标题：[20xx年12月四级预测]Don’t Rely Too Much on Computers

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

1. 现在许多人越来越依赖电脑;

2. 过分依赖电脑会带来很多问题;

3. 我的看法

范文:Do we rely too much on computers? Yes, we do. Almost everything we do and every aspect of our life is affected by modern technology with computers above all. We use computers in business, public services, education and entertainment.

However, over-reliance on computer may give rise to some problems. One is that people are more likely to make spelling mistakes when they have to handwrite something. Another is that people are so dependent on computers that they have lost the ability to think for themselves. If ―the computer says XYZ‖, then XYZ must be true. If you want to make yourself an idiot, just tell him ―that is what the computer said‖.

In my opinion, computers make our lives easier but we should never rely on them completely. These machines should be used as tool to aid work rather than the only tool. Otherwise, chaos can occur when suddenly our computers crash or what is worse, refuse to take our orders.

自测

Don’t Rely Too Much on Computers

On the one hand, great changes have taken place in recent years, which include the rapid development of our country certainly. There is no doubt that it is becoming more and more convenient for us to live better than before, with which it is possible for us to do everything fruitfully. Since then, computers have

been playing a significant role in our daily life. At the same time, more and more people rely too much on computers such as playing computer games to relax, chatting on the Internet with others, doing business with other companies or being small business owners on the Internet, etc. Computers assistant us in various manners to such an extent. In conclusion, we can't lose computers not at all. If we lose them, we won't keep in close touch with the world and we will come behind sooner or later.

On the other hand, it turns out to be dangerous to rely too much on computers. For instance, many teenagers who lose themselves in the Internet don't keep the learning in mind and are busying playing computer games, which prevents them from being a brilliant person. Meanwhile, it is likely that they will do something illegal like clime murder in order to live in. Certainly, it will do harm to their health by avoid their personalities from coming into being. Therefore, rely too much on computers will make us in danger to some degree really.

In my opinion, any thing has two sides that like coins. It is necessary for us to consider everything seriously so as to conclude objectively. If we use computers properly, we will benefit a lot from it. If not, we will make us in danger, which depends on ourselves eventually.

第1段

1.1

On the one hand, great changes have taken place in recent years, which include the rapid development of our country certainly. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 take...place 在教材中出现过 43 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 include...development 在教材中出现过 271 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: certainly, naturally, of course, surely 均有“肯定地，当然”之意。

[批改提示] country表示“国家”。注意与state的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] 注意country和nation，village区别。

1.2

There is no doubt that it is becoming more and more convenient for us to live better than before, with which it is possible for us to do everything fruitfully. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: doubt, supicion, distrust, uncertainty 均有“怀疑”之意。

[批改提示] possible的近义表达有feasible。

[批改提示] better than在做“优于”讲时，近义表达有superior to。

There is no doubt that 意思是毫无疑问，是四六级经典句型。

1.3

Since then, computers have been playing a significant role in our daily life. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 play...role 在教材中出现过 26773 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: significant, important, momentous 均含“重要的，重大的”

之意。

[批改提示] 注意daily和diurnal区别。

1.4

At the same time, more and more people rely too much on computers such as playing computer games to relax, chatting on the Internet with others, doing business with other companies or being small business owners on the Internet, etc. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 do...business 在教材中出现过 16795 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: affair, business, matter, concern, thing 均含“事情”之意。

[批改提示] relax近义表达有lessen/ reduce/ relieve/ weaken

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

small的近义表达有minor/insignificant等。

1.5

Computers assistant us in various manners to such an extent. [修改]

[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！

[低频警示] computers assistant 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[学习提示] 易混词汇: attitude, air, manner 均含“态度，风度”之意。

1.6

In conclusion, we can't lose computers not at all. [修改]

[低频警示] computers not at all 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[学习提示] 易混词汇: lose, miss, misplace 均有“丢失，遗失”之意。

1.7

If we lose them, we won't keep in close touch with the world and we will come behind sooner or later. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: close, near, nearby 均有“接近的”之意。

[批改提示] 注意close和nearby区别。

[批改提示] keep近义表达有hold/ maintain/ preserve/ sustain

第2段

2.1

On the other hand, it turns out to be dangerous to rely too much on computers.

