钻石卡学员超级作文模板

☆一种事物或现象（正面意义倾向）

As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述图画).The most striking feature is (图画重点信

息)。The status of the phenomenon as the focus of public concern mainly results from its profound

influence on individuals, and on our society.

As is symbolically revealed in the above picture(s), the deep implication profoundly indicates

that (从图画提炼出的核心信息

)，which is important and fundamental to anyone who undertakes

great deeds. Nothing is more beneficial than (从图画提炼出的核心词) to overcome our defects

and improve our efficiency.

From what have been discussed above, it is, therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken. On the one hand, we should keep learning more to acquire base. On the other

hand, it is demanding for us to take part in various activities to prove ourselves and strengthen

ourselves. However, practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it and

practice it, can you make it better in the near future.

☆ 一种事物或现象（负面意义倾向）

What is depicted in the picture(s) seems ridiculous but thought—provoking on second thought, which has attracted extensive attention of the society. The most striking feature is

that…… (图画的重点信息). There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should

be given deep consideration

Though with various reasons and forms, from the perspective of the essence, the phenomenon(尽量换成图画中提炼出的中心词) reflected by the picture(s) originates from the

disguised shadows of individual desires and the loophole of our law system. Thus, we should seek

the solutions through setting foot on these aspects. Otherwise, we may not control this trend, and

some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future.

From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures

should be taken to (联系主题

). On the one hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of

this point. On the other hand, we are supposed to be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the

laws. Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one, our efforts will eventually

pay off.

 

第二篇：20xx年钻石卡学员作文模板范文

20xx年11月6号作文精讲课后作业

特供海文作文精讲数码班同学参考使用

墨东博

1-1主题宽泛型

As is vividly betrayed in the picture in front of us, it is like a bridge that bridges various gaps to be a road. Just like being conveyed in the set of drawing, the fact that the bridge stands for communication and the gully for misunderstanding among people nowadays profoundly indicates that communication plays an increasingly crucial role and becomes perhaps the only effective approach to disputes, with the world being considerably diversified.

To the popular mind, nevertheless, it is immediately assumed that when communication is argued , it is still communication among the old and the young generation .that is meant. In order to account for what has been mentioned before, several causes should be put forward. On one hand, always rebellious , young people are seemingly turning to be rather odd while their parents are quite embarrassed ,or even unbearable to see all these offbeat behaviors. On the other hand, children may deem parents to be conserved whereas parents may assume that the young are getting wild. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example discussed below, 例证.Consequently, no issue in china is basic to

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individual and national survival prospect as communication, though people bear colorful thoughts, behaviors and customs.

Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive some positive meanings from this thought-provoking picture. It is, therefore , necessary that efforts be made to communicate. To begin with, actually, given effective communication, parents will understand that young people are not mad but merely seeking for an identity in this colorful world and the young will reconsider their behavior and accept reasonable suggestions from their parents. And above all, the best way to communication is to learn to be a little more tolerant and treat difference as variety instead of discord and rebellion. Only by undergoing these measures , can we establish the society in which people live with good intentions toward others, which ,as we know, has just gone to the heart of building the society in harmony.

1-2主题之大而言之型

国有企业

As is vividly depicted in the picture , with a clear cracking sound , two bowls clashed into each other , in which the shinning one keeps its integrity , whereas the shabby one breaks into pieces. Just like being symbolically revealed in the set of drawing, the intact bowl, as a symbol of foreigned-invested companies ,confronts the broken

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bowl representing the state-owned companies, with collision standing for fierce competition. It is hard to overstate that our state-owned companies entailed reform especially after china’s entry into WTO.

To the popular mind , it is immediately assumed that when reform in state-owned companies is argued ,it is car industry that is meant. To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon , several points should be figured out. For one thing, some of car industries once enjoyed the glorious past , They have ,however, gradually lost their market shares when soly –invested companies were sweeping into domestic market. For another , in order to turn the corner ,the leaders of them should adopt the policy of reform such as acquisition, re-engineering and introduction of advanced technology and concepts of management. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below, No 1 Motor Vehicle Plant has witnessed from predicament to rejuvenation through none other than effective steps mentioned above. Therefore ,no issue is as critical to individual and national survival and prosperity as reform in state-owned companies.

Accordingly , it is vital for us to derive some positive meanings from this thought-provoking picture. It is ,hence, necessary that efforts be made to follow the spirit of reform concerning state-owned

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companies. On one hand, the government should make law to perfect irrational rules and regulations being visible in reform process. On the other hand, the leaders of state-owned companies should enhance the awareness of reform .Only by undergoing these steps ,can our more state-owned companies become members of Top 500 in the world, which, indeed, has gone to the heart of maintaining good momentum of national economy growth.

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低碳生活 Low-carbon Life

Direction： For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of “Low-carbon Life”。 You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below：

1、低碳生活方式受到人们的欢迎

2、低碳生活的意义

3、我们应该……

Recently， low-carbon becomes a high-frequency and fashionable word which gets the greatest concern in the world. Low-carbon life means a kind of lifestyle in which people do their best to reduce energy consumption and carbon greenhouse gas emissions.

It is of vital importance for the whole world to practice the

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low-carbon lifestyle. Firstly， our natural resources and energy are limited; therefore， it is absolutely necessary for us to save and protect them. Secondly， in order to protect our environment from serious greenhouse effect， we need a low-carbon emission. It is low-carbon life that enables our next generations to live a better and superior life.

What we should bear in mind is that the earth is common home. Thus， every one is well advised to practice this lifestyle and there are several ways for us to do this. Firstly， every one is expected to cultivate their awareness of saving energy. Then， we are also hoped to help our families and friends to live a low-carbon life. Only by doing so can we hope to create a world where all humans enjoy a clean and tidy environment. （185words）

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On the first place, a no-car day is supposed to set up every week in our school. Because cars not only cause serious air pollution but also waste energy. On no-car day, neither students nor teachers are allowed to drive to school. Meanwhile, just walk, jump, cycle or run. Use our legs and enjoy the fun.

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On the second place, we had best not use plastic bags any more. No one can stand the “white pollution”. So, it is wise to use bags which can be reused again and again.

Finally, one thing that we should keep in mind: every big thing comes from the subtle. Therefore, as students, we ought to turn out the lights the moment we leave, turn off the tap in time, and reuse our textbook and so on.

All in all, it weighs greatly for all of us to put the low carbon lifestyle into practice. Just set our mind to these: no-car day, no plastic bags, and no waste. Let’s do it now

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