[修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: believe, trust, confide, rely 均含有“相信，信任”之意。

[批改提示] 注意dangerous和in danger区别。

2.2

For instance, many teenagers who lose themselves in the Internet don't keep the learning in mind and are busying playing computer games, which prevents them from being a brilliant person. [修改]

[低频警示] busy...game 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[低频警示] the learning in mind 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 keep...learning 在教材中出现过 6 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: bright, brilliant, glowing, radiant, luminous 均含有“明亮

的”之意。

[批改提示] keep近义表达有hold/ maintain/ preserve/ sustain

2.3

Meanwhile, it is likely that they will do something illegal like clime murder in order to live in. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: liable, apt, likely, prone, subject 均含“倾向于??的；易于??的”之意。

[批改提示] 注意meantime和meanwhile的区别。

2.4

Certainly, it will do harm to their health by avoid their personalities from coming into being. [修改]

[词语错误] 请检查by avoid their personalities from coming into being，介词后面一般不跟动词原型。

[低频警示] harm to their health by 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[学习提示] 易混词汇: escape, avoid 都有“躲避危险”之意。

2.5

Therefore, rely too much on computers will make us in danger to some degree really. [修改]

[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！

[学习提示] 易混词汇: danger, risk, hazard, menace, peril, threat 均含有“危险，威胁”之意。

第3段

3.1

In my opinion, any thing has two sides that like coins.[修改]

[低频警示] two sides that like coins 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[学习提示] 易混词汇: money, cash, coin, currency 均有“金钱”之意。

3.2

It is necessary for us to consider everything seriously so as to conclude objectively. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: complete, finish, end, close, conclude, terminate, accomplish 均含“结束，完成”之意。

[批改提示] 注意consider和believe区别。

[批改提示] 注意conclude和deduce区别。

[批改提示] consider近义表达有think about/ reflect on/ ponder/ cogitate upon/ contemplate

3.3

If we use computers properly, we will benefit a lot from it. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 benefit...lot 在教材中出现过 36 次

[批改提示] benefit近义表达有help/ improve/ assist/ enhance/ serve

3.4

If not, we will make us in danger, which depends on ourselves eventually. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: danger, risk, hazard, menace, peril, threat 均含有“危险，威胁”之意。

二十五

标题：[20xx年12月四级预测]Should We Help Strangers?

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

1. 有人认为帮助陌生人是一种美德;

2. 有人却认为帮助陌生人会给自己带来麻烦和危险;

3. 我认为??

范文:Helping strangers has always been considered as a treasured virtue of mankind. We need help from others throughout our life, whenever we travel to other places or stay at home. On the other hand, helping others can make us happy. We feel great joy when we are trusted, needed and able to give a hand. However, some people are cautious when it comes to helping strangers. They say that helping others involves risks of getting hurt or cheated. Lending a hand to a stranger often puts us in a vulnerable position for it means trusting someone we do not even know. Moreover, there are times when we have physical limitations. For instance, we can‘t swim but a girl is drowning, what should we do? If we are blind to that limitation, giving a hand would conversely take our life.

In my opinion, we should still offer what we can do to help those needed strangers. Meanwhile, we should beware of getting cheated and use our common sense to tell whether the strangers are real needed people or just professional cheats. Detecting anything unusual, we should defend ourselves or turn to the police.

自测

Should We Help Stranger

With the rapid development of our country, people's opinions on helping strangers have changed to such an extent. At the beginning, it is natural for us to help strangers without doubt. However, as time goes by, it is going to be a thing that we should think twice before we do it. The reason why we do like that is just in order to avoid being cheating.

Although we see assistanting others as virtues traditionally, we have to consider many things when it is time to help someone in need. Result from morality, a lot of people have been cheated seriously who even lose every thing other than their life. Therefore, helping strangers will be at the risk of your life to some degree. It's no wonder that some people regard it as a matter or master which at the cost of our wealth, health, even our life.

As my point of view, any thing will make us in danger that depends on our

thoughts, experience, measures and so on. Only we help strangers advisable, can we not only help the people in need but also help us out. In short, we should see it from two sides like the coin so as to acquire the right conclusion.

第1段

1.1

With the rapid development of our country, people's opinions on helping strangers have changed to such an extent. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 help...stranger 在教材中出现过 30 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: change, alter, vary, convert, modify, transform, turn 均含有“变化，改变”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

[批改提示] country表示“国家”。注意与state的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] help近义表达有support/ assist/ aid

1.2

At the beginning, it is natural for us to help strangers without doubt. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 help...stranger 在教材中出现过 30 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: normal, ordinary, regular, natural, typical 均含“规则的，正常的，正规的”之意。

[批改提示] help近义表达有support/ assist/ aid

1.3

However, as time goes by, it is going to be a thing that we should think twice before we do it. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: consider, think, believe, count, deem, reckon, regard 均含有“认为”之意。

1.4

The reason why we do like that is just in order to avoid being cheating. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: escape, avoid 都有“躲避危险”之意。

[批改提示] reason表示“原因，理由”。注意与cause的区别。详情点击

the reason why 意为：...的原因是...，属于四六级经典高分句型。

第2段

2.1

Although we see assistanting others as virtues traditionally, we have to consider many things when it is time to help someone in need. [修改]

[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！

[拼写错误] assistanting 拼写错误，可替换选项为：assist anting, assist-anting, assistant

[低频警示] others as virtues 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[学习提示] 易混词汇: goodness, integrity, morality, purity, virtue 均含有“美德”之意。

[批改提示] 查看have to和must的区别。

2.2

Result from morality, a lot of people have been cheated seriously who even lose every thing other than their life.[修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 cheat...lot 在教材中出现过 6 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 lose...thing 在教材中出现过 316 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: cheat, deceive, trick, fool 均含有“欺骗”之意。

[批改提示] 查看every thing和everything的区别。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

2.3

Therefore, helping strangers will be at the risk of your life to some degree. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 help...stranger 在教材中出现过 30 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: class, degree, grade, rank 均有“级，等级”之意。

[批改提示] help近义表达有support/ assist/ aid

2.4

It's no wonder that some people regard it as a matter or master which at the cost of our wealth, health, even our life. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: affair, business, matter, concern, thing 均含“事情”之意。

[批改提示] master表示“掌握，精通”。注意与grasp的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] at the cost of在做“以??为代价”讲时，近义表达有at the expense of。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

第3段

3.1

As my point of view, any thing will make us in danger that depends on our thoughts, experience, measures and so on. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: danger, risk, hazard, menace, peril, threat 均含有“危险，威胁”之意。

3.2

Only we help strangers advisable, can we not only help the people in need but also help us out. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 help...stranger 在教材中出现过 30 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 help...people 在教材中出现过 4377 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: stranger, foreigner, alien, immigrant 均有“陌生人，外人”之意。

[高分表达] 高分词组，help sb out意为“帮某人忙”。

[批改提示] help近义表达有support/ assist/ aid

3.3

In short, we should see it from two sides like the coin so as to acquire the right conclusion. [修改]

[低频警示] acquire...conclusion 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[学习提示] 易混词汇: money, cash, coin, currency 均有“金钱”之意。

[批改提示] acquire近义表达有pick up/ get/ grasp/ gain/ attain

With the rapid development economy,people's opinion on helping stranger has changed to such an extent.At the beginning, it is natural for us to help stranger without doubt. However, as time goes by,it is going to be a thing that we should think twice before we do it.The reason why we do like that is just in order to avoid being cheating.

Although we see assitanting others as virtues traditionally, we have to consider many things when it is time to help someone in need.Result from morality, a lot of people have been cheated seriously who even lose every thing other than their life.Therefore, helping stranger will be at the risk of your life to some degree.It's no wonder that some people regard it as a matter or master which at the cost of our wealth,health,even our life.

As my point of view, any thing will make us in danger that depends our minds, experience,measures and so on.Only we can help stranger advisable,can we not only help the people in need but also help us out.In short, we should see it from two sides like the coin so as to acquire the right conclution.

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With the rapid development economy,people's opinion of our country,people's opinions on helping stranger has strangers have changed to such an extent.At the beginning, it is natural for us to help stranger without doubt. However, as time goes by,it is going to be a thing that we should think twice before we do it.The reason why we do like that is just in order to avoid being cheating.

Although we see assitanting assistanting others as virtues traditionally, we have to consider many things when it is time to help someone in need.Result from morality, a lot of people have been cheated seriously who even lose every thing other than their life.Therefore, helping stranger strangers will be at the risk of your life to some degree.It's no wonder that some people regard it as a matter or master which at the cost of our wealth,health,even our life.

As my point of view, any thing will make us in danger that depends on our minds,thoughts, experience,measures and so on.Only we can help stranger advisable,can we not only help the people in need but also help us out.In short, we should see it from two sides like the coin so as to acquire the right conclution. conclusion.

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With the rapid development of our country,people's opinions on helping

strangers have changed to such an extent.At the beginning, it is natural for us to help stranger strangerswithout doubt. However, as time goes by,it is going to be a thing that we should think twice before we do it.The reason why we do like that is just in order to avoid being cheating.

Although we see assistanting others as virtues traditionally, we have to consider many things when it is time to help someone in need.Result from morality, a lot of people have been cheated seriously who even lose every thing other than their life.Therefore, helping strangers will be at the risk of your life to some degree.It's no wonder that some people regard it as a matter or master which at the cost of our wealth,health,even our life.

As my point of view, any thing will make us in danger that depends on our thoughts, experience,measures and so on.Only we help stranger strangers advisable,can we not only help the people in need but also help us out.In short, we should see it from two sides like the coin so as to acquire the right conclusion.

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二十六

标题：考研作文

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Whether food change the way people live or not

From my point of view, with the improvement of the economic strength, it is no doubt that we can live even more wonderfully. Certainly, food which has become easier to prepare obviously changes the way people live.

First of all, because of adequate nutrition, we can work more fruitful and make great progress at the same time. Only in this way, can our country development more rapidly, which turn out to be that great changes have taken place in the way we live. For instance, we have more energy to make rapid progress in the technology, etc. Without doubt, we step into the age of digital information. It makes our country known in the world to such a degree and vice versa. All trades and professions also develop more swiftly. What we can all discover is that our imagination also promotes the advertising industry. Various advertisement arises finally, which increases sales.

Other than that, we are able to save more time to do more meaningful things. Enrich our spare life, for example, playing chess, singing songs, dancing,

running, doing artistic creation and so on. They both expand our information and make us stand out in the modern world, which does good to us to compete and succeed eventually.

Besides, our medical level improves at the same time. At the result of it, some diseases can be cured easily. It rescues many people who aren't necessary to lose their life. And some medicine is cheaper than before.

Except that, the style of clothes is rising all the time.

Last but not least, food plays an important part in our daily life. We should still insist on the development in the food industry.

第1段

1.1

From my point of view, with the improvement of the economic strength, it is no doubt that we can live even more wonderfully. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: doubt, supicion, distrust, uncertainty 均有“怀疑”之意。

[批改提示] strength的近义表达有competitiveness。

1.2

Certainly, food which has become easier to prepare obviously changes the way people live. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: certainly, naturally, of course, surely 均有“肯定地，当然”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

第2段

2.1

First of all, because of adequate nutrition, we can work more fruitful and make great progress at the same time.[修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: adequate, enough, sufficient 均含“足够的，充足的”之意。

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...progress 在教材中出现过 10001 次

2.2

Only in this way, can our country development more rapidly, which turn out to be that great changes have taken place in the way we live. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 can...development 在教材中出现过 3 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 take...place 在教材中出现过 43 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: development, evolution 都表示“发展，进化”之意。 建议将country改为country's。

[批改提示] country表示“国家”。注意与state的区别。详情点击

2.3

For instance, we have more energy to make rapid progress in the technology, etc. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...energy 在教材中出现过 1822 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: energy, force, power, might, strength, vigour 均有“力”之意。

[批改提示] technology表示“工艺，技术”。注意与technique的区别。详情点击

2.4

Without doubt, we step into the age of digital information. [修改]

2.5

It makes our country known in the world to such a degree and vice versa. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 know...country 在教材中出现过 148 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: class, degree, grade, rank 均有“级，等级”之意。

[批改提示] 注意country和nation，village区别。

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

[批改提示] country表示“国家”。注意与state的区别。详情点击

2.6

All trades and professions also develop more swiftly. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: profession, job, occupation, trade, vocation, career, work, employment 均含“职业”之意。

[批改提示] develop近义表达有advance/ progress/ evolve/ thrive/ flourish

2.7

What we can all discover is that our imagination also promotes the advertising industry. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 promote...industry 在教材中出现过 133 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: imagination, fancy, fantasy 均含有“想象，幻想”之意。

[批改提示] promote近义表达有encourage/ further/ boost/ advance

[批改提示] discover指事物客观存在，尤指科学上的发现。注意与find的区别。

2.8

Various advertisement arises finally, which increases sales. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: arise, originate, result 均有“起源，源自”之意。

[批改提示] increase的近义表达有soar。

第3段

3.1

Other than that, we are able to save more time to do more meaningful things.

[修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 save...time 在教材中出现过 841 次

[批改提示] save近义表达有rescue/ release/ liberate/ salvage

[批改提示] able表示“能够??的”。注意与capable的区别。详情点击

3.2

Enrich our spare life, for example, playing chess, singing songs, dancing, running, doing artistic creation and so on. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 do...creation 在教材中出现过 10 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 sing...song 在教材中出现过 42 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: flow, run, stream, pour 均有“流动，涌出”之意。

3.3

They both expand our information and make us stand out in the modern world, which does good to us to compete and succeed eventually. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 expand...information 在教材中出现过 14 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: compete, contend, contest, rival 均可表示“竞争”之意。

[批改提示] expand近义表达有increase/ extend/ multiply/ enlarge

第4段

4.1

Besides, our medical level improves at the same time. [修改]

[低频警示] our medical level 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[学习提示] 易混词汇: improve, better, perfect, refine 均有“改进，改善”之意。

[批改提示] besides表示“除了（包括）”。注意与except的区别。详情点击

4.2

At the result of it, some diseases can be cured easily.[修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 cure...disease 在教材中出现过 399 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: cure, treat, heal, remedy 都有“治疗，医治”之意。

4.3

It rescues many people who aren't necessary to lose their life. [修改]

[低频警示] necessary to lose their life 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 rescue...people 在教材中出现过 244 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: lose, miss, misplace 均有“丢失，遗失”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

[批改提示] 查看who和whoever，whom的区别。

4.4

And some medicine is cheaper than before. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: inexpensive, cheap 均含“便宜的，价廉的”之意。

[批改提示] 查看and用于句首的用法。

第5段

5.1

Except that, the style of clothes is rising all the time. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: clothes, clothing, coat, dress, garment, robe, gown, uniform, costume, suit 均有“衣服，服装”之意。

[批改提示] clothes表示“衣服”。注意与cloth的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] except表示“除了（不包括）”。注意与besides的区别。详情点击

第6段

6.1

Last but not least, food plays an important part in our daily life. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 play...part 在教材中出现过 4525 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: food, provisions, diet 都有“食物”之意。

important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

[批改提示] 注意daily和diurnal区别。

6.2

We should still insist on the development in the food industry. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: development, evolution 都表示“发展，进化”之意。

From my point of view, with the improvement of the economic strength, it is no doubt that we can live even more wonderfully. Certainly,food which has become easier to prepare obviously changes the way people live.

First of all, because of adequate nutrition, we can work more fruitful and make great progress at the same time. Only in this way, can our country development more rapidly,which turn out to be that great changes have taken place in the way we live.For instance, we have more energy to make rapid progress in the technology,etc.Without doubt,we step into the age of digital information. It improves the comprehensive national strength to such degree and vice versa. All trades and professions also develop more swiftly. What we can all discover is that our imagination also promotes the advertising industry.Various advertisement arise finally,which increases sales.

Other than that, we are able to save more time to do more meaningful things. Enrich our spare life, for example, playing chess, singing songs, dancing, running,doing artistic creation and so on.They both expand our information and make us stand out in the modern world,which do good to us to compete and succeed eventually.

Besides, our medical level improves at the same time.At the result of it,difficult miscellaneous diseases can be cured easily.It rescues many people who isn't necessary to lose life.And some medicine are cheaper than before.

Except that,the style of clothes are rising all the time.

Last but not least, food plays an important part in our daily life.we should still insist on the development in food industry.

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From my point of view, with the improvement of the economic strength, it is no doubt that we can live even more wonderfully. Certainly,food which has become easier to prepare obviously changes the way people live.

First of all, because of adequate nutrition, we can work more fruitful and make great progress at the same time. Only in this way, can our country development more rapidly,which turn out to be that great changes have taken place in the way we live.For instance, we have more energy to make rapid progress in the technology,etc.Without doubt,we step into the age of digital information. It improves makes our country known inthe comprehensive national strength world to such a degree and vice versa. All trades and professions also develop more swiftly. What we can all discover is that our imagination also promotes the advertising industry.Various advertisement arise arises finally,which increases

sales.

Other than that, we are able to save more time to do more meaningful things. Enrich our spare life, for example, playing chess, singing songs, dancing, running,doing artistic creation and so on.They both expand our information and make us stand out in the modern world,which do does good to us to compete and succeed eventually.

Besides, our medical level improves at the same time.At the result of it,difficultmiscellaneous diseases can be cured easily.It rescues many people who isn't necessary to lose life.And lifes.And some medicine are is cheaper than before.

Except that,the style of clothes are is rising all the time.

Last but not least, food plays an important part in our daily life.we should still insist on the development in the food industry.

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From my point of view, with the improvement of the economic strength, it is no doubt that we can live even more wonderfully. Certainly,food which has become easier to prepare obviously changes the way people live.

First of all, because of adequate nutrition, we can work more fruitful and make great progress at the same time. Only in this way, can our country development more rapidly,which turn out to be that great changes have taken place in the way we live.For instance, we have more energy to make rapid progress in the technology,etc.Without doubt,we step into the age of digital information. It makes our country known in the world to such a degree and vice versa. All trades and professions also develop more swiftly. What we can all discover is that our imagination also promotes the advertising industry.Various advertisement arises finally,which increases sales.

Other than that, we are able to save more time to do more meaningful things. Enrich our spare life, for example, playing chess, singing songs, dancing, running,doing artistic creation and so on.They both expand our information and make us stand out in the modern world,which does good to us to compete and succeed eventually.

Besides, our medical level improves at the same time.At the result of it,difficult it,somediseases can be cured easily.It rescues many people who isn't aren't necessary to lose lifes.And some medicine is cheaper than before.

Except that,the style of clothes is rising all the time.

Last but not least, food plays an important part in our daily life.we life.We should still insist on the development in the food industry.

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From my point of view, with the improvement of the economic strength, it is no doubt that we can live even more wonderfully. Certainly,food which has become easier to prepare obviously changes the way people live.

First of all, because of adequate nutrition, we can work more fruitful and make great progress at the same time. Only in this way, can our country development more rapidly,which turn out to be that great changes have taken place in the way we live.For instance, we have more energy to make rapid progress in the technology,etc.Without doubt,we step into the age of digital information. It makes our country known in the world to such a degree and vice versa. All trades and professions also develop more swiftly. What we can all discover is that our imagination also promotes the advertising industry.Various advertisement arises finally,which increases sales.

Other than that, we are able to save more time to do more meaningful things. Enrich our spare life, for example, playing chess, singing songs, dancing, running,doing artistic creation and so on.They both expand our information and make us stand out in the modern world,which does good to us to compete and succeed eventually.

Besides, our medical level improves at the same time.At the result of it,some diseases can be cured easily.It rescues many people who aren't necessary to lose lifes.And their life.Andsome medicine is cheaper than before.

Except that,the style of clothes is rising all the time.

Last but not least, food plays an important part in our daily life.We should still insist on the development in the food industry.

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二十七

My resolutions in my four-year university

Different people have different resolutions in their four-year university. As for me, it is also necessary. Therefore, it is significant for me to take full advantage of the time to master enough technology and knowledge.

When I first saw my university, I have fallen in love with it. What make me excited is the scenery and atmosphere in this school. Although I'm not excellent, I will learn everything to the best of my ability. Because I believe my effort can change the situation, which is my best way to face my university and make me stand out in the future.

Besides, it's my dream to be admitted into Peking University. I feel regretful for

the College Entrance Examination, result from which, it turns out to be that I cannot make my dream come true. However, I'm happy to be admitted into Southwest Forestry University so that I can have an opportunity to arrive in YunNan Province. Especially in KunMing, I have a good harvest, which not only includes my improvement in technology but also includes my ways and attitude to face and handle difficulties. In short, I'm grateful for my teachers, friends, classmates and schoolmates, etc.

Certainly, it is always my dream to be admitted into Peking University sooner or later. Nevertheless, I will exert myself to make it before the dream comes true.Meanwhile, it will do good to me to take action and put the plan into practice.When it comes to the plan, it is necessary to make a schedule to such an extent.Last but not least, I should also keep a balanced diet and take exercise regularly.Only in these ways, can I make a success.

第1段

1.1

Different people have different resolutions in their four-year university. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...resolution 在教材中出现过 305 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: different, various, diverse 均含“不同的”之意。详情点击

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

1.2

As for me, it is also necessary. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: indispensable, essential, necessary, requisite 均有“必不可少的，必需的”之意。

1.3

Therefore, it is significant for me to take full advantage of the time to master enough technology and knowledge. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: advantage, benefit, interest, favour, profit, gain 均有“利益，好处”之意。

[批改提示] master表示“掌握，精通”。注意与grasp的区别。详情点击

[批改提示] 注意与merit和good point的区别

[批改提示] technology表示“工艺，技术”。注意与technique的区别。详情点击

第2段

2.1

When I first saw my university, I have fallen in love with it. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: collapse, fall 都含有“倒塌”之意。

2.2

What make me excited is the scenery and atmosphere in this school. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: atmosphere, air, gas 均与“空气”有关。

2.3

Although I'm not excellent, I will learn everything to the best of my ability. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: ability, capacity, capability, genius, talent, competence, faculty, gift, aptitude 均可表示人的“能力，才能”之意。

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

2.4

Because I believe my effort can change the situation, which is my best way to face my university and make me stand out in the future. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 face...university 在教材中出现过 14 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 change...situation 在教材中出现过 422 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: believe, trust, confide, rely 均含有“相信，信任”之意。

[批改提示] face的近义表达有confront。

第3段

3.1

Besides, it's my dream to be admitted into Peking University. [修改]

[批改提示] admit意思为“允许，准许进入”注意与permit区别。详情点击

[批改提示] besides表示“除了（包括）”。注意与except的区别。详情点击

3.2

I feel regretful for the College Entrance Examination, result from which, it turns out to be that I cannot make my dream come true. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: come, arrive, reach 均含“到达”之意。

[批改提示] 批改提示，注意regretful与regrettable的区别。

[批改提示] true的近义表达有accurate 。

3.3

However, I'm happy to be admitted into Southwest Forestry University so that I can have an opportunity to arrive in YunNan Province. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...opportunity 在教材中出现过 11 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: attain, reach, achieve, arrive 均有“达到”之意。

[批改提示] admit意思为“允许，准许进入”注意与permit区别。详情点击

[批改提示] opportunity表示“机会”。注意与chance的区别。详情点击

3.4

Especially in KunMing, I have a good harvest, which not only includes my improvement in technology but also includes my ways and attitude to face and handle difficulties. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 handle...difficulty 在教材中出现过 14 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...harvest 在教材中出现过 68 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 include...improvement 在教材中出现过 102 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: attitude, air, manner 均含“态度，风度”之意。

[批改提示] technology表示“工艺，技术”。注意与technique的区别。详情点击

3.5

In short, I'm grateful for my teachers, friends, classmates and schoolmates, etc.

[修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: friend, mate, acquaintance, pal 都有“朋友”之意。

第4段

4.1

Certainly, it is always my dream to be admitted into Peking University sooner or later. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: certainly, naturally, of course, surely 均有“肯定地，当然”之意。

[批改提示] admit意思为“允许，准许进入”注意与permit区别。详情点击

4.2

Nevertheless, I will exert myself to make it before the dream comes true. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: come, arrive, reach 均含“到达”之意。

[批改提示] true的近义表达有accurate 。

4.3

Meanwhile, it will do good to me to take action and put the plan into practice. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 put...plan 在教材中出现过 859 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: act, action, deed, operation, performance 均含“行为，行动”之意。

[批改提示] 注意meantime和meanwhile的区别。

4.4

When it comes to the plan, it is necessary to make a schedule to such an extent.

[修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...schedule 在教材中出现过 112 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: come, arrive, reach 均含“到达”之意。

4.5

Last but not least, I should also keep a balanced diet and take exercise regularly.

[修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 take...exercise 在教材中出现过 53 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: drill, exercise, practice, training, discipline 都有“练习，训练，锻炼”之意。

[批改提示] keep近义表达有hold/ maintain/ preserve/ sustain

4.6

Only in these ways, can I make a success. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...success 在教材中出现过 252 次

Different people have different resolutions in their four-year university.As for me,it is also necessary.Therefore,it is significant for me to take full advantage of the time to master enough technology and knowledge.

When I first saw my university,I have fell in love with it.Certainly, what make me excited is that the scenery and atmosphere in this school.Although I'm not excellent,I will learn everything to the best of my ability.Because I believe my effort can change the situation,which is my best way to face my university and make me stand out in the future.

Besides,it's my dream to be admmitted

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Different people have different resolutions in their four-year university.As for me,it is also necessary.Therefore,it is significant for me to take full advantage of the time to master enough technology and knowledge.

When I first saw my university,I have fell in love with it.Certainly, what make me excited is that the scenery and atmosphere in this school.Although I'm not excellent,I will learn everything to the best of my ability.Because I believe my effort can change the situation,which is my best way to face my university and make me stand out in the future.

Besides,it's my dream to be admmitted

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Different people have different resolutions in their four-year university.As for me,it is also necessary.Therefore,it is significant for me to take full advantage of the time to master enough technology and knowledge.

When I first saw my university,I have fell fallen in love with it.Certainly, what it.What make me excited is that are the scenery and atmosphere in this school.Although I'm not excellent,I will learn everything to the best of my ability.Because I believe my effort can change the situation,which is my best way to face my university and make me stand out in the future.

Besides,it's my dream to be admmitted admitted into Peking University.I feel regretful for my College Entrance Examination,result from which,it turns out to be that I cannot make my dream come true.However,I'm happy to be admitted into Southwest Forestry University so that I can have an opportunity to arrive in YunNan Province. Especially in KunMing,I have a good harvest,which not only includes my improvement in technology but also includes my change in characters and both my ways and attitude to face and handle difficulties.In short,I'm grateful for my teachers,friends,classmates and schoolmates,etc. Certainly,it is always my dream to be admitted into Peking University sooner or later.Nevertheless,I will exert myself to make it before the dream comes true.Meanwhile,it will do good to me to take fruitful measures and put the plan into practice.When it comes to the the plan, it is necessary to stick the schedule to such an extent.Last but not least, I should also keep a balanced diet and take exrcise regularly.Only in these ways,can I make success.

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2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Different people have different resolutions in their four-year university.As for me,it is also necessary.Therefore,it is significant for me to take full advantage of the time to master enough technology and knowledge.

When I first saw my university,I have fallen in love with it.What make me excited are is the scenery and atmosphere in this school.Although I'm not excellent,I will learn everything to the best of my ability.Because I believe my effort can change the situation,which is my best way to face my university and make me stand out in the future.

Besides,it's my dream to be admitted into Peking University.I feel regretful for my College Entrance Examination,result from which,it turns out to be that I cannot make my dream come true.However,I'm happy to be admitted into Southwest Forestry University so that I can have an opportunity to arrive in YunNan Province. Especially in KunMing,I have a good harvest,which not only includes my improvement in technology but also includes my changechanges in characters and both my ways and attitude to face and handle difficulties.In short,I'm grateful for my teachers,friends,classmates and schoolmates,etc. Certainly,it is always my dream to be admitted into Peking University sooner or later.Nevertheless,I will exert myself to make it before the dream comes true.Meanwhile,it will do good to me to take fruitful measures and put the plan into practice.When it comes to the the plan, it is necessary to stick obey the schedule to such an extent.Last but not least, I should also keep a balanced diet and take exrcise regularly.Only in these ways,can I make a success.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Different people have different resolutions in their four-year university.As for me,it is also necessary.Therefore,it is significant for me to take full advantage of the time to master enough technology and knowledge.

When I first saw my university,I have fallen in love with it.What make me excited is the scenery and atmosphere in this school.Although I'm not excellent,I will learn everything to the best of my ability.Because I believe my effort can change the situation,which is my best way to face my university and make me stand out in the future.

Besides,it's my dream to be admitted into Peking University.I feel regretful for my theCollege Entrance Examination,result from which,it turns out to be that I cannot make my dream come true.However,I'm happy to be admitted into Southwest Forestry University so that I can have an opportunity to arrive in

YunNan Province. Especially in KunMing,I have a good harvest,which not only includes my improvement in technology but also includes my changes in characters and my ways and attitude to face and handle difficulties.In short,I'm grateful for my teachers,friends,classmates and schoolmates,etc.

Certainly,it is always my dream to be admitted into Peking University sooner or later.Nevertheless,I will exert myself to make it before the dream comes true.Meanwhile,it will do good to me to take measures and put the plan into practice.When it comes to the plan, it is necessary to obey the schedule to such an extent.Last but not least, I should also keep a balanced diet and take exrcise exercise regularly.Only in these ways,can I make a success.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Different people have different resolutions in their four-year university.As for me,it is also necessary.Therefore,it is significant for me to take full advantage of the time to master enough technology and knowledge.

When I first saw my university,I have fallen in love with it.What make me excited is the scenery and atmosphere in this school.Although I'm not excellent,I will learn everything to the best of my ability.Because I believe my effort can change the situation,which is my best way to face my university and make me stand out in the future.

Besides,it's my dream to be admitted into Peking University.I feel regretful for the College Entrance Examination,result from which,it turns out to be that I cannot make my dream come true.However,I'm happy to be admitted into Southwest Forestry University so that I can have an opportunity to arrive in YunNan Province. Especially in KunMing,I have a good harvest,which not only includes my improvement in technology but also includes my ways and attitude to face and handle difficulties.In short,I'm grateful for my teachers,friends,classmates and schoolmates,etc.

Certainly,it is always my dream to be admitted into Peking University sooner or later.Nevertheless,I will exert myself to make it before the dream comes true.Meanwhile,it will do good to me to take measures and put the plan into practice.When it comes to the plan, it is necessary to obey the make a schedule to such an extent.Last but not least, I should also keep a balanced diet and take exercise regularly.Only in these ways,can I make a success.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分

Different people have different resolutions in their four-year university.As for

me,it is also necessary.Therefore,it is significant for me to take full advantage of the time to master enough technology and knowledge.

When I first saw my university,I have fallen in love with it.What make me excited is the scenery and atmosphere in this school.Although I'm not excellent,I will learn everything to the best of my ability.Because I believe my effort can change the situation,which is my best way to face my university and make me stand out in the future.

Besides,it's my dream to be admitted into Peking University.I feel regretful for the College Entrance Examination,result from which,it turns out to be that I cannot make my dream come true.However,I'm happy to be admitted into Southwest Forestry University so that I can have an opportunity to arrive in YunNan Province. Especially in KunMing,I have a good harvest,which not only includes my improvement in technology but also includes my ways and attitude to face and handle difficulties.In short,I'm grateful for my teachers,friends,classmates and schoolmates,etc.

Certainly,it is always my dream to be admitted into Peking University sooner or later.Nevertheless,I will exert myself to make it before the dream comes true.Meanwhile,it will do good to me to take measures action and put the plan into practice.When it comes to the plan, it is necessary to make a schedule to such an extent.Last but not least, I should also keep a balanced diet and take exercise regularly.Only in these ways,can I make a success.

说明：

1.显示的内容是本版本跟上一版本的比较，第一版本无比较

2.灰色是删除部分

3.黄色是增加部